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La historia va por un buen camino, este fic tiene mucho o pordecirlo demasiado potencial donde genera al espectador un sentimiento de querer saber como seguirá desarrollándose la trama le doy un 💯 [img=exp]
I just love the story. It feels so original even though it's in the Avatar universe. Author, please don't ever drop this. It has a lot of potential and I'm excited in which direction the story will go.
13 chapters deep and I can say this is rather decent. The quality seems to be without fault, and the character is developing in a favourable way. My single lament is I have binged read the available chapters. If this novel continues in the fashion in which it is currently progressing then I foresee a most interesting novel.
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Well twelve chapters in and it's pretty good. Mc's backstory is a breath of fresh air and I like the way the story seems to be heading. A chi bending Lightning user is a new concept that defiantly peaked my interest. His end game move should be something like the Raikages Lightning armor.
This is really good. Plot and story is moving quite nicely. ................ Only negative is the update rate but other than that its good..
Definitely a series I want to continue. mc woguk-blooded is someone who knows what to do and how to do it. Since the universe is different from the main events, I think his relationship with Katara is quite pleasant and almost mandatory after the events. Besides, it would be a shame if you went to the harem. Please keep writing, so we can read. thanks
the story is really well made, but the fact that the author has has multiple stories really ruins the updat schedule. I mean just take a look at when the current chapters were posted. Everything about the story is good except for this, but since having new chapters to read is kinda the most important thing to a story i expect this to not end very well
I can only hope this continues, with how many fanfics the author has to juggle, I don't know how frequently this would update. ............................
interesting so far. looking forward to it. avatar fanfics are the best. decent grammar. kinda shallow character development so far, though. only 4 chapters, so we'll have to see, but I've read the author's young justice fanfic and it also doesn't have good character development. Still pretty entertaining, though.
I just love the story. It feels so original even though it's in the Avatar universe. Author, please don't ever drop this. It has a lot of potential and I'm excited in which direction the story will go.
love it a lot can't wait for more chapter in the future and more amazing novels [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Why is his so good just why and why are there not more chapters .Author San you'r killing me.
La historia va por un buen camino, este fic tiene mucho o pordecirlo demasiado potencial donde genera al espectador un sentimiento de querer saber como seguirá desarrollándose la trama le doy un 💯 [img=exp]
I just love the story. It feels so original even though it's in the Avatar universe. Author, please don't ever drop this. It has a lot of potential and I'm excited in which direction the story will go.
13 chapters deep and I can say this is rather decent. The quality seems to be without fault, and the character is developing in a favourable way. My single lament is I have binged read the available chapters. If this novel continues in the fashion in which it is currently progressing then I foresee a most interesting novel.
I love it Uhfstyesgfgkhckhgfihgfuteajgfdutrdtfgfkhgdkhgdoutfiutfuylgoiygjlcmcmbgxkhfsiyretulrultfkjgdkyrdyorfljgfiyfdiygfljgdkhgdkhfdjlgfjlgfkhtduotfjltfojgdyitdiyrdiytrotfihgdijgfouyruoutfoutfu
Well twelve chapters in and it's pretty good. Mc's backstory is a breath of fresh air and I like the way the story seems to be heading. A chi bending Lightning user is a new concept that defiantly peaked my interest. His end game move should be something like the Raikages Lightning armor.
This is really good. Plot and story is moving quite nicely. ................ Only negative is the update rate but other than that its good..
Definitely a series I want to continue. mc woguk-blooded is someone who knows what to do and how to do it. Since the universe is different from the main events, I think his relationship with Katara is quite pleasant and almost mandatory after the events. Besides, it would be a shame if you went to the harem. Please keep writing, so we can read. thanks
the story is really well made, but the fact that the author has has multiple stories really ruins the updat schedule. I mean just take a look at when the current chapters were posted. Everything about the story is good except for this, but since having new chapters to read is kinda the most important thing to a story i expect this to not end very well
I can only hope this continues, with how many fanfics the author has to juggle, I don't know how frequently this would update. ............................
interesting so far. looking forward to it. avatar fanfics are the best. decent grammar. kinda shallow character development so far, though. only 4 chapters, so we'll have to see, but I've read the author's young justice fanfic and it also doesn't have good character development. Still pretty entertaining, though.
I just love the story. It feels so original even though it's in the Avatar universe. Author, please don't ever drop this. It has a lot of potential and I'm excited in which direction the story will go.
love it a lot can't wait for more chapter in the future and more amazing novels [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Why is his so good just why and why are there not more chapters .Author San you'r killing me.