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Need More Please. Good book I liked the intro. I even liked the au bit about the dark spirits and negative emotions. The way u made him the counter avatar was really good. I didn't see it coming and was pleasantly surprised. But please countinue to make more chapters.
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Cool read ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎
Es una buena novela con una nueva perspectiva de lo que pudo ser la historia del avatar aunque ya no sean las mismas relaciones aún así podemos entender las emociones que pueden tener los protagonistas y lo que podemos llegar a pensar en base al cambio
Amazing fanfic, the only minus is the update stability, can't wait for more chapters. ....................................................................
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I understand most things the mc do my problem ( yes I am nit picky) is that there enought reason to belive that the things he did should not work For ex katara trusting the mc way to fast ( in my opinion) for thing that honestly should not happen Or the mc beating any earth bender 2: to me the mc is aggront but not as badly
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Just wanna say you’re an amazing author and this is a great story wish there’d be a Patreon
5☆ I trust this author & story is good quality, interesting, entertaining & fun. But i pray author complete the story beautifully without dropping it. Nothing to say cause it becomes spoiler. But will give a proper review after the story is completed.
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So far the story is great. It seems that its rating isn’t higher due to the chapter consistency early on, but that seems to be corrected now. The main character, while still somewhat mysterious, is interesting to follow. The abilities of the main character are inspired by Sasuke as well. Keep up the good work, Author!
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Honestly, it’s a pretty great story compared to all the other ATLA fanfics on here. The only complaint I genuinely have would be the update stability. Other than that, great work! NEXT CHAPTER PLS!
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Among the decent tier fanfics on WN this is about average. cool story kinda original origin but the MC is the average, typical MC who straddles the neutral moral ground, claiming there is no good or evil even tho the stories framework has good and evil literally built into it. he takes his own path. makes for boring MCs usually. he even bagged Katara to make sure his superiority is shown if not said. pretty typical and cliche but overall still can be entertaining. a positive is that the author takes liberties with the timeline and plot which is impressive for any writer to do without ruining the integrity of the original. id give the story a shot before judging.
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loved the story keep going it is very original and has a lot of potential...................................................................................................................................
~Really enjoying it so far~ [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This fic passed the G.E.N. test: - Good grammar - Entertaining - No harem I recommend this as the plot is original as well instead of your typical Atla SI just following the gaang around.
bro this THIS STORY is amazing writing quality is amazing the MC is good the plot got me HOOKED overall ME LIKE... ME WANT...MORRRE!!!!
If the author is to lazy to write a proper synopsis I am to lazy to read the fic. I don't say that to be mean, but come on, I just want to know the basic before I put my time into reading this. Giving 3 stars because I think giving just 1 would be unfair.
sad that a good fanfic will be dropped or maybe put on hiatus for a long time because of all the negativity he gets for writing what THE AUTHOR wants
Need More Please. Good book I liked the intro. I even liked the au bit about the dark spirits and negative emotions. The way u made him the counter avatar was really good. I didn't see it coming and was pleasantly surprised. But please countinue to make more chapters.
Revelar Spoiler Cool read ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎
Es una buena novela con una nueva perspectiva de lo que pudo ser la historia del avatar aunque ya no sean las mismas relaciones aún así podemos entender las emociones que pueden tener los protagonistas y lo que podemos llegar a pensar en base al cambio
Amazing fanfic, the only minus is the update stability, can't wait for more chapters. ....................................................................
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I understand most things the mc do my problem ( yes I am nit picky) is that there enought reason to belive that the things he did should not work For ex katara trusting the mc way to fast ( in my opinion) for thing that honestly should not happen Or the mc beating any earth bender 2: to me the mc is aggront but not as badly
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Just wanna say you’re an amazing author and this is a great story wish there’d be a Patreon
5☆ I trust this author & story is good quality, interesting, entertaining & fun. But i pray author complete the story beautifully without dropping it. Nothing to say cause it becomes spoiler. But will give a proper review after the story is completed.
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So far the story is great. It seems that its rating isn’t higher due to the chapter consistency early on, but that seems to be corrected now. The main character, while still somewhat mysterious, is interesting to follow. The abilities of the main character are inspired by Sasuke as well. Keep up the good work, Author!
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Honestly, it’s a pretty great story compared to all the other ATLA fanfics on here. The only complaint I genuinely have would be the update stability. Other than that, great work! NEXT CHAPTER PLS!
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Among the decent tier fanfics on WN this is about average. cool story kinda original origin but the MC is the average, typical MC who straddles the neutral moral ground, claiming there is no good or evil even tho the stories framework has good and evil literally built into it. he takes his own path. makes for boring MCs usually. he even bagged Katara to make sure his superiority is shown if not said. pretty typical and cliche but overall still can be entertaining. a positive is that the author takes liberties with the timeline and plot which is impressive for any writer to do without ruining the integrity of the original. id give the story a shot before judging.
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loved the story keep going it is very original and has a lot of potential...................................................................................................................................
~Really enjoying it so far~ [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This fic passed the G.E.N. test: - Good grammar - Entertaining - No harem I recommend this as the plot is original as well instead of your typical Atla SI just following the gaang around.
bro this THIS STORY is amazing writing quality is amazing the MC is good the plot got me HOOKED overall ME LIKE... ME WANT...MORRRE!!!!
If the author is to lazy to write a proper synopsis I am to lazy to read the fic. I don't say that to be mean, but come on, I just want to know the basic before I put my time into reading this. Giving 3 stars because I think giving just 1 would be unfair.
sad that a good fanfic will be dropped or maybe put on hiatus for a long time because of all the negativity he gets for writing what THE AUTHOR wants