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"During his training trip, Naruto is given a scroll which holds the secrets in how to seduce and ensnare women. A scroll he uses at first on the women and kunoichi around him but soon on the Shinobi..."
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Although, I have written system in the title...but its actually a scroll, please mind that!
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Escreva uma avaliaçãoAre you the lemon sage and is this the copy paste of eroninja or is there any changes in this ?................................….........................
Yeah I remember reading this long ago, someone else added all 169 chapters (It's actually only 99 chapters, but some of these chapters have more than character limit that webnovel restricts for each chapter, such as chapter 13 with 22k words) and they did this 2 years ago. It goes by Eroninja on this platform and they even labeled/named each chapter, I would recommend that if you are going to reupload it (because you say you are the original writer of this fanfic) I would suggest making sure the title for each chapter is not just labeled chapter 1/chapter 2/etc. Second suggestion would be maybe spellcheck, like try out MicroSpell, you use "Danzou" 503 times, but Danzō is commonly just spelled Danzo. I know many people that spell ō as ou and many who just drop the u. You even spelt Hanzo without the u, so Danzō should get the same treatment with his name...
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Wowww!!! With each chapter, I am left at a much more awaited cliffhanger...I just can't get enough of the characters n feeling segs between them...am bored waiting so leaving a review till then hehe bwahahaha!!!!
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there's more completed version of this that goes by the name eroninja, also in this platform. although there're some jumbled chapter, at least it's here. although they're not completed too (i read in other site, 100 chapters in the original)
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Hello Ppl! I just noticed that, as one of my comments mentioned about the other name of my story which I had on ficwad but my acc was blocked there...So I thought the reader was talking about that website but I recently found out that someone has already uploaded my story on this platform without my permission...Now, I am confused as to what to do since this is purely bull_hit kinda thing to do. Anyways, I am still going to upload it completely and then start with a brand new series...atleast these ppl can't copy that.
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