Prodigy With Alternate Multiverse Chat Group System

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ShadowKatake

Review from Katake Kage Zenchi himself. This is a short guide of what to expect from this novel. Allen Walker (MC) might be powerful but if you have read my other novels, you will know that he is weak when compared to other Semi-Supreme Beings. The power level of all my novels is quite high and it might even be higher than dbz since one of my mcs (Lolicon Shota Cultivator With Soul Fetish or also known as Seref Zenchi), can destroy a universe with just a slash of his sword. For those who are wondering, yes, this novel's world background is inspired from Danganronpa. Of course, the <Supreme> are much more powerful than the <Ultimate> in Danganronpa. The <Supreme Hacker> can hack reality itself while the <Ultimate Hacker> in Danganronpa cannot. There are references in this novel and those are mostly from my favorite vocaloid musics cuz why not? For updating stability: I entered this in WSA so expect daily updates and if I don't update, then either the timer is set wrong or I am currently under tribulation or also known as an illness by you mortals. Character Design: what can I say other than most of my mcs have a mental illness or two? especially Allen who has an inferiority complex at the start of the novel. Is this a crossover? The answer is yes and no. Yes because you will encounter mcs from my other novel. No because the mcs are not from cannon except for Seref Zenchi. If you have any other questions, you can comment in this review and I will answer it. Also, not giving myself five stars since I believe that nothing is perfect. Only Katake Kage Zenchi, my main body, can be deemed as perfect.

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IamMountTai

CRITICAL REVIEW- Read 107 Chapters. It's well, an unique story. It feels very wish-fulfilment, power fantasy, somewhat fanfic-like and uh the author's self-insertion shows. However, that isn't a bad thing. I only point these out because the story has a great degree in this regard. There are many such stories out there, but usually its something we acquiesce and use to. In this story, it's pretty glaring and maybe too far? But having said that, I hope people are not discouraged from reading it. It's enjoyable and has a story going for it. From what I've read, it's more of a slice of life about quirky, extremely powerful cast wandering around the universe. I suppose there will be very serious stuff occurring later in the story, but the pacing of the story is somewhat slow so it will take a while for that point. As for the mc of the story, he is okay. I don't like him, but I don't dislike him either. He just got lucky and was able to obtain an extremely powerful ability which makes him SEEMINGLY omnipotent. As a result, I find it hard to see him struggle later along the line. Yes he still can be considered an 'Ant' in the grand scheme of things (Because powers scaling is at the universal/omniversal/multiversal.) But the mc is like a walking Gary Stu and sure he has some internal dilemma which is his inferority complex but that can only do so much when you already basically a god. Not to mention the execution of the story shows that you shouldn't expect much in that regard to show development through his weaknesses. The main characters in the story are fine and I do like them. Nothing much to say, but I do feel they could've been fleshed much better. It's comedy so don't any seriousness. IA, however, was done quite poorly imo since her creation I feel has a lot to do with the Mc's internal issues. The story has a tone of references to other works and memes and what not. The characters all appear to understand these things as well, which kinda questions the realism considering each of their backgrounds. But yeah, don't take it seriously. It's done in a way like Gintama which of course is amazing. It's just par for the course. Hence, it may kill your immersion during the early parts of the story, it would just become the norm that you would enjoy (that is if you understood them). The writing quality is surprisingly good in terms of punctuation and grammar. Hardly any mistakes. Better than most webnovel quality. There was also surprising amount of detail when it came to the explanation of the universal structure. The author definitely takes that part seriously after all he claims to be Katake Kage Zenchi himself. His universe or whatever, naturally when it came to this part its all sorted well. Quite good. On another side, there were also many things that made me go 'Hmm...' I wasn't sure how I felt about things. For instance, a few times seemingly reiterating that the mc wouldn't show mercy to woman and such. Another time was bringing up the point specifically about a Chinese protagonist to which the whole cast was very reluctant to meet. I can definitely see the author's frustration of him having read many works as he tends to point out flaws in order to show that his work isn't like this, though the latter was shown as a way to point fun of. The point I'm trying to get with is that the author I feel doesn't execute this well despite the slice of life element it has. The jokes or points he mentions kinda seem immaturely executed. As a result of all of the above, I find it kind of hard to say about my feelings of this novel. It was a unique experience that was for sure. I enjoyed it but there were many instances that made me raise my brow. It's not like other novels don't make me do that, but the degree in this one is quite much. It's still a good novel, which you may wish to take a shot with if you enjoy a comedic slice of life of a powerful cast as they travel the universe unbound. There is potential. That is why my score of rating this which is 4.4/5 is quite high despite me seemingly complaining. Though I'm pretty lenient with reviews. No shipping here! Since it doesn't seem like the author intends to have multiple love interests. Not that it's a bad thing with how the author is developing the story. Just my preference.

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Azathoth2

5 Star ✨ for no harem . .

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Spelloyal

The writing quality is good, but the story itself is bad. The MC is a true Gary Stu and his power is to have all the powers at the maximum level, he is just not the strongest of the multipurpose because his level is currently just destroying planets. The story in general is boring, it looks like a generic OP MC fanfic chat group, the kind with literally nothing special, only because it's not a fanfic this story gets even worse oois we don't have interesting characters from other fandons appearing. If this was the first OP mc story I've read I might end up liking it, but as this is just one mks and without anything special it ends up becoming a boring read for those who have read others of the genre.

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Rita_Chioma_9038

Just a few chapters and still interesting. writing Quality... Very good. mistakes are limited and almost absent which is an enormous push to read further Story development... I love the pace and how intriguing the beginning was. Character Design... The ML is very relatable and reminded me a lot of someone who scorned herself a lot in real life. I love the character building esp for Allen. updating stability... top notch. quick updates and I love it. World background... I love this one as well. world background isn't really something that turns me off from a book. You've done an amazing job so far, keep it up.

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Lili101

Good book. Not my favorite, but good. Was interesting recommendation by a friend. can't wait for more chapters, not sure if the author has dropped this or he has just started updating this book. can't even vote power stones, don't know what's wrong.

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ViolettAbyss

This Novel offers a new unique approach to the group chat plot. Writing quality is very good without any noticable grammar mistakes which presents itself well with the stable chapter updates. All of the Characters are fleshed out with different kind of personalities. They share similar goals aligning them all to together making this novel not only centred around the MC. The World Background is yet to be uncoverd in later chapters but so far it's looking good. 9/10

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Unsightly

Now this book is awesome for starterrs , I'm surprised that I hadn't seen this before but my homepage of webnovel, It provides a great new concept of People having talents and 1 boy was lucky enough to have Talent that encompassed them all, and on top of that he got admin rights in a chat group What's best about this story is the multi verses the author presents are completely original (or it could be something I haven't seen pls tell me in a reply) ANYWAYS this book is really nice and I love it. Please like so new readers can see this and read the book too :D

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CephasWRITES

okay okay, this is amazing, it's different, the approach to the system genre is very different and I find that unique, though the chapters are still few it'd be nice to see the novel create that uniqueness for itself, which will separate it from other novels. Most times its easy for novels that start off as unique to just join the trend.

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Ariel_x

Let me start by saying, the approach of the book into the system world is quite insightful. It does not only create a thrilling effect but it is also adventurous. Writing Quality: Good writing quality that the author put to use with less mistakes which provides a better attitude towards reading the book. Story Development: The book has an orderly arranged plot, there are no jumbled paragraphs but it follows an interesting pattern that makes you want to read further. Character Design: The ml has a perfect build that makes his person relatable right from the first paragraph. The author was not forceful in creating his personality but made him easy to understand. World Background: The author gave an awesome work here too. So far, I did not find so many flaws in the book and I highly recommend it! Great job, author!

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Aster_lilac

uhhh dear author is this drop or in hiatus???

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Ruler_of_Endless

It's a nice book. An author recommended this to me. I see the potential in your book, sir. I like the characters already, and the story development is top-notch. I'm rooting for you. Good work!

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strange_skeleton

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Dusilindironlordor

I have read to the last chapter, it is quite interesting, but there is a lot to grow, I just wish you good luck on this path, with love from me, and everything else

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Six_faced_

To me this is one interesting novel as tbh it’s really rare to see a chat group novel not being a fanfic. Hopefully this doesn’t get dropped.

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GreedyNoble

life is like a rock but more importantly than that is. Why lemons? Why is water wet? but its not that it is when will we get a purely CGI Snow White, but its not that either the real question is the amount of likes on this comment

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DMC_MAX

After reading this to the third- ahem! Chapter, I am finally ready to release an honest review. First of all, the book premise is somewhat confusing to me... There wasn't any clear introduction of the background expect from the story is in a world where people can become <Supreme> and own legendary abilities. Just starting from the part where the mc wants to kill himself didn't really help me relate to him. Anyways, it's a good start when compared to others. ^_^ Pacing is alright, not too fast nor too slow, but I think the character development is a bit rushed. He just got all his abilities at once, and I wasn't able to feel with the mc as he grows from weak sidekick of his brother to OP big shot of the world! For character design, as far as I know there's only one character apart from Chat Group members that I know... but, at least the character isn't some trashy dumb idiot at the beginning. The author's updates are stable, great for a new book with a lot of potential. :^) Anyways, it's a gem all in all and I hope the author gets better and better with time. Peace, as always.