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This is a good book even if just a few chapters I hope that they will updated faster or another place to read ahead
To Author, This new version is very intresting that i read the rewrite chapters in one go and read twice. *JUST HOPING IT DOESN'T GET DROPPED AND COMPLETE IT. *This new version is going on great. As for his goal as a fan of your Fanfic simple sugggestion as MC is a cultivator(who master everything they get) :- I. Hope to see MC in a personality of in mix of Neutral Good×True Neutral×Antihero. II. His new goal - 1. Combine the magical and cultivation energies to make a new way of cultivation/immortal/runes techniques without harming the nature/energies of the planet but making a more powerful cultivation technique beyond divine level(as we say in cultivation world break through heavens and create your own universe in yourself within), making his own dimension and world in himself(MC). *Or, the author can even make MC a universe traveller like cultivators do, heck, cultivators can even time travel way too OP isn't! - But we all like it. 2. Bring all the cultivation, runes and immortal - techniques from his old world and creating new techniques from it in more practical and more powerful. 3. Make the people(Muggle as well as wizards) of the world/planet learn about magic turning all into magical society with combination of science and tech but without harming the nature/energies of the planet. 4. Make the cultivators[Martial Arts and immortal techniques with realms(Also combine the all combat techniques like Vale tudo, Krav Maga,Kalaripayattu,MMA, and more)+Magic+Alchemy+Runes/Ancient Runes+Medicine+Science+Math+Tech] as a branch and subject in the School in Magical Society and Wizard-schools. 5. Preserving the planet nature and making it pollution free and population controlled planet. Making the planet regenerate itself and alive in infinity, so that the planet never dies, habitual and people can live in here forever. *Also a concept to make all Muggle's wizards(can be useful to wizards too) is - We know about meridians right, by unlocking it, making the energy(any kind of energy) flow more in quality & in quantity in the body, then anyone can practice magic and cultivation. Thanks- Reader.
the mc is plot armour for canon and oc's and the cultivation system is some game like abomination on the genre as a whole should've just gave him a system
It is quite decent however I cannot get past a few things. 1)No one really questions his op cultivaiton knowledge and where he got it. Nor how he could be so strong and knowledgeable yet somehow was abused by his fat normie relatives. 2)He wants a harem, enough said on that. 3)At this rate he will be way too op too fast removing all tension. 4)He trusts characters way too quick without knowing them. He doesn’t know about Harry Potter but he instantly trusts and reveals tons of info to main cast characters and dumbledore. Anyway, if you can completely turn your brain off like you would with typical Chinese novel bs you might enjoy this. I simply do not think I can continue due to the above four points.
Not bad. Could use some work though. World writing is plain, with little to no details. Character writing is unexsistant, just simple Harry does this and that. The one thing I do like is the writing. You have a unique writing style, better than most fanfic writers.
Overall it's great and something new in HP FF. But their's a lack of explanation about the Cultivation? Or what ever the star path the Mc is using in his Martial arts, Their's also no explanation about how the energy he's accumulating? It's really confusing. The Mc is Op as the author shows but again their's no clear explanation about his strength, Like in one chat the Baselik says he's stronger that sylethren but the next moment it says he's weaker than him in magic, energy??? Yeah so it's really confusing in some part but Overall it's a good quick read so 👍👍
why does it seem like his mentality doesn't reflect his age and experience? it's kind of annoying. ..... ..... ..... .... .... ..... .......
Es un fanfic de Harry Potter muy interesante ya que es de los pocos en el que he visto que la personalidad del MC corresponde con la de un rencarnado y alguien que tiene sus años de experiencia no como otros donde dicen ser reencarnado y actúan como unos niños además de que no pierde tiempo en el paso del tiempo también es bueno
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Author, amazing, just amazing. Never had a Harry Potter fanfic been as interesting as yours. Fascinating premise to the story, character development, and a even more incredible world background. Looking forward for more chapters.
The entire story just kinda blends together and instead of being a story it feels like a brief summary of things that happened off screen, overall not the worst book, but not that good either.
I must agree author got my stamp of approval at possible multiverse thing...C'mon a martial artist harry with possible harem and possible multiverse is most possibly the best thing possible XD. But i am really looking forward on how this turns out later.
At first glance it seem like a generic novel but man i am wrong this novel is a masterpiece in all manners.thanku author just keep regularly updating.
was really good at the start with a mix of Magic/cultivation and skill tree like Skyrim, now it's about the perverted mc and his future harem... The personality of the mc took a 180° from a smart old cultivator reincarnating to a childlike young Master that want an harem... Go look elsewhere if you want plot :(
Did not even read the First Chapter, but the sinopsis was enough for me to rate this as 5 Star. 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂, laughed way too hard at It.
was going to read it and then rate but if it's Ron bashing them easy 5 star, but on that note I'm hoping you do not drop this, it would be an interesting story
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Its not that bad, but its at best average when it comes to fanfics on this site which isnt saying much considering the quality of most of the works on webnovel. Classic gary sue mc, he is very overpowered and everything works out for him. One dimensional characters who dont really seem to have their own opinions and just kinda do whatever the mc says. Novel is a complete powertrip, which to be fair can be fun.
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to be honest i haven't read it but I am just saying it HP world is too small for a martial artist or a cultivator whatever if you want to do multiverse it'd be the best in my opinion
Awesome novel/fanfic, as a lover of both the Harry Potter books and cultivation novels i have to say this is top tier. Something i’d ilke to ask- you stated the cultivation method is unique, did you take reference from another book or books? The reason i ask is i really like this method you used and was wondering if you would recommend a novel with a similar method. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
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This is truly good. Looking forward to more. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
This is a good book even if just a few chapters I hope that they will updated faster or another place to read ahead
To Author, This new version is very intresting that i read the rewrite chapters in one go and read twice. *JUST HOPING IT DOESN'T GET DROPPED AND COMPLETE IT. *This new version is going on great. As for his goal as a fan of your Fanfic simple sugggestion as MC is a cultivator(who master everything they get) :- I. Hope to see MC in a personality of in mix of Neutral Good×True Neutral×Antihero. II. His new goal - 1. Combine the magical and cultivation energies to make a new way of cultivation/immortal/runes techniques without harming the nature/energies of the planet but making a more powerful cultivation technique beyond divine level(as we say in cultivation world break through heavens and create your own universe in yourself within), making his own dimension and world in himself(MC). *Or, the author can even make MC a universe traveller like cultivators do, heck, cultivators can even time travel way too OP isn't! - But we all like it. 2. Bring all the cultivation, runes and immortal - techniques from his old world and creating new techniques from it in more practical and more powerful. 3. Make the people(Muggle as well as wizards) of the world/planet learn about magic turning all into magical society with combination of science and tech but without harming the nature/energies of the planet. 4. Make the cultivators[Martial Arts and immortal techniques with realms(Also combine the all combat techniques like Vale tudo, Krav Maga,Kalaripayattu,MMA, and more)+Magic+Alchemy+Runes/Ancient Runes+Medicine+Science+Math+Tech] as a branch and subject in the School in Magical Society and Wizard-schools. 5. Preserving the planet nature and making it pollution free and population controlled planet. Making the planet regenerate itself and alive in infinity, so that the planet never dies, habitual and people can live in here forever. *Also a concept to make all Muggle's wizards(can be useful to wizards too) is - We know about meridians right, by unlocking it, making the energy(any kind of energy) flow more in quality & in quantity in the body, then anyone can practice magic and cultivation. Thanks- Reader.
the mc is plot armour for canon and oc's and the cultivation system is some game like abomination on the genre as a whole should've just gave him a system
It is quite decent however I cannot get past a few things. 1)No one really questions his op cultivaiton knowledge and where he got it. Nor how he could be so strong and knowledgeable yet somehow was abused by his fat normie relatives. 2)He wants a harem, enough said on that. 3)At this rate he will be way too op too fast removing all tension. 4)He trusts characters way too quick without knowing them. He doesn’t know about Harry Potter but he instantly trusts and reveals tons of info to main cast characters and dumbledore. Anyway, if you can completely turn your brain off like you would with typical Chinese novel bs you might enjoy this. I simply do not think I can continue due to the above four points.
Not bad. Could use some work though. World writing is plain, with little to no details. Character writing is unexsistant, just simple Harry does this and that. The one thing I do like is the writing. You have a unique writing style, better than most fanfic writers.
Overall it's great and something new in HP FF. But their's a lack of explanation about the Cultivation? Or what ever the star path the Mc is using in his Martial arts, Their's also no explanation about how the energy he's accumulating? It's really confusing. The Mc is Op as the author shows but again their's no clear explanation about his strength, Like in one chat the Baselik says he's stronger that sylethren but the next moment it says he's weaker than him in magic, energy??? Yeah so it's really confusing in some part but Overall it's a good quick read so 👍👍
why does it seem like his mentality doesn't reflect his age and experience? it's kind of annoying. ..... ..... ..... .... .... ..... .......
Es un fanfic de Harry Potter muy interesante ya que es de los pocos en el que he visto que la personalidad del MC corresponde con la de un rencarnado y alguien que tiene sus años de experiencia no como otros donde dicen ser reencarnado y actúan como unos niños además de que no pierde tiempo en el paso del tiempo también es bueno
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Author, amazing, just amazing. Never had a Harry Potter fanfic been as interesting as yours. Fascinating premise to the story, character development, and a even more incredible world background. Looking forward for more chapters.
The entire story just kinda blends together and instead of being a story it feels like a brief summary of things that happened off screen, overall not the worst book, but not that good either.
I must agree author got my stamp of approval at possible multiverse thing...C'mon a martial artist harry with possible harem and possible multiverse is most possibly the best thing possible XD. But i am really looking forward on how this turns out later.
At first glance it seem like a generic novel but man i am wrong this novel is a masterpiece in all manners.thanku author just keep regularly updating.
was really good at the start with a mix of Magic/cultivation and skill tree like Skyrim, now it's about the perverted mc and his future harem... The personality of the mc took a 180° from a smart old cultivator reincarnating to a childlike young Master that want an harem... Go look elsewhere if you want plot :(
Did not even read the First Chapter, but the sinopsis was enough for me to rate this as 5 Star. 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂, laughed way too hard at It.
was going to read it and then rate but if it's Ron bashing them easy 5 star, but on that note I'm hoping you do not drop this, it would be an interesting story
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Its not that bad, but its at best average when it comes to fanfics on this site which isnt saying much considering the quality of most of the works on webnovel. Classic gary sue mc, he is very overpowered and everything works out for him. One dimensional characters who dont really seem to have their own opinions and just kinda do whatever the mc says. Novel is a complete powertrip, which to be fair can be fun.
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to be honest i haven't read it but I am just saying it HP world is too small for a martial artist or a cultivator whatever if you want to do multiverse it'd be the best in my opinion
Awesome novel/fanfic, as a lover of both the Harry Potter books and cultivation novels i have to say this is top tier. Something i’d ilke to ask- you stated the cultivation method is unique, did you take reference from another book or books? The reason i ask is i really like this method you used and was wondering if you would recommend a novel with a similar method. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
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This is truly good. Looking forward to more. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Hello author I wanted to know if there is harem in this novel.