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I’ve missed this series so much and if you can I hope you can post it on Fanfiction.Net if not cool I’m still gonna read it here.
This fanfiction is compelling in its thoughtful and well-written plot. the author understands the source material exceptionally well, which gives the story a believable depth and immersion. Overall it is very entertaining and enjoyable to read, one of the best fiction, unfortunately I think a single romance with Emma would be better.
i have just started it but I have to say i really like it and i hope in the future he will kill some alien animals as well as the magical animals that Dr strange eats as food
Writing is amazing, and the world building is close to source material, but everything about the Mc it feels like all of he’s actions are pointless. Everything he does doesn’t feel like he’s but frosts and everyone else seems as if they gaining more from frosts orders towards him, he’s just a puppet with no goal of he’s own he’s hasn’t gained his own thoughts or a belief the only time I felt as if he’s his own person was in the limbo arc away from frost influence and so in end to me he’s no a Mc but person that’s easily replaced.
The only downside is that this is a harem fic, but otherwise, a very thoughtful and well-written fic. The author seems to understand the source material extremely well, which gives the fic a sense of depth and immersion that makes sense. Super fun and enjoyable to read
Too bad, not worth it. Baby this, baby that, like shut up!!! No one wants to read all that......................................................................................................(Increasing word count)
I don't know if the story is good or bad but I do know is that there are so many users here who published a five-star review many many times and I felt obligated to drop the writing of the story to make it fair.
i love this story man i just wish you can continue please tell when you do continue❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤and if you dare to just stop writing this
Did the author drop this one ? i dunno where i read that there's a new version of it but i can't find it ..
This is the best marvel fic I’ve read. Really liked the mc. The romance could use some work but I liked the interactions that weren’t skipped over. Really wish it wasn’t dropped/on hiatus so I could read the end.
abilities are terribly developed, the characters around the hero are stupid, when I read this I became dumber....................................
Finally, a decent novel with a proper superhero storyline. The best part that it is not following a movies plot and favours storylines / major events from comics. Other wonderful things: 1) Storytelling is done in style of classic comics arcs (from a time, when comics have a meaningful stories). Author could go to Marvel and work as scenarist for real. 2) Original Character actually original. Not an default isekai with a template system you have seen everywhere. There is actually some "semi-system" in here, but that thing quickly fade to the background of the novel. + BONUS: OC actually have a character, that was influenced by caretaker, and have nice personality without mountains of meaningless drama or overused traits of typical "cunning / beta young master with supreme higher ground morales / questionable ethics from our world (and other annoying s***)". 3) Proper power scaling. The thing that hurt's me at almost every other story at WebNovel is endless struggle and power race. Here, when MC become powerful, he actually become a powerhouse and everyone had to deal with that. There are still more powerful forces out there, but they only appear with a reason to act so. God bless the author for actually keeping power balance.
a beta hero wanna-be, baby sitter, worst beta off all fanfictions maybe. Tell him to jump he asks how high..
Hey bro where are you????? @̶͇̝̪̻̹̟̝̮̻̠̭̰̟͉̹̞͎̔͒ͬ̀̾͌͗͐ͥͨͥ͗͑͒͌̂̐́͜[̷̴̡͙͔̘̬̬̮̯ͤ̌͌̓ͪ̑̍́͘#̧̜̳͚̦̙͓̄̀̃́̌̂̔͋͆̾͠"̣͔͔̲̲̹̣̞̰̞̞͈ͯ̄ͥ̽͆ͦ̈ͭ̾ͥ̓͑̀͡͠*̶̭͔͔̣̟̯̙͚̼̪ͪ̉̽͐͗ͪ̄̓̎ͧ͊ͣ̄ͪͮ́̚͝≠̰͎̮͉̼̪̫̹̀͗̋͐͋̏ͮ̀́͡͞ͅ}̷̑͊̀̃͌̇̅̅́͛̉ͬͯͩ̅͑́́͏̪̹̥̜̥̤͚̟̖͎̠̬̮̤̜̮+̣̘͚͚̟͗̅ͬͧ́́̌̃͗̋̉͑̏́́ͅ\͕̮̙̅̆̋̋ͮ̂̔̏̃̐ͯ̃̄͛́̚͢͝͠.̢͙̣̪̖̠̮̭͚͈̜͍̖̙̙̎̌͌̊̇͗ͩ̋ͫ́ę͓̻̰̤̱̻̹̺̟̙̟̼͔̳̜́ͩ̇̔ͩͬ̽͒̊̊͜͡͝&̸̧̟͉͓͔̪̟̫͓̰̩̼̦̟̫ͯ̂͛ͣ͌̾ͦ̉͋ͪͥ̍͗̽͐͂̀͞#̵̮͚̱͍͚̟ͫ͛̍ͯͮ̃̈́͋͗͌ͩ̅̚͢͟͟ ͐̆̆ͫ͊͛ͩ҉̢͏̩̲͖̙̦̱̖͇̠ù̙̭̗̞̭͙̘͔̤̺̤̩̺̯͚̙ͦͮͧ̃͆̉ͧ̒ͯͩ̑̍̚͟ͅ€̡̈̑̉̀ͤͧ̋ͨͪͧ̈͌҉̸̮̭͕͖̻̲̜͔̜͝¤̧̹̭͖̞͎̪͓̰̲͇̠̳͍̲̫̮̒́͑̾̋ͫ͘̕ͅ£͕̮̩̲̪̜̝ͩͬ́ͯ̉͌̉͑ͮͧ͘͜ͅè̶̙͓̩͉̱̲̝͎̲̻͕̫ͩ̏ͧͨͪ̓̇̒͂̅̏ͯ̿ͧ̚͟͟͞͝%͑͋͑͑ͫͨ̄͗̋̿͂̽̇҉͕̗̝̯̻̪̻̭̜͎̹̖͈̰͈͔͘͢͡!̹͍̹̰͍̬̙̟̥̭̫͎̮̖̜ͬ͊ͬ̇ͪ͛ͤ̎ͭ́̍̔͒͐̂͐͒͠͝ͅ@̵̗̰̦̲͚͈͎̤̗ͣͦ̽̋̌͌̃̂̎́͞͞#̞̲̣̭̥̭͖̬͔̳̇͋̋ͬ͆̆̈̉̑̽͌ͨ̽̔̅̒͟͢[͗̓̓̓̆̒̆͂̿̈́ͪ͆ͧͪ҉̬̤̻̳̬̮̗̜͈͜ͅ~̶̴̢̦̳͇̮͔̩̮̺̪̼̱̺͈̖̻͉͑̔͆̏ͦ͗͌͂̎̅̀̿̕͘
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] great story but i need to know how the girls got pregnant cause they made that announcement like it wasn’t a planned pregnancy initially.
I hav read all the chapters till now, and I can say that this is a good story. All am waiting for is for the autor to continue the novel. Thx u Autor-sama.
the amount of details put into world building, character development and the evolution of the relationships of the various characters really show the passion of the author to write this story. I was personally reticent at first, because I didn't find the synopsis to be compelling, but I was hooked after the first chapter (issue haha). keep up the good work, author-san!
Just binge-read this story for 3 days and I'm love it. When someone say the world Best Nanny every people know who to look at. Find it funny that the Frost family want to have a baby but instead get a full grown adult as a child. How strong is Jack now compared to other higher beings.
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Harem? G L D S Adjjdjdjdjdjjf. Djdj Djdjdjdjdj Djdjdhfjdididkdkdjjddikdosdkdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjd N
Good work thank you mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
So far the story is going very well, I have very few things that I don't like, an example is all those powers of the Greek gods, the strength level for me shouldn't have gone beyond Thor's level, the MC practically doesn't have any challenges anymore After all these powers, as for the harem I liked Emma, Rogue, Susan and Wanda are some of the coolest and hottest female characters in Marvel.
I Am The Exp of My Holy Scripture of Review's. Webnovel Story's is My Body, Exp Buckets is My Blood. I have Type Created and Writing over a Unknown Useful useless and to Down right Hilarious reviews. Unknown to True death, Nor known to the Multiple Reality of the Multiverse. I have withstood Cliff-Kun truck-kun and the legendary Loli goddess-chan to create many Legendary reviews known or unknown. And Yet these eyes and hands to body and soul will never stop at anything. So, as I pray to God all mother of webnovel-chan Unlimited Exp will never falter! Note - I am a chaotic kind of person 🤣👍 To author looks like you got a +1 fan LOL😂😂
Hope a faster update cuz it's a good fanfiction novel[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
loving the story so far, what the writer has done so far with the marvel world is awesome can't wait to see what will happen for the rest of the story
I’ve missed this series so much and if you can I hope you can post it on Fanfiction.Net if not cool I’m still gonna read it here.
This fanfiction is compelling in its thoughtful and well-written plot. the author understands the source material exceptionally well, which gives the story a believable depth and immersion. Overall it is very entertaining and enjoyable to read, one of the best fiction, unfortunately I think a single romance with Emma would be better.
i have just started it but I have to say i really like it and i hope in the future he will kill some alien animals as well as the magical animals that Dr strange eats as food
Writing is amazing, and the world building is close to source material, but everything about the Mc it feels like all of he’s actions are pointless. Everything he does doesn’t feel like he’s but frosts and everyone else seems as if they gaining more from frosts orders towards him, he’s just a puppet with no goal of he’s own he’s hasn’t gained his own thoughts or a belief the only time I felt as if he’s his own person was in the limbo arc away from frost influence and so in end to me he’s no a Mc but person that’s easily replaced.
The only downside is that this is a harem fic, but otherwise, a very thoughtful and well-written fic. The author seems to understand the source material extremely well, which gives the fic a sense of depth and immersion that makes sense. Super fun and enjoyable to read
Too bad, not worth it. Baby this, baby that, like shut up!!! No one wants to read all that......................................................................................................(Increasing word count)
I don't know if the story is good or bad but I do know is that there are so many users here who published a five-star review many many times and I felt obligated to drop the writing of the story to make it fair.
i love this story man i just wish you can continue please tell when you do continue❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤and if you dare to just stop writing this
Did the author drop this one ? i dunno where i read that there's a new version of it but i can't find it ..
This is the best marvel fic I’ve read. Really liked the mc. The romance could use some work but I liked the interactions that weren’t skipped over. Really wish it wasn’t dropped/on hiatus so I could read the end.
abilities are terribly developed, the characters around the hero are stupid, when I read this I became dumber....................................
Finally, a decent novel with a proper superhero storyline. The best part that it is not following a movies plot and favours storylines / major events from comics. Other wonderful things: 1) Storytelling is done in style of classic comics arcs (from a time, when comics have a meaningful stories). Author could go to Marvel and work as scenarist for real. 2) Original Character actually original. Not an default isekai with a template system you have seen everywhere. There is actually some "semi-system" in here, but that thing quickly fade to the background of the novel. + BONUS: OC actually have a character, that was influenced by caretaker, and have nice personality without mountains of meaningless drama or overused traits of typical "cunning / beta young master with supreme higher ground morales / questionable ethics from our world (and other annoying s***)". 3) Proper power scaling. The thing that hurt's me at almost every other story at WebNovel is endless struggle and power race. Here, when MC become powerful, he actually become a powerhouse and everyone had to deal with that. There are still more powerful forces out there, but they only appear with a reason to act so. God bless the author for actually keeping power balance.
a beta hero wanna-be, baby sitter, worst beta off all fanfictions maybe. Tell him to jump he asks how high..
Hey bro where are you????? @̶͇̝̪̻̹̟̝̮̻̠̭̰̟͉̹̞͎̔͒ͬ̀̾͌͗͐ͥͨͥ͗͑͒͌̂̐́͜[̷̴̡͙͔̘̬̬̮̯ͤ̌͌̓ͪ̑̍́͘#̧̜̳͚̦̙͓̄̀̃́̌̂̔͋͆̾͠"̣͔͔̲̲̹̣̞̰̞̞͈ͯ̄ͥ̽͆ͦ̈ͭ̾ͥ̓͑̀͡͠*̶̭͔͔̣̟̯̙͚̼̪ͪ̉̽͐͗ͪ̄̓̎ͧ͊ͣ̄ͪͮ́̚͝≠̰͎̮͉̼̪̫̹̀͗̋͐͋̏ͮ̀́͡͞ͅ}̷̑͊̀̃͌̇̅̅́͛̉ͬͯͩ̅͑́́͏̪̹̥̜̥̤͚̟̖͎̠̬̮̤̜̮+̣̘͚͚̟͗̅ͬͧ́́̌̃͗̋̉͑̏́́ͅ\͕̮̙̅̆̋̋ͮ̂̔̏̃̐ͯ̃̄͛́̚͢͝͠.̢͙̣̪̖̠̮̭͚͈̜͍̖̙̙̎̌͌̊̇͗ͩ̋ͫ́ę͓̻̰̤̱̻̹̺̟̙̟̼͔̳̜́ͩ̇̔ͩͬ̽͒̊̊͜͡͝&̸̧̟͉͓͔̪̟̫͓̰̩̼̦̟̫ͯ̂͛ͣ͌̾ͦ̉͋ͪͥ̍͗̽͐͂̀͞#̵̮͚̱͍͚̟ͫ͛̍ͯͮ̃̈́͋͗͌ͩ̅̚͢͟͟ ͐̆̆ͫ͊͛ͩ҉̢͏̩̲͖̙̦̱̖͇̠ù̙̭̗̞̭͙̘͔̤̺̤̩̺̯͚̙ͦͮͧ̃͆̉ͧ̒ͯͩ̑̍̚͟ͅ€̡̈̑̉̀ͤͧ̋ͨͪͧ̈͌҉̸̮̭͕͖̻̲̜͔̜͝¤̧̹̭͖̞͎̪͓̰̲͇̠̳͍̲̫̮̒́͑̾̋ͫ͘̕ͅ£͕̮̩̲̪̜̝ͩͬ́ͯ̉͌̉͑ͮͧ͘͜ͅè̶̙͓̩͉̱̲̝͎̲̻͕̫ͩ̏ͧͨͪ̓̇̒͂̅̏ͯ̿ͧ̚͟͟͞͝%͑͋͑͑ͫͨ̄͗̋̿͂̽̇҉͕̗̝̯̻̪̻̭̜͎̹̖͈̰͈͔͘͢͡!̹͍̹̰͍̬̙̟̥̭̫͎̮̖̜ͬ͊ͬ̇ͪ͛ͤ̎ͭ́̍̔͒͐̂͐͒͠͝ͅ@̵̗̰̦̲͚͈͎̤̗ͣͦ̽̋̌͌̃̂̎́͞͞#̞̲̣̭̥̭͖̬͔̳̇͋̋ͬ͆̆̈̉̑̽͌ͨ̽̔̅̒͟͢[͗̓̓̓̆̒̆͂̿̈́ͪ͆ͧͪ҉̬̤̻̳̬̮̗̜͈͜ͅ~̶̴̢̦̳͇̮͔̩̮̺̪̼̱̺͈̖̻͉͑̔͆̏ͦ͗͌͂̎̅̀̿̕͘
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] great story but i need to know how the girls got pregnant cause they made that announcement like it wasn’t a planned pregnancy initially.
I hav read all the chapters till now, and I can say that this is a good story. All am waiting for is for the autor to continue the novel. Thx u Autor-sama.
the amount of details put into world building, character development and the evolution of the relationships of the various characters really show the passion of the author to write this story. I was personally reticent at first, because I didn't find the synopsis to be compelling, but I was hooked after the first chapter (issue haha). keep up the good work, author-san!
Just binge-read this story for 3 days and I'm love it. When someone say the world Best Nanny every people know who to look at. Find it funny that the Frost family want to have a baby but instead get a full grown adult as a child. How strong is Jack now compared to other higher beings.
Revelar Spoiler Harem? G L D S Adjjdjdjdjdjjf. Djdj Djdjdjdjdj Djdjdhfjdididkdkdjjddikdosdkdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjd N
Good work thank you mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
So far the story is going very well, I have very few things that I don't like, an example is all those powers of the Greek gods, the strength level for me shouldn't have gone beyond Thor's level, the MC practically doesn't have any challenges anymore After all these powers, as for the harem I liked Emma, Rogue, Susan and Wanda are some of the coolest and hottest female characters in Marvel.
I Am The Exp of My Holy Scripture of Review's. Webnovel Story's is My Body, Exp Buckets is My Blood. I have Type Created and Writing over a Unknown Useful useless and to Down right Hilarious reviews. Unknown to True death, Nor known to the Multiple Reality of the Multiverse. I have withstood Cliff-Kun truck-kun and the legendary Loli goddess-chan to create many Legendary reviews known or unknown. And Yet these eyes and hands to body and soul will never stop at anything. So, as I pray to God all mother of webnovel-chan Unlimited Exp will never falter! Note - I am a chaotic kind of person 🤣👍 To author looks like you got a +1 fan LOL😂😂
Hope a faster update cuz it's a good fanfiction novel[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
loving the story so far, what the writer has done so far with the marvel world is awesome can't wait to see what will happen for the rest of the story
Definitely in my top 3 marvel fanfics ✊🏾✊🏾