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One of the most well-written and interesting Marvel-based stories on the platform. While the ‘power’ of the MC may seem OP, the author never fails to remind and prove to us just how broken the ‘real’ players in the Marvel Universe are. While I do sometimes feel like Jack is a bit too half-hearted, as in he should’ve just either straight up compromised or all-out murder everyone in his way, not choosing either often causes unnecessary and at times frustrating drama until he eventually is forced to choose in the end. Though Jack, in general, is quite logical and pragmatic in how he chooses to act, causing him to often be on the winning side. This is definitely a story pack filled with dynamic dramas, power struggles, and shady backdoor politics. And I LOVE it. Also props for the constant and reliable update rate, which imo, is def the most important part of my marking criteria.
Es una buena historia si te gusta Marvel y el tema de super poderes, me gusto como implemento al personaje tan bien para que todo fluya de una buena manera, no de manera forzosa como otras historias. si te gusta el tema X-Men te encantara este Fan-Fic. Lo recomiendo mucho, agréguenlo a sus bibliotecas.
Overall this is an extremely enjoyable fanfiction. Loaded with amazing and adrenaline pumping moments, this fanfic hits all the right notes when it comes to making the reader crave for more content.
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Al chihuahua me gusta y punto es muy bueno y sobre todo la historia es muy alarmante y deslumbrante lo adoro todo PD : is in spanis [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I really like the story so far. It's full of great character interactions and can really surprise me sometimes. Thanks for the story author! I really hope this gets completed!
okay so. the breakdown of this is it's really good and enjoyable however. the main problem is some characters are very different than their personalities are from the source material which is fine because this is a fanfiction. and it's quite fast-paced at times .
-Sorry, the story is very good BUT this 'marvel' atmosphere really gets on my nerves. You know that thing about weird relationships, men and women making out without having a serious relationship, betrayals of all kinds between friends and lovers. I believe most readers don't like this in marvel and don't even like to read it, and from a certain point it became more about plans and actions and enemies than Mc and his allies, he has a very OP power but it does nothing with it, an infinite potential wasted.
One of my greatest binge-reading of all time. Make me occupied how good is the story with and its flow for me. A good ff to recommend for others.
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this story would be good but it villianizes the hero's, specifically the avengers way too much. First, why would tony even fall for jacks trap, he one of the smartest people alive. even i knew something was up when jack started asking questions, much less tony. And strange is a sorcerer supreme, therefore he shouldn't be frustrated at a "law" trap only reading this far to see his evolution of power.
All I will say is that this is honestly, better than most marvel fics I've read on this site and if your reading this I suggest giving it a try .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Good story. Better then many story on the site/app. Did not find any faults. And Mc's behaviour is also reasonable. Some cringey (for my preference) scenes but nothing over the top
what would happen if he kill a virus from his body because it would make him op, if he kill a plant what abilities would he get, he should go to the zoo or bug store to gain abu
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If Harem has a million Haters, I am one of them . If Harem has ten Haters, I am one of them. If Harem have only one Hater, then that Hater is me. If Harem has no Haters, that means that I am no longer alive. If the entire world accepts Harems, I am against the world. Till my Last Breath, I'll hate Harems
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Мне очень нравится история. Спасибо автору...................................................................................................
Cerita yang menarik, tidak membosankan, dan untuk karakter MC menurut saya good, apa lagi ya Cuma satu yang disayang kan kenapa tuh tony, stranger, Xavier, reed jadi gitu ya, kalo saya berasumsi ini pasti kena hasutan kang, bisa sampe dendam gitu amat, kalo alasan cemburu kaya sedikit di paksain
Revelar Spoiler One of the most well-written and interesting Marvel-based stories on the platform. While the ‘power’ of the MC may seem OP, the author never fails to remind and prove to us just how broken the ‘real’ players in the Marvel Universe are. While I do sometimes feel like Jack is a bit too half-hearted, as in he should’ve just either straight up compromised or all-out murder everyone in his way, not choosing either often causes unnecessary and at times frustrating drama until he eventually is forced to choose in the end. Though Jack, in general, is quite logical and pragmatic in how he chooses to act, causing him to often be on the winning side. This is definitely a story pack filled with dynamic dramas, power struggles, and shady backdoor politics. And I LOVE it. Also props for the constant and reliable update rate, which imo, is def the most important part of my marking criteria.
Es una buena historia si te gusta Marvel y el tema de super poderes, me gusto como implemento al personaje tan bien para que todo fluya de una buena manera, no de manera forzosa como otras historias. si te gusta el tema X-Men te encantara este Fan-Fic. Lo recomiendo mucho, agréguenlo a sus bibliotecas.
Overall this is an extremely enjoyable fanfiction. Loaded with amazing and adrenaline pumping moments, this fanfic hits all the right notes when it comes to making the reader crave for more content.
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Revelar Spoiler Al chihuahua me gusta y punto es muy bueno y sobre todo la historia es muy alarmante y deslumbrante lo adoro todo PD : is in spanis [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I really like the story so far. It's full of great character interactions and can really surprise me sometimes. Thanks for the story author! I really hope this gets completed!
okay so. the breakdown of this is it's really good and enjoyable however. the main problem is some characters are very different than their personalities are from the source material which is fine because this is a fanfiction. and it's quite fast-paced at times .
-Sorry, the story is very good BUT this 'marvel' atmosphere really gets on my nerves. You know that thing about weird relationships, men and women making out without having a serious relationship, betrayals of all kinds between friends and lovers. I believe most readers don't like this in marvel and don't even like to read it, and from a certain point it became more about plans and actions and enemies than Mc and his allies, he has a very OP power but it does nothing with it, an infinite potential wasted.
One of my greatest binge-reading of all time. Make me occupied how good is the story with and its flow for me. A good ff to recommend for others.
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Good ✌🏻 🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙂🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙂🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙂🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙂🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙂🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙂🙃🙃🙃🙃 the only downside in this fanfic is the harem tag 🥺
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this story would be good but it villianizes the hero's, specifically the avengers way too much. First, why would tony even fall for jacks trap, he one of the smartest people alive. even i knew something was up when jack started asking questions, much less tony. And strange is a sorcerer supreme, therefore he shouldn't be frustrated at a "law" trap only reading this far to see his evolution of power.
All I will say is that this is honestly, better than most marvel fics I've read on this site and if your reading this I suggest giving it a try .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Good story. Better then many story on the site/app. Did not find any faults. And Mc's behaviour is also reasonable. Some cringey (for my preference) scenes but nothing over the top
what would happen if he kill a virus from his body because it would make him op, if he kill a plant what abilities would he get, he should go to the zoo or bug store to gain abu
Great novel ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
If Harem has a million Haters, I am one of them . If Harem has ten Haters, I am one of them. If Harem have only one Hater, then that Hater is me. If Harem has no Haters, that means that I am no longer alive. If the entire world accepts Harems, I am against the world. Till my Last Breath, I'll hate Harems
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Мне очень нравится история. Спасибо автору...................................................................................................
Cerita yang menarik, tidak membosankan, dan untuk karakter MC menurut saya good, apa lagi ya Cuma satu yang disayang kan kenapa tuh tony, stranger, Xavier, reed jadi gitu ya, kalo saya berasumsi ini pasti kena hasutan kang, bisa sampe dendam gitu amat, kalo alasan cemburu kaya sedikit di paksain
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