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Writing's fine. Updates are a bit slow. Story was very close to the og at first, which was bad, but went it's own way afterwards. Worst aspect is the characters. I have no idea what the mc wants. It's like he's an empty shell. Not only that, there's extremely forced romance here, when that is not even a tag on this novel. World background is fine.
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another LOTR fanfic .. yeessss.. thank you author for the few chapters that you released the story is going great. I hope this story reach its ending in the long run. not like the other fanfic no update at all. I give all my support as a free readers author your story is great.bi encourage you.💪👍👍 .. thanks again for the 1st few chapters hoping for more.👌😊
iys good i recommend this if you want to see character go to runeblacksmith way[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Wuuuu un so happy to see a fanfiction about my favorite game:) just out of curiosity what level are you in game ? ........................... .
i enjoy this fanfiction very much, the grammar is great, which is not common on webnovel, the characters feel alive and have believable conversations. Overall this story is great and i'm looking forward to new updates.
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Cool story. I hope that in other worlds he will build a kingdom, not only armies like in the game. And I advise you to cut short information on other characters when you post their POV.And if you haven't planned it yet, I am asking for some verbal confrontation with Celibor
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I searched for a story just like this for a while now. And it gave me a few ideas for my own. I like your Talion/Si, his beginning and his development because it makes it fun to read. I hope for more.
Writing's fine. Updates are a bit slow. Story was very close to the og at first, which was bad, but went it's own way afterwards. Worst aspect is the characters. I have no idea what the mc wants. It's like he's an empty shell. Not only that, there's extremely forced romance here, when that is not even a tag on this novel. World background is fine.
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another LOTR fanfic .. yeessss.. thank you author for the few chapters that you released the story is going great. I hope this story reach its ending in the long run. not like the other fanfic no update at all. I give all my support as a free readers author your story is great.bi encourage you.💪👍👍 .. thanks again for the 1st few chapters hoping for more.👌😊
iys good i recommend this if you want to see character go to runeblacksmith way[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Wuuuu un so happy to see a fanfiction about my favorite game:) just out of curiosity what level are you in game ? ........................... .
i enjoy this fanfiction very much, the grammar is great, which is not common on webnovel, the characters feel alive and have believable conversations. Overall this story is great and i'm looking forward to new updates.
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Revelar Spoiler Continue please kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkajjakakakakakakakakakakkakakakakakakakakakakakakkaakakkakahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhhahahaha
Cool story. I hope that in other worlds he will build a kingdom, not only armies like in the game. And I advise you to cut short information on other characters when you post their POV.And if you haven't planned it yet, I am asking for some verbal confrontation with Celibor
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I searched for a story just like this for a while now. And it gave me a few ideas for my own. I like your Talion/Si, his beginning and his development because it makes it fun to read. I hope for more.