A Summoner In Apocalypse

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Nana1960

Very good book currently at chap 7. Not sure how the story will unfold. I noticed the characters were waiting for the military to help them lol....In a carribean country? That's unlikely unless they have someone who has connections among them. So far so good, I guess the main things that can make the novel go sideways are the future interactions with the new team members (Amelia's boyfriend seems already like a future headache), how they get off the island, they find their families in the US and also kennen will most likely have to go to china to find his family. I guess all these elements can be future arcs of the storyline. Honestly the level of writing is pretty good except for some typo here and there but nothing major!! Also, I love that the "system" isn't prominent as in other novel. At this point it may have even been better if there was no system as it is not really giving them any advantage and it would make the novel more realistic. The downsides is that they wouldn't know anything about their powers and the storylines would be longer to make them figure it out. Hopefully you don't become a system junkie author. Good luck. Please try to increase the frequency of updates.

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bbugs61

Hi author, just finished reading the 6 chapters available and the book is really good. The description are realistic and similar to mainstream novel. I really like the dialogues that feel natural. Just a hint author. From what I have hear authors usually write a lot of chapter (20+ at least) and then post them at the same time to get reviews. Then they start with the normal updates. I see the last update was 2 days ago which is pretty slow. But good luck and I hope you are able to improve your updates speed.