Alexander Benjamin Tennyson (Ben 10 Fanfic)

LV 4

PieceofSh1tApp

Characters are dull and have no depth, this guy has thick plot armor whenever he has to talk to someone, they always believe him, do what he says, they always say how he's perfect and chooses the best method super duper quick. Gwen and Grandpa Max are soooo robotic in this story. Grammar is a low priority for this author considering that words are missing sometimes and they spoken English is very basic at best.

LV 14

VenomousTv

After reading the description I'm very hyped to read it and I hope it won't get dropped untill chapter 300+ .

LV 14

shayon

Gwen is less inteligent than the original and grandpa Max is also lot more less vigilance than the original.ashley's character is not interesting

LV 13

Meharu

Idea behind this story is good but in my humble and personal opinion it's gone the wrong way starting from the chap 2 and it became something ı can't read (it's my opinion of course there will be people that like this book but it's not my cup of tea)

LV 4

Sok_Heng_8897

great story don't drop it please 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

LV 5

EXPchaos

Good story development so far but I think a little more character interaction is needed. Otherwise it's going brilliantly. 😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍 [img=recommend]

LV 1

One_Azure

Idk man just so many grammar errors and inconsistencies. I really can't stand this novel but I'm glad you're happy to write it as I'm an old Ben 10 fan. Maybe just re-read it and fix the spelling and grammar mistakes.

LV 5

ShuYme

A frankly boRing story with some of the worst grammar i have ever seen. Just putting the raws or whatever in google translate would probably be better and if this is not A translation ooof because The graMmar and structuring is appaling

LV 5

Uzumaki_Kushina_21

it's just plain it is like you are writing an essay on some topic or writing an exam 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑

LV 1

Rajat_Sharma_0663

Well instead of Ben 10....it should be something like me and my perfect life after Omnitrix... everything was just too good...no hardships...no challenge....in the end i know mc will save the day....he got girls and magic....it's just too good to be story....

LV 2

daniel_rahn

Really good ben 10 fic, i have seen a lot of ben 10 fics and none of them is this good and interesting Really looking forward to see how it goes

LV 2

muitochapado

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LV 13

fsdf_adsfsd

Inconsistent detail elements. A pure skimmer for me..........................................................................................

LV 1

DaoistTwPNf9

the idea of ​​the story is not bad for the author did not give due importance to the characters and the depth of their actions making a shallow story

LV 4

Dido_Oscar

great fanfic one of the only three that are worth reading ....please don't drop ......peace .. ........................................................................................................................................................................

LV 4

OtakuSumit

This is the best Ben 10 fanfiction I've come across so far. The author has done an excellent job expanding the world and incorporating the Jack Friday family into the story. They've also made changes to the canon lore that makes more sense than the original version. The characters are well-developed and there's an interesting arc involving time travel and the first version of Ben 10k, which takes a darker turn. Overall, the story is very engaging. Though I do have to mention that there is a harem aspect to it. Despite this, I highly recommend giving it a read.

LV 14

Deverosfear

This is a good take on the Ben 10 story and I honestly find the writing path really cleaver that you set up the background. Then going through the tv show episode by episode taking the logical extenion of what your character would do. Then showing logical reactions to there activity so far it’s a fun butterfly effect.