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Author here,I know I shouldn't be shamelessly making this review but I want to clear some people based on the novel and I'll start with the world setting and then characters. The novel was based in old times when there was no technology but it immediately shifted to modern world where the MC would have to grow strong and help stop a demon invasion,the humans think they know how to deal with this but even with their powers they aren't aware of everything happening around them. Luis: If you've been reading the novel lately then you will be aware that Luis is the MC yeah he's not going to be strong and steady from the start and will grow at a steady pace,so if you're expecting a really powerful and fearless MC from the start he's not here. Tammy: She's a pretty strong one from the start,filled with pride and arrogance,she sees Luis as a weakling but all these things are used to cover up the loneliness she feels sometimes, I know you're already guessing how this turns out but she'll actually turn around and become of more help to Luis,I know you're wondering if the tides will turn so why don't you find out. Greg is Tammy's father who has a lot of mysteries sorrounding him,Sarah his wife and Ray his son. That brings us to the bad guy. Lucifer: Eager to rule the world after his plans were destroyed by Zillah he decided to lay low and build his army, waiting until the final day when he will strike but along the way he encounters someone who is very similar to what he wanted to forget, someone who is able to resist his evil manipulations and force at a certain level and that's when he finds out that he so thought easy battle won't be that after all. I hope I was able to make the novel as clear as possible,let me know questions on the comment section.
This novel have great potential. Good world building, character growth, system, etc. But need more regular updates. Keep going..............
It has been an interesting story all along and am really enjoying it. It good that the story pace is slow, to put it all the author is really good, i might not be a writer but this is actually awesome🖒🖒🖒🖒.💯
The start is particularly painful, but it gets better.. Also kind of lost the potential of an interesting start after falling by being spoonfed the essentials by some family that hit him with a car..
I really like this novel, but i hate love triangles. If you can please tell me who are you pairing luis with i’d apreicate it.
Author of you are reading then plz answer I wanted to ask a few questions😀
I love how Luis ( main character ) is shown, how far he has came from being with his aunt to becoming a demi-angel to an angel. which is all ive so far gotten up to. I hope the best for the author. my only wish is to never drop or stop updating this book. Its too good to be lost :) i am proud to support this book with a review and any coins ive got. it makes my day to read your book
wow! this novel is good both the vocabulary;it is just like i am watching movie while reading it. keep it up the sky is your limit . my God help you dear kudo's!!!
i think this novel I of great potential of fantasy...... with good vocabulary development ........ atleast with ....this kind of novel .....we all can learn more in placing of English words well done my fellow Nigerian keep it up
I have been reading this book for a while now and so far ,I found it interesting.. Good job Author. Also thanks for your motivation in helping me write mine.
this is a really good book. there are occasional writing errors, but in spite of that the book held my attention long enough for me to sink into a very enjoyable story.
Well, it's time for a review. I love the story and charters, I like how the mc isn't stupid or overly nice and thinks about his actions system is great and the world-building is good to
Great novel, besides the small grammatical errors you have a wonderful novel here and I would advice others to try it out💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
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Only on chapter 40 but im loving the story so far, excited to see where the story goes!
This is a very nice book, I'm pretty hooked up by the book. I like Luis' personality and I hope to be around him till the end of the book. Some minor mistakes which doesn't affect the book that much...in all, it is a great book.
It feels like it needs to be broken into smaller paragraphs. The spacing isnt great, the grammar isnt great either, and feels like a bad harry potter copy. It is unique in some ways and i think it has its good points, so goodluck author all the best
I feel like I'm reading a combination of Pathfinder and the last air bender, I get it and like it. When will the protagonist gain his water ability? Looking forward to seeing how it all unfolds, good luck.
Wow!!.. The storyline is captivating and I love the author's choice of words, it just makes you wanna go back and digest every word one after the other. Murder mysteries are always thrilling to read. This book is definitely worth it.
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Gives off a Harry Potter Vibe Doesn't live with parents, abused, child labor, mysterious past, magic, mother's eyes The grammar needs serious editing. little spacing, easy to miss, difficult to understand explanations etc.
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I'm into romance novels but this book was amazing to read, what a good writer,This could be my favorite novel and I'm really looking forward to reading more chapters on this novel, will definitely enjoy reading some chapters I didn't read. good job!!
Haven't actually read it, authors lately tend to make mc get spooky power, demons, devils, ancient beasts, and make the mc all edgy and dark, so ill keep an eye out for this, just don't make the MC afraid of killing, die a virgin and go around trying to help people
good for noobs and those who like naive MC. this story is about a boy . who is abused by his aunt and by the villager's.. the world MC live is a sword and magic. then got a book which took him in other world . the world where MC end up is modern one . MC is like a idiot who doesn't know anything. after that I am pretty sure you all can guess how it works. so I won't say more😆 well give this novel 4 star cause I know how hard is to write a novel as a fellow author myself.
Hello readers ❤️ Just wanted to drop this here so that if you have any questions about the novel you can ask me here and I will do my possible best to answer you. ❤️❤️
Guess it's time i drop a review!!!!!! what can i say???.....well the book is awesome and great!!!! bearing a lot of potentials.......i am hooked to the book and wish to follow Luis and Tammy in their adventures. i hope the author keeps writing and don't stop.
Author here,I know I shouldn't be shamelessly making this review but I want to clear some people based on the novel and I'll start with the world setting and then characters. The novel was based in old times when there was no technology but it immediately shifted to modern world where the MC would have to grow strong and help stop a demon invasion,the humans think they know how to deal with this but even with their powers they aren't aware of everything happening around them. Luis: If you've been reading the novel lately then you will be aware that Luis is the MC yeah he's not going to be strong and steady from the start and will grow at a steady pace,so if you're expecting a really powerful and fearless MC from the start he's not here. Tammy: She's a pretty strong one from the start,filled with pride and arrogance,she sees Luis as a weakling but all these things are used to cover up the loneliness she feels sometimes, I know you're already guessing how this turns out but she'll actually turn around and become of more help to Luis,I know you're wondering if the tides will turn so why don't you find out. Greg is Tammy's father who has a lot of mysteries sorrounding him,Sarah his wife and Ray his son. That brings us to the bad guy. Lucifer: Eager to rule the world after his plans were destroyed by Zillah he decided to lay low and build his army, waiting until the final day when he will strike but along the way he encounters someone who is very similar to what he wanted to forget, someone who is able to resist his evil manipulations and force at a certain level and that's when he finds out that he so thought easy battle won't be that after all. I hope I was able to make the novel as clear as possible,let me know questions on the comment section.
This novel have great potential. Good world building, character growth, system, etc. But need more regular updates. Keep going..............
It has been an interesting story all along and am really enjoying it. It good that the story pace is slow, to put it all the author is really good, i might not be a writer but this is actually awesome🖒🖒🖒🖒.💯
The start is particularly painful, but it gets better.. Also kind of lost the potential of an interesting start after falling by being spoonfed the essentials by some family that hit him with a car..
I really like this novel, but i hate love triangles. If you can please tell me who are you pairing luis with i’d apreicate it.
Author of you are reading then plz answer I wanted to ask a few questions😀
I love how Luis ( main character ) is shown, how far he has came from being with his aunt to becoming a demi-angel to an angel. which is all ive so far gotten up to. I hope the best for the author. my only wish is to never drop or stop updating this book. Its too good to be lost :) i am proud to support this book with a review and any coins ive got. it makes my day to read your book
wow! this novel is good both the vocabulary;it is just like i am watching movie while reading it. keep it up the sky is your limit . my God help you dear kudo's!!!
i think this novel I of great potential of fantasy...... with good vocabulary development ........ atleast with ....this kind of novel .....we all can learn more in placing of English words well done my fellow Nigerian keep it up
I have been reading this book for a while now and so far ,I found it interesting.. Good job Author. Also thanks for your motivation in helping me write mine.
this is a really good book. there are occasional writing errors, but in spite of that the book held my attention long enough for me to sink into a very enjoyable story.
Well, it's time for a review. I love the story and charters, I like how the mc isn't stupid or overly nice and thinks about his actions system is great and the world-building is good to
Great novel, besides the small grammatical errors you have a wonderful novel here and I would advice others to try it out💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
Revelar Spoiler Only on chapter 40 but im loving the story so far, excited to see where the story goes!
This is a very nice book, I'm pretty hooked up by the book. I like Luis' personality and I hope to be around him till the end of the book. Some minor mistakes which doesn't affect the book that much...in all, it is a great book.
It feels like it needs to be broken into smaller paragraphs. The spacing isnt great, the grammar isnt great either, and feels like a bad harry potter copy. It is unique in some ways and i think it has its good points, so goodluck author all the best
I feel like I'm reading a combination of Pathfinder and the last air bender, I get it and like it. When will the protagonist gain his water ability? Looking forward to seeing how it all unfolds, good luck.
Wow!!.. The storyline is captivating and I love the author's choice of words, it just makes you wanna go back and digest every word one after the other. Murder mysteries are always thrilling to read. This book is definitely worth it.
You shouldn’t read spoilers.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Revelar Spoiler Gives off a Harry Potter Vibe Doesn't live with parents, abused, child labor, mysterious past, magic, mother's eyes The grammar needs serious editing. little spacing, easy to miss, difficult to understand explanations etc.
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I'm into romance novels but this book was amazing to read, what a good writer,This could be my favorite novel and I'm really looking forward to reading more chapters on this novel, will definitely enjoy reading some chapters I didn't read. good job!!
Haven't actually read it, authors lately tend to make mc get spooky power, demons, devils, ancient beasts, and make the mc all edgy and dark, so ill keep an eye out for this, just don't make the MC afraid of killing, die a virgin and go around trying to help people
good for noobs and those who like naive MC. this story is about a boy . who is abused by his aunt and by the villager's.. the world MC live is a sword and magic. then got a book which took him in other world . the world where MC end up is modern one . MC is like a idiot who doesn't know anything. after that I am pretty sure you all can guess how it works. so I won't say more😆 well give this novel 4 star cause I know how hard is to write a novel as a fellow author myself.
Hello readers ❤️ Just wanted to drop this here so that if you have any questions about the novel you can ask me here and I will do my possible best to answer you. ❤️❤️
Guess it's time i drop a review!!!!!! what can i say???.....well the book is awesome and great!!!! bearing a lot of potentials.......i am hooked to the book and wish to follow Luis and Tammy in their adventures. i hope the author keeps writing and don't stop.