Speedster in Multi-verse

LV 4

Sham_Pain

The time is impossible to understand. Trying to follow the story gives me headaches. There is practically no mention that the MC is in UA at all and the only real hint he is Nejire mentioning that something happened to class 1-A. it jumps around way too much. The underground fighting ring came out of no where and is honestly kind of boring. The character interactions are fine, but it feels like the rest of the world is ignored completely.

LV 15

Tevin_Persinger

Terrible. I advise against reading it until some additional edits are don't to the chapters. Randomly out of no where he happens to be in UA as a third year when no such thing was mentioned to even insinuate he was in UA. MC decides to tell his girlfriend he wants a harem right after almost dieing because the mc entered the underground world of quirks. His quirk was explained as to trade vitality for power but somewhere to seems to have changed into a (return to 0) type of power when once you reach human limitations he can make that his base strength and start working out all over again. Just so many things that don't add up whatsoever. I sometimes feels like chapters are just missing with how much the author just expects us to know.

LV 14

Xavier_Cross

just not good wasted 4 hrs trying see if it was any good. trash trash trash 🗑 trash trash trash 🗑 trash trash trash trash trash trash trash

LV 14

Josh_Richie

Just started this ff today and I'm not gonna lie, I liked it until episode 46... what's the point of the ntr? I expected a lot but ntr? and worse still against a married couple with a grandkids... that's low man, very low

LV 15

Youloose687

the development of the story is a nice mix between slow and a fast paced story, because you can tell that the author is trying to develop the characters in a slow pace that would make sense if the author is trying to have us have a sense of connection to them, and it is fast by trying to get through all of the action in 1 chapter. I also like the fact that the story doesn't really care about the actual MHA universe which is basically just Easter eggs at this point. the author makes me realize that to create what I consider a good fan fic is to use whatever story your basing it off of as a template not a storyboard.

LV 2

Dragon_FRUITs

Can you remove the ntr part author, replace it with somethibg else or just remove yoshi something character. Its just that ntr part is my breaking point in your story. after countless plot hole, unconditional pacing, and many selfish action with full plot armor, it ended at ntr, i mean if you had kept ntr tag before writing 42 page chapter solely on ntr action and the next chapter on breaking a good realtion, while not even writing the whole consequence scene separate, you just mix it up with happy daily life. If you could not understand what i mean above, here a short summary. A good story with plot holes and some ok mistakes. but change to ntr story, as one of the main foundation for a female lead. so recommend adding warning like. ntr, dark mc, selfish, manipulative, ruthless, Harem.

LV 3

Kaliv

Мусор даже объяснять не буду!🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

LV 1

RedStar_PH1

tch mc bad cringed,dont make sense why underground fighting againg for money? tch he can just stole it from street thugs that cant see you or go to other country you can run through the ocean steal money there then

LV 5

MiniAwesome1

The MC gains full control over his speed force (Flash powers) after a time skip in the first few chapters, but it is done well. The novel is not centered around the main cast or plot of MHA, but they are still present in the background and are occasionally relevant. The overall writing quality and story are good, with the only problem being somewhat frequent mixups of the words 'he' and 'she'.

LV 4

ingpone_maszeh

i just feel betrayed after seeing the title then i saw the quirk name, its just not for me i guess so yeah sorry for the review, and i think thats it

LV 3

Murtaza_Ahmed

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😊👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 2

Canadian_Llama

Honestly, I like where this story is heading and have been here since when you first published the story… even after the rewrite. Very descriptive and detailed. The author doesn’t just sudden introduce new characters, leading to a more structured and flowing storyline/plot. I really feel like this story should be more popular than it currently is. Probably just need to add more tags to the story to bring in new readers. Other than that can’t wait to see how the story progresses.

LV 1

EZRED

I didn't want to write but I got to chapter 38 and this thing still won't open. So I'm going to be a little brazen and try to unlock this thing by giving it 5 stars.

LV 3

LiquidCallous

it uses the accursed style for dialogue meaning it is TRASHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH