DxD: Scion of Lucifuge

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Kronos_

From what I've seen so far, the story looks very promising.

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Emptyentity

A piece of advice: it's better to drop the third-person objective narration style; it's too much tell, never show. Use subjective or even omniscient. We, as readers, want some connection to the inner world of MC, and here, we get none. It's a character-driven story, not a thriller.

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R0B

The story is not bad, but I don't like "catch all pokemon" vibe. There's no resistance, they are brainwashed by the devil pieces. Mc just do whatever he wants and everything works out. I don't like the fact that he can use infinite amount of devil pieces, because that means he can use more than one on a single person, but he doesn't do that also - a waste.

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LuciferMorninStar

Really good story, we will see what gonna happen next.,............................................................................,................................................................................... .....

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DragonnX

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Exticity

Nice is this fanfic a Chinese fanfic if so does anybody it’s name

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GlN

All you really need to know is that there really isnt any thoughts going through his head. The story goes from point a to point b to point c, theres no side thoughts or goals, the MC is overly blunt and everyone agrees with him. Other characters dont really have any thoughts of their own and takes the MC's words at face value. its most shown in the meeting with Urodaki in the latest chapter.

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Asura69s

Hm hm this story is everything I need and a full-fledged one so yes op

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JhakqueZyx6

Honestly I tried looking for raw or mtl version but omg they are all so terrible and all over the place. the story get messy and chaotic so props to you for proper translating that mess

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Moriaty1

Great FanFiction I love it Don't drop it And Please add Daki in the harem MC ❤️❤️❤️❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥 …………. ………. …… …. .. . . . .

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Rose_Matheus

My review up to the 4th chapter! for me the story is very good, there are no mistakes in writing, and it is constantly being updated, but I don't know if the author will keep this pace, but as long as it is updated daily or weekly for me it's great!

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WALEED

Really good story, we will see what gonna happen next.,............................................................................,................................................................................... .....

this is a really good novel that I recommend. Has good grammar and plot

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krish_digwal

Seems promising from what i have read. Also nice, that the character is an oc, so the author can do whatever he wants. The chapters could be longer, so he would not need to upload every day.