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I'm still in the early chapters, but I believe this fanfic is one of the best of MHA out there. So far it is my number 2 favorite. I'm very eager to keep on reading, as I know it will only get better! I totally recommend this to people who are searching for god level fanfics because this is definitely one.
I would have too much to praise, so I'll simply focus on the small stuff i dislike; - The tag OP is no joke here, there's no tense and doubtful situations cause of that. But my issue here is how it was done... she's too adaptable and can do so far anything on any situation without relying on others even for small stuff, as she can basically copy any powers. She was already OP before, now she's self sufficient. --- All in all the story is well written, i enjoy how the characters interact with each other and how small details are taken into consideration. Like characters commenting based on only what they saw instead of the reader's perspective (seen this a lot already), the teasing btwn friends and how they react to provocations on diff levels and even on the 18+ scenes there was some character development, like mc trying new stuff for curiosity. All small stuff, but made it a bit more 'humanized'.
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Одна из самых лучших работ по мга, возможно даже самый лучший, в любом случае я надеюсь что ты закончиш эту историю до конца, и я надеюсь будет побольше постельных сцен тодороки и кары, также это первый фф в котором гг девушка встречается с парнем а не с девушкой, я почему-то никогда не видел другие фф в котором гг девушка увлечена или даже встречается с парнем, но в любом случае это офигенные фанфик. Удачи в других фф проектах
It’s an amazing story I just wish the author finished it or left the story at a better ending.
Uma boa novel pena q foi abandonada 2 anos e nada q pena , porem poderia explorar mais as coisas ja q o cannor foi de f [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Really like this book. Not only is it one of the few GOOD female oc fanfictions, but it’s also wholesome which I personally like along with a dash of dominance over the characters from the anime. The one complaint I have is that this hasn’t been updated in a while. I would personally LOVE for this fanfic to continue being updated by the author so if you’re reading this please I [img=update]
1 star mentally for killing izuku. It added nothing except pure edge. No reason justifies twisting a cannon character like this just to find a reason to kill him. Like what???
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I really liked this in every aspect I could think of you made a fun and funny story that wasn't filled with random annoying bs that I have seen some people do in fanfics
I really liked the story, but I really can't continue reading because I don't like a novel based on the woman's POV... it's interesting to see how a simple question can end up with a "united" family, and how the characters seem to me more humans, it has some parts that are quite "forced" so to speak, but overall it's pretty good
I like everything but the romance. Would have preferred himiko or alice over shouta. I mean ugh I never liked him as a character. Also would have been more fun if mc was more of a flirt/tease. Fits the image of a fox better.
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I've read only a few chapters so don't take this to heart. Dropped the story now but would definitely pick it up later. This could be only me but the story development is not that... great. The situations/interactions seemed a bit forced or rather there seems to be no setup for these. Not really good at putting things into words but basically how it feels is like an essay with no introduction, great body, and an okay conclusion. Again this could be me only. Other than that the writing quality has barely any faults in it. Character design is interesting and the world building is the same as canon but with a few twist. WQ - 5 SD - 3 CD - 5 US - 5 WB - 4
While I like this novel and it's concept and plot is awesome let's just say the latest chapters are rather messed up I felt like the author-chan or is it Kun? Got drunk and went mad crazy with her ideas and novel not to mention the ability to just steal quirks sort of made the entire thing pointless and imbalanced the novels power system.
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you really do posses the dao of writing [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=coins][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I really wanted to read this but I've been inflicted with the curse to not enjoy anything but yuri romance anymore,so I couldn't read more then 5 chapters in, just wanted to post this to give out my honest opinion.
An Amazing Fanfic with great and unique characters. It also isn't a simple copy paste from the actual anime so good job. The only negative that I could give would be that the Update stability has suffered. But this is normal since the author recently started another story that could be connected with this one. Great Fanfic.
is very good novel. ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
love this book and the story within. and the fact that she's op but that because she worked hard and not other bs. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Слов нет зто есть звёздочки (つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
The story is great and the beginning was wonderful, it has a fun and exciting story and it looks like it was created by an expert. Almost no writing mistakes.
This is the first story with female mc I've ever liked. I don't know why but this story has its own charm, and the mc really smart. Please keep writing this story author-san. Thank you.
no he comenzado a leer, pero me intrigo bastante y le di un vistazo al primer capitulo +18 y otros que tienen titulos interesantes, y debo decir que definitivamente me llamo la atencion esta perspectiva. casi en un 99% de las novelas que he leido han sido desde la perspectiva de un hombre, y verlo desde la perspectiva de una mujer me intrigo (tambien lei la novela de naruto de la diosa de la nieve que es gemela de naruto).
Alright this is what im looking for, amazing desu, and btw there is a dude who will spoil the novel, so be sure not to look at the paragraph comments.
One of the best books I've read, I just wish the author would change from trying to mass update to one chapter a day. If they did that then this would definitely be a 5 star book instead of 4.8.
Writing Quality 5/5 Stability of Updates 5/5 Story Development 5/5 Character Design 5/5 World Background 5/5 Good, Good, Good, Good, Good, Good, Good, Good, Good, Good, Good, Good.
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Eu curti, é uma das poucas histórias de protagonista feminina que não era um homem na vida passada, a utilização do manga do vigilante também foi uma boa jogada, eu só vi 2 novels que usaram ele, e também os poderes da protagonista são bem criativos, pena que não é totalmente explorado a parte da habilidade armazenamento ela poderia fazer umas coisas bem poucas.
I like where the story is going and the development that takes place in it. Keep it up author. [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
I know this may seem rather high, but I actually like this book, it's a bit refreshing from all those other novels that have massive harems for no reason and a lackluster plot. So keep it up.[img=update].
I rarely write reviews, and when I do they are often made to help even out the 5* spam that doesn't reflect accurately on the fic in question. This, however, isn't one of those times. This fanfic is, to put it simply, wonderful. The stability of updates is one of the highest on this site, and the author manages to do it with consistently well-written, and high-quality chapters. Because, as we all know, anyone with access to a working keyboard could write a chapter a day, but writing more than that, and of high quality is rare on this platform. The character design is one of the better points of this fanfic. The main character carries this book's interactions between her friend group, and bystanders, really well. The surrounding cast doesn't feel like a large number of mindless drones that one would expect with such high update speeds. The main character has a perfect combination of realistic world views, charisma, and comedic timing. Which leads to entertaining scenarios that are abundant. The main character looks like Kaga, from Azur Lane, and that's already a plus in my book due to her being one of my fave shipgirls from the game. She is straight and has a relationship with Shoto Todoroki, which is refreshing to read. It's rare to find straight female MCs on Webnovel, at least in my experience. Their relationship doesn't come off as forced, probably due to the book being a single pairing so the author had more time to develop the bonds. It's a guilty pleasure of mine to re-read their fluffy interactions. The world of MHA has been expanded on, and the author isn't afraid to not follow the plot. Which I greatly appreciate in my reading material. One such example is the sports festival, the events have been reworked. At least the first one has, because that's the latest chapter released as of me writing this review. The writing quality is very consistent throughout, with only minuscule barely noticeable errors, which I had to really comb through to find. That fact alone should tell you it's better than 95% of the other fics on this site. Overall, it's a pleasant read. I highly suggest that anyone that is thinking of reading it, do so, you won't regret it.
I'm still in the early chapters, but I believe this fanfic is one of the best of MHA out there. So far it is my number 2 favorite. I'm very eager to keep on reading, as I know it will only get better! I totally recommend this to people who are searching for god level fanfics because this is definitely one.
I would have too much to praise, so I'll simply focus on the small stuff i dislike; - The tag OP is no joke here, there's no tense and doubtful situations cause of that. But my issue here is how it was done... she's too adaptable and can do so far anything on any situation without relying on others even for small stuff, as she can basically copy any powers. She was already OP before, now she's self sufficient. --- All in all the story is well written, i enjoy how the characters interact with each other and how small details are taken into consideration. Like characters commenting based on only what they saw instead of the reader's perspective (seen this a lot already), the teasing btwn friends and how they react to provocations on diff levels and even on the 18+ scenes there was some character development, like mc trying new stuff for curiosity. All small stuff, but made it a bit more 'humanized'.
Revelar Spoiler Одна из самых лучших работ по мга, возможно даже самый лучший, в любом случае я надеюсь что ты закончиш эту историю до конца, и я надеюсь будет побольше постельных сцен тодороки и кары, также это первый фф в котором гг девушка встречается с парнем а не с девушкой, я почему-то никогда не видел другие фф в котором гг девушка увлечена или даже встречается с парнем, но в любом случае это офигенные фанфик. Удачи в других фф проектах
It’s an amazing story I just wish the author finished it or left the story at a better ending.
Uma boa novel pena q foi abandonada 2 anos e nada q pena , porem poderia explorar mais as coisas ja q o cannor foi de f [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Really like this book. Not only is it one of the few GOOD female oc fanfictions, but it’s also wholesome which I personally like along with a dash of dominance over the characters from the anime. The one complaint I have is that this hasn’t been updated in a while. I would personally LOVE for this fanfic to continue being updated by the author so if you’re reading this please I [img=update]
1 star mentally for killing izuku. It added nothing except pure edge. No reason justifies twisting a cannon character like this just to find a reason to kill him. Like what???
Revelar Spoiler I really liked this in every aspect I could think of you made a fun and funny story that wasn't filled with random annoying bs that I have seen some people do in fanfics
I really liked the story, but I really can't continue reading because I don't like a novel based on the woman's POV... it's interesting to see how a simple question can end up with a "united" family, and how the characters seem to me more humans, it has some parts that are quite "forced" so to speak, but overall it's pretty good
I like everything but the romance. Would have preferred himiko or alice over shouta. I mean ugh I never liked him as a character. Also would have been more fun if mc was more of a flirt/tease. Fits the image of a fox better.
Revelar Spoiler I've read only a few chapters so don't take this to heart. Dropped the story now but would definitely pick it up later. This could be only me but the story development is not that... great. The situations/interactions seemed a bit forced or rather there seems to be no setup for these. Not really good at putting things into words but basically how it feels is like an essay with no introduction, great body, and an okay conclusion. Again this could be me only. Other than that the writing quality has barely any faults in it. Character design is interesting and the world building is the same as canon but with a few twist. WQ - 5 SD - 3 CD - 5 US - 5 WB - 4
While I like this novel and it's concept and plot is awesome let's just say the latest chapters are rather messed up I felt like the author-chan or is it Kun? Got drunk and went mad crazy with her ideas and novel not to mention the ability to just steal quirks sort of made the entire thing pointless and imbalanced the novels power system.
Revelar Spoiler you really do posses the dao of writing [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=coins][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I really wanted to read this but I've been inflicted with the curse to not enjoy anything but yuri romance anymore,so I couldn't read more then 5 chapters in, just wanted to post this to give out my honest opinion.
An Amazing Fanfic with great and unique characters. It also isn't a simple copy paste from the actual anime so good job. The only negative that I could give would be that the Update stability has suffered. But this is normal since the author recently started another story that could be connected with this one. Great Fanfic.
is very good novel. ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
love this book and the story within. and the fact that she's op but that because she worked hard and not other bs. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Слов нет зто есть звёздочки (つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ(つ✧ω✧)つ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
The story is great and the beginning was wonderful, it has a fun and exciting story and it looks like it was created by an expert. Almost no writing mistakes.
This is the first story with female mc I've ever liked. I don't know why but this story has its own charm, and the mc really smart. Please keep writing this story author-san. Thank you.
no he comenzado a leer, pero me intrigo bastante y le di un vistazo al primer capitulo +18 y otros que tienen titulos interesantes, y debo decir que definitivamente me llamo la atencion esta perspectiva. casi en un 99% de las novelas que he leido han sido desde la perspectiva de un hombre, y verlo desde la perspectiva de una mujer me intrigo (tambien lei la novela de naruto de la diosa de la nieve que es gemela de naruto).
Alright this is what im looking for, amazing desu, and btw there is a dude who will spoil the novel, so be sure not to look at the paragraph comments.
One of the best books I've read, I just wish the author would change from trying to mass update to one chapter a day. If they did that then this would definitely be a 5 star book instead of 4.8.
Writing Quality 5/5 Stability of Updates 5/5 Story Development 5/5 Character Design 5/5 World Background 5/5 Good, Good, Good, Good, Good, Good, Good, Good, Good, Good, Good, Good.
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Eu curti, é uma das poucas histórias de protagonista feminina que não era um homem na vida passada, a utilização do manga do vigilante também foi uma boa jogada, eu só vi 2 novels que usaram ele, e também os poderes da protagonista são bem criativos, pena que não é totalmente explorado a parte da habilidade armazenamento ela poderia fazer umas coisas bem poucas.
I like where the story is going and the development that takes place in it. Keep it up author. [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
I know this may seem rather high, but I actually like this book, it's a bit refreshing from all those other novels that have massive harems for no reason and a lackluster plot. So keep it up.[img=update].
I rarely write reviews, and when I do they are often made to help even out the 5* spam that doesn't reflect accurately on the fic in question. This, however, isn't one of those times. This fanfic is, to put it simply, wonderful. The stability of updates is one of the highest on this site, and the author manages to do it with consistently well-written, and high-quality chapters. Because, as we all know, anyone with access to a working keyboard could write a chapter a day, but writing more than that, and of high quality is rare on this platform. The character design is one of the better points of this fanfic. The main character carries this book's interactions between her friend group, and bystanders, really well. The surrounding cast doesn't feel like a large number of mindless drones that one would expect with such high update speeds. The main character has a perfect combination of realistic world views, charisma, and comedic timing. Which leads to entertaining scenarios that are abundant. The main character looks like Kaga, from Azur Lane, and that's already a plus in my book due to her being one of my fave shipgirls from the game. She is straight and has a relationship with Shoto Todoroki, which is refreshing to read. It's rare to find straight female MCs on Webnovel, at least in my experience. Their relationship doesn't come off as forced, probably due to the book being a single pairing so the author had more time to develop the bonds. It's a guilty pleasure of mine to re-read their fluffy interactions. The world of MHA has been expanded on, and the author isn't afraid to not follow the plot. Which I greatly appreciate in my reading material. One such example is the sports festival, the events have been reworked. At least the first one has, because that's the latest chapter released as of me writing this review. The writing quality is very consistent throughout, with only minuscule barely noticeable errors, which I had to really comb through to find. That fact alone should tell you it's better than 95% of the other fics on this site. Overall, it's a pleasant read. I highly suggest that anyone that is thinking of reading it, do so, you won't regret it.