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To me, it's interesting to read this story not because the storyline only, it also have it's own evolution, and the writing is unique. For example, the MC asking the system to list down his ability. I hope he'll make some improvement, especially his grammar. That's all from me.
overall i really like this book, the world building and story progression is good, and it is one of the few web novels with systems that are actually good, the system isn't bratty or smug and does its job when it needs to. The protagonist too is good, he feels like a person that can actually exist and have overall good personality. So in conclusion give this story a try, its some of the few good ones in this site (i am writing this review to motivate the author as i am genuinely hooked up to the story and don't want this to be dropped) (sry for my english, its not my first language)
kingdom building ... nice bro... hope he create monster kingdom and make it more advance than modern cicilization conbining science and magic in technology... also don't just make mc conquer universe in few years... take thousands of year make a civilization for him... that would be nice cause many novel they just make civilization prosper in just few months and years which is just too unrealistic..... "white dragon lord" have one of the best kingdom building..... hope you do great....
i've read till chapter 89 and i think that it is a sufficient number of chaps read to give out ur hopinion. the story started off as interesting and even original and different from the norm with the mc accepting what he has become and acting as such. was he cold? maybe, evil? nah he was just neutral. but then going forward in the story it looked like he started acting in a cowardly at first but then he started being more rational more reserved only to revert to his timid self once again. it may be that this just aint my type of novel so dont take it too seriously keep up the work.
It's not bad, but the MC doesn't really struggle. Every. At all. The story is just composed of the MC hunting, mostly unopposed, while wacky stuff happens in the background. Needless to say, I lost interest fairly quickly.
Some Minor Spoiler ahead read at ur own curiosity My review of this novel of chapters 1-93 - Pros -Neutral protagonist - Becomes strong very fast, and Op of course - has a built different system -Grammar is good, other than some minor mistakes -Stability Of Updates Good 5/5 Story development Good 4/5 World background Havent had much world building barley know other the few mentions of how big the world is, or i just must been high through it -cons -Annoying dull side characters Annoying and unnecessary fml, let’s not even talk about her background which is so unnecessary -Not right now but will in a future chapter become human to accompany his Fiance/fml The author plan to add it said in chapter 85 in the last paragraphs - uses too much time sometimes to kill his prey just because he wants some fun Personal enjoyed it until he started building his organization
I really like this story, especially how the author described the fighting scene. It's so amazing!! . Anyways sometimes the words are a bit confusing but it takes time to understand. GREAT JOB!!!!
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp[img=exp]] good evolution novel
Pls Tell, Where the World is set-is it Medieval or Modern? 🥺☺☺🥺☺🥺☺🥺☺😣😣😣😣🥺☺🥺😞🥺🧐🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🥺🙏😜🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Cheese is good, but I get zero cheese, and parents, and happiness [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
its not a bad read. . . . . 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
The overall story was good and I was enjoying it up until chapter 40. He seems to gain strength wayyy to quickly and all of the fights seem dull and one sided compared to the beginning. I guess it’s an ok read, however, I don’t think I can continue reading this story.
I really enjoyed the story and found the plot very interesting, I like the development of the protagonist and how his personality evolves, I haven't seen the novel yet, I'm looking forward to more chapters,
Great work. Just need more frequent updates....... . . v..... . . .. . . . . . .. v.. . .. v.v.. v.. . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . v.v... . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . .. .. . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . .. ... .. .. . .. . .. .. . . .. . .. . . .. .
am I seeing things or was it the chapter supposed to be 67 or something? [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
Everything was good until the character Día came into play. Story started deviating towards something unknown and narrow. I only wish the story will be good in future. But the story seems to be out of my play. World background is not clear and sudden appearance of characters make it hard for me to follow. The characters don't have any substance but they are there in the story.
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Good Story But there are a lot of plot holes , so explain things that why this or that happen and lastly the System needs a improvement on my opinion GOOD LUCK
Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice
I haven’t Read it yet I’m Fonna read it but if you see this please answer Does the main character have multiple Heads like on the cover page or not and if he does, they are different From the main head [the main character] like different personalitys and stuff if u do answer this thank you.
this is a great story and while there are some mistakes along the way with writing and side characters which was already mentioned and addressed so this is great. if I could pay for more updates I would
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To be honest. The story is pretty good and well written. But the side storys, in which side characters are introduced are way to long. Tbh it feels like there are less chapters about the mc then there are about side characters. And even if the focus shifts back to the mc its not rly relevant or a major part of the story. Last time he just ate/consumed some rocks and talked with a weird lazy silver guy. And the impact these side characters at the end have arent nearly worth the chapters it took to introduce them and flesh out there personality. (at least the last time) The last "antagonist" (the dude with the weird item) just randomly got eaten by the mc after his plotarmor broke. It just feels stretched and unaccessary. Anyway i hope this isnt the case with this New bad guy and i hope that there will be more focus on the actual mc of the story. Currently at chapter 49 Hope you have a great day. Bye
Revelar Spoiler
A novel with great potential. I read the 1st chapter only and I will go back to reading as soon as I complete writing this review! Hope you keep updating with long chapters!
Keep that momentum you can do it!!! Ganbatte kudasai!!! Fighting!! Hope there any Mangaka want to visual your light novel and soon become the best light novel like tensura
I am really excited about the upcomming battle and i would like for more interaction between the mc and the human empire. Bit i can recommend this book as its really refreshing in the isekai genre:)
Friendly notice: English is not my first/main language and as such I'm not that great at it. If dear readers notice any grammatical errors or dear readers have an interesting suggestion. Please do let me know.
To me, it's interesting to read this story not because the storyline only, it also have it's own evolution, and the writing is unique. For example, the MC asking the system to list down his ability. I hope he'll make some improvement, especially his grammar. That's all from me.
overall i really like this book, the world building and story progression is good, and it is one of the few web novels with systems that are actually good, the system isn't bratty or smug and does its job when it needs to. The protagonist too is good, he feels like a person that can actually exist and have overall good personality. So in conclusion give this story a try, its some of the few good ones in this site (i am writing this review to motivate the author as i am genuinely hooked up to the story and don't want this to be dropped) (sry for my english, its not my first language)
kingdom building ... nice bro... hope he create monster kingdom and make it more advance than modern cicilization conbining science and magic in technology... also don't just make mc conquer universe in few years... take thousands of year make a civilization for him... that would be nice cause many novel they just make civilization prosper in just few months and years which is just too unrealistic..... "white dragon lord" have one of the best kingdom building..... hope you do great....
i've read till chapter 89 and i think that it is a sufficient number of chaps read to give out ur hopinion. the story started off as interesting and even original and different from the norm with the mc accepting what he has become and acting as such. was he cold? maybe, evil? nah he was just neutral. but then going forward in the story it looked like he started acting in a cowardly at first but then he started being more rational more reserved only to revert to his timid self once again. it may be that this just aint my type of novel so dont take it too seriously keep up the work.
It's not bad, but the MC doesn't really struggle. Every. At all. The story is just composed of the MC hunting, mostly unopposed, while wacky stuff happens in the background. Needless to say, I lost interest fairly quickly.
Some Minor Spoiler ahead read at ur own curiosity My review of this novel of chapters 1-93 - Pros -Neutral protagonist - Becomes strong very fast, and Op of course - has a built different system -Grammar is good, other than some minor mistakes -Stability Of Updates Good 5/5 Story development Good 4/5 World background Havent had much world building barley know other the few mentions of how big the world is, or i just must been high through it -cons -Annoying dull side characters Annoying and unnecessary fml, let’s not even talk about her background which is so unnecessary -Not right now but will in a future chapter become human to accompany his Fiance/fml The author plan to add it said in chapter 85 in the last paragraphs - uses too much time sometimes to kill his prey just because he wants some fun Personal enjoyed it until he started building his organization
I really like this story, especially how the author described the fighting scene. It's so amazing!! . Anyways sometimes the words are a bit confusing but it takes time to understand. GREAT JOB!!!!
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp[img=exp]] good evolution novel
Pls Tell, Where the World is set-is it Medieval or Modern? 🥺☺☺🥺☺🥺☺🥺☺😣😣😣😣🥺☺🥺😞🥺🧐🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🥺🙏😜🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Cheese is good, but I get zero cheese, and parents, and happiness [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
its not a bad read. . . . . 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
The overall story was good and I was enjoying it up until chapter 40. He seems to gain strength wayyy to quickly and all of the fights seem dull and one sided compared to the beginning. I guess it’s an ok read, however, I don’t think I can continue reading this story.
I really enjoyed the story and found the plot very interesting, I like the development of the protagonist and how his personality evolves, I haven't seen the novel yet, I'm looking forward to more chapters,
Great work. Just need more frequent updates....... . . v..... . . .. . . . . . .. v.. . .. v.v.. v.. . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . v.v... . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . .. .. . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . .. ... .. .. . .. . .. .. . . .. . .. . . .. .
am I seeing things or was it the chapter supposed to be 67 or something? [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
Everything was good until the character Día came into play. Story started deviating towards something unknown and narrow. I only wish the story will be good in future. But the story seems to be out of my play. World background is not clear and sudden appearance of characters make it hard for me to follow. The characters don't have any substance but they are there in the story.
Adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra
Good Story But there are a lot of plot holes , so explain things that why this or that happen and lastly the System needs a improvement on my opinion GOOD LUCK
Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice Noice
I haven’t Read it yet I’m Fonna read it but if you see this please answer Does the main character have multiple Heads like on the cover page or not and if he does, they are different From the main head [the main character] like different personalitys and stuff if u do answer this thank you.
this is a great story and while there are some mistakes along the way with writing and side characters which was already mentioned and addressed so this is great. if I could pay for more updates I would
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
To be honest. The story is pretty good and well written. But the side storys, in which side characters are introduced are way to long. Tbh it feels like there are less chapters about the mc then there are about side characters. And even if the focus shifts back to the mc its not rly relevant or a major part of the story. Last time he just ate/consumed some rocks and talked with a weird lazy silver guy. And the impact these side characters at the end have arent nearly worth the chapters it took to introduce them and flesh out there personality. (at least the last time) The last "antagonist" (the dude with the weird item) just randomly got eaten by the mc after his plotarmor broke. It just feels stretched and unaccessary. Anyway i hope this isnt the case with this New bad guy and i hope that there will be more focus on the actual mc of the story. Currently at chapter 49 Hope you have a great day. Bye
Revelar Spoiler A novel with great potential. I read the 1st chapter only and I will go back to reading as soon as I complete writing this review! Hope you keep updating with long chapters!
Keep that momentum you can do it!!! Ganbatte kudasai!!! Fighting!! Hope there any Mangaka want to visual your light novel and soon become the best light novel like tensura
I am really excited about the upcomming battle and i would like for more interaction between the mc and the human empire. Bit i can recommend this book as its really refreshing in the isekai genre:)
Friendly notice: English is not my first/main language and as such I'm not that great at it. If dear readers notice any grammatical errors or dear readers have an interesting suggestion. Please do let me know.