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it looks like prologue has been skipped, what was his background? why did the village need to compensate him? what kind of system is this? an incomplete gamer system? i even see a dungeon in this, using flashback as a way to see his past and how he get his system or what system is that is trash imo
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This is a great story so far, author is a bit inexperienced and you can easily tell that, however he successfully recovers when it comes to flow and enjoyment. The story is indeed fun to read, probably one of the best to binge regarding naruto world. What is lacking is secondary-characters development, and character interactions looks a bit lacklustre and never explained; there are also no different povs but then again.... it is fun to read. Want to see how his relationship with the heroine will develop and what he will do with his affinities. Cant wait to read more!
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This is a realell written book and has an author that can change certain scenarios without their being holes in the story for example the exam being in the land of iron as it was a neutral land to meet the mc's love interest
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The chapters are fast. I give four star because being in the same team as as 7 is a bit too used for me and it is still very early in the story at the time of reviewing. But I do suggest that you tap more into the concept of weapons as I see everyone is focusing on ninjutsu and eight gates nowadays and some fuinjutsu. But never enough of bikujutsu(hope I spelled tight. Stuff like kenjutsu is cool. I think that enlarging shurikens into fuma shurikens and stuff like that.
well I don't know what to say, Grammarly sometimes, corrects the words to some things I don't want, but I try my best when I'm interested, so I'm sorry if you don't like it
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The novel is fine, the main fault is that it does not use capital letters. Not even in the title. Otherwise it's pretty good, but it corrects the capitalization, plissssssss
it looks like prologue has been skipped, what was his background? why did the village need to compensate him? what kind of system is this? an incomplete gamer system? i even see a dungeon in this, using flashback as a way to see his past and how he get his system or what system is that is trash imo
.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... I like'd
This is a great story so far, author is a bit inexperienced and you can easily tell that, however he successfully recovers when it comes to flow and enjoyment. The story is indeed fun to read, probably one of the best to binge regarding naruto world. What is lacking is secondary-characters development, and character interactions looks a bit lacklustre and never explained; there are also no different povs but then again.... it is fun to read. Want to see how his relationship with the heroine will develop and what he will do with his affinities. Cant wait to read more!
Is there romance?[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Thanks 🤩🥳🤩🥳🥳🤩🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🥳🤩🤩🥳🤩🥳🥳🤩🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳
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This is a realell written book and has an author that can change certain scenarios without their being holes in the story for example the exam being in the land of iron as it was a neutral land to meet the mc's love interest
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The chapters are fast. I give four star because being in the same team as as 7 is a bit too used for me and it is still very early in the story at the time of reviewing. But I do suggest that you tap more into the concept of weapons as I see everyone is focusing on ninjutsu and eight gates nowadays and some fuinjutsu. But never enough of bikujutsu(hope I spelled tight. Stuff like kenjutsu is cool. I think that enlarging shurikens into fuma shurikens and stuff like that.
well I don't know what to say, Grammarly sometimes, corrects the words to some things I don't want, but I try my best when I'm interested, so I'm sorry if you don't like it
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrmoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrmoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrr
The novel is fine, the main fault is that it does not use capital letters. Not even in the title. Otherwise it's pretty good, but it corrects the capitalization, plissssssss