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being thrown into naruto was kinda exciting.
getting a system is helpful too.
but remembering the fact that there was a man with a God complex, danzo, and madara that are just tip of the iceberg, all I could so was sigh.
I won nothing, just the oc.
no harem though
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Welp I feel like the author kinda forces too many things like Mc being and team 7 as a 4 man squad when konoha has use the 3 man cell for years and wouldn't just change it for someone of mcs caliber who is a orphan and has no backing, also would Kakashi really just let his student end up in the bingo book with useless attention when his student used chicory and Kakashi could've perfectly covered it up as him using it, I also feel that the author is too focused on land of iron even forcing the chunky exams to for some reason be there when the Mc actually has options in the land of the leaf like improving Chakra metal for a sword, learning Chakra coating from asuna, kenjutsj from hatake, learn Kakashi anbu sword arts, maybe even get insight from tenten as he trains with her all the time, etc.
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this fanfic have some potential but author just to lazy to write decent character background and decent story, in my opinion you better think if this fanfic just story board from author and not the fanfic itself
The chapters are fast. I give four star because being in the same team as as 7 is a bit too used for me and it is still very early in the story at the time of reviewing. But I do suggest that you tap more into the concept of weapons as I see everyone is focusing on ninjutsu and eight gates nowadays and some fuinjutsu. But never enough of bikujutsu(hope I spelled tight. Stuff like kenjutsu is cool. I think that enlarging shurikens into fuma shurikens and stuff like that.
That was the worst thing i have read. The writhing is horrendous, mc is more like author is speking, the story is garbage, story moves like a rocket.
This is an okay novel. Let's talk about the pros and cons. The pros is that it's easily legible without too glaring of a literacy issue and that they update quite frequently but the major con in my opinion is that the author has no idea where he want to go and make it less enjoyable. Like how he switch from temari to Samui to temari again because he didn't know what he wanted or how he just puts up a vote on what's gonna happen next. It feels less like a thought out and we'll tighten novel to a mish mash of ideas he thinks are cool but doesn't know how to connect them
well I don't know what to say, Grammarly sometimes, corrects the words to some things I don't want, but I try my best when I'm interested, so I'm sorry if you don't like it
is a generic story is nothing new. it's even more what these guys have with the gamer system, it's already boring it's always the same thing
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
no harem sign me up xdyxsdiysuzgicydyfzutxsxiydyxssdutskhskhxskhxzuxdhxdydyxxugfkdydeigtobtkcdudfkcgjcfiggvlfdyflvghddouukgfjcghzfkvhgzdhff
It is quite a good book just needs a bit more development overall but with the fact this is the author first time I will give it this much rating And let’s be honest no book is ever perfect
Writing a review for the Halloween Carnival Event. I haven't read this novel yet, but I'm sure it's great! Good luck to everyone with completing their quotas!
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this is one of the few fanfiction I have read to the last as this story protagonist character is likable bcz he doesn't say too much about how he is this strong and his secrets and the most important thing he doesn't go around hypocrising characters of original Naruto though he sometimes in his thought says sakura is useless but it's in his thought and he doesn't do any unnecessary things bcz of this .......and his system is also likable it doesn't make the ml too much overpowered that the story becomes boring........and the most important part the girlfriend of our protagonist is not annoying at all so I'll say story is one of the best I have read!!!!!!!
Well I seriously don't like the story.first of all author is so lazy to write the story that it feels lifeless. Second almost in all the naruto fan fics mc will get gamer system and will use his bonus points in body attributes instead of increasing chakra which is the base of all things in nija world.and same happened in this story. And author seriously lack knowledge about ninjutsu. And there is no point in joining any of main characters group.and he has a gamer system as his cheat but still need bloodline powers.and seriously substitution jutsu is not about swap place with others it's about showing that you are there while you really is not there by creating ellusion.
Hey, I want to edit this. Send me an email at throwaway5N45e1 @ gmail Otherwise the initial read was jarring and very hard to understand, to the point I assume english is not your first language.
Amazing storyline,love how you did the Mc’s own sage mode path and did not boot lick Naruto and Others. keep up the good work and you got my support [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
totally fascinating! !! !! !! ![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] wants more😃
it looks like prologue has been skipped, what was his background? why did the village need to compensate him? what kind of system is this? an incomplete gamer system? i even see a dungeon in this, using flashback as a way to see his past and how he get his system or what system is that is trash imo