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Great novel until chapter 1002. MC pursues his path for the sacrifice of the full world. Day by day he becomes a hypocrite. I am fully depressed about the story line.
Would love to read more… I really like the story but the grammar is KILLING me I can‘t read this anymore. Please get an editor. Other than that the story would be really good :)
The beginning of this novel was a bit boring and not too interesting. I have read a few cultivation novels and this one is quite good overall. The increasing cultivation through thieving is quite interesting. I feel the harem stuff was quite overused and while I overall like some of the harem girls I honestly don't care too much about them. But this novel is overall solid with the power and world building. A few things that makes me really annoyed are English author's who make very complex esoteric power realms that make me have no idea what is going on. like chill out a little bit with the weird power realms that I basically just ignore and when the mc goes up a power realm I have no idea what realm has actually at I just know has a little bit stronger
Hiii Wahi, I just came across Eternal Thief not long ago and it really caught my eye🥺! I happen to be a digital artist and If you’re ever interested in commissioning a cover or scene for your story, please feel free to reach out. I’d really loove to work with you on your characters!❤️❤️🫂
I just realised that the author also wrote Cursed Immortality. The two novels are very good and have interesting development and writing quality, the only issue would be the update but I think the author is doing a good job given the fact that he is writing two very good novels at the same time.
it's a cookie cutter novel that interestingly mixed cultivation and thievery. the MC is kinda bland and got over his "sister" a little quick for me. more so than many of the novels on here, it suffers from translation issues. present/past tense word choice issues and just some words missing. I think the author could do better honestly. -Review after 50 chapters
Revelar Spoiler
best novel ever I really recommend reading this novel grammar is a little bad but it's still good really great novel
What’s up with the forced relationship nonsense with the all knowing parrots maid? Literally killed all my interest in reading the novel…. I was enjoying rereading until I remembered that garbage
Grammar is Shit. Tense is Shittier. The confusion and errors between past and present tense is killing me. Please get an editor. I mean the novel is already over 1k chapters. What else are you waiting for to get an editor ???
Who writes this, a chimpanzee?? They make spell check apps that will correct mistakes for God sake...
The storyline, characters and plot are really good, but the diction and grammer are rife with errors! So much so, that is difficult to read a great deal of the time. If the author would spend 10 minutes with spell check and ask readers for errors, it would boost the story 30%..
I’ve read to chapter 200 and I’m loving it the only thing is that I can only read 3 chapters/day because of FP and apart from that I love it
Slave of the system MC. The essence of thief path should be efficiency so receiving only a fraction of a cultivator's worth for every kill is just sad.
I followed this novel from start i think tbh people say it has plot armour and it is cliche but i think if we ingnore these things it is a very good novel till I tried to ignore mc putting a stupid maid of his girlfriend in harem no bro it's too hard to handle but I will still try to keep up maybe if I try to ignore this stupid thing there may chances that it will become Little bit good
Un libro que te envuelve, espectacular trama y te hace leer el libro completo en un día si tuviera el tiempo, me ha encantado, esta historia es uno de mis favoritos. [img=recommend]
Chapter 60. The grammar is bad and really needs to be edited. Eva is annoying and acts below her age. Writing quality - 3 stars Stability of Updates - 5 stars: Idk so 5 stars Story development - 4 stars Character design - 3 stars World Background - 4 stars
love the novel [img=coins] just a suggestion to author atleast make the FML have personality and own uses not so dependent on the MC... still great novel for me keep up the good work cant w8 for next heaven
hope author wont let the girls separate from ace like getting them to sleep or get abducted by powerfull master just to get power up..in upper heaven.
I am somewhere around chapter 130 now, but the grammar is killing me. There are so many tense issues and spelling mishaps. I get that English is a brutal language, but any editor should be able to pick those errors out. Otherwise, I am enjoying the story.
hey author one small doubt in recent chapters u didn't mention about the elf queen daughter ace kidnapped and appointed as her Eva maid what happened yo her?
My review as of Chapter 112: While this story isn't that bad, it's also not that good, like there's way too many coincidences/forced plot points. Since the MC is 12 years old at the start he makes a lot of mistakes and is basically saved by his system or just plot armor. Another annoying part is the is the somewhat repetitiveness of the entire first 100 chapters, it goes like this: 1) system gives him a mission to steal from a person/clan. 2) he does it . 3) he has to leave the town/city he did it in, because of who he just stole from is wayyy stronger than him and they always seem too have a trick to track him, that happens like 3-4 times in the first 100 chapters. Given all that, I might have kept reading if he had a companion to interact with to help with the slow/annoying parts but given that he had one and she gets sideline for what looks like several hundred chapters, I guess that's not the way the author wants the story to go.
The storyline is good. However, what gets me is the use of present tense and past tense. I thought I could just overlook it, but it happens continuously, and I have read more than 100 chapters. Here, I am reading and correcting every present tense that should be past tense. I do not actually know if I can still read this just because of that. The storyline practically follows the generic 'i am going against the heavens because dah dah dah' so I mean I am not missing out if i discontinue reading but man I put effort into reading this. Ace is likable, but I found his growth and mindset development weird, and he trusts too easily, but I guess that is just me. I don't know, man. Author san for what you created, you are amazing as I do not have the ability to create a whole new world for readers to emerse themselves into, but please get an editor.
This novel is like a good wine ...the longer it ages the better it seems to get. Plus a chapter everyday ... Perfect . The world building and characters are incredible with the mischievous and elusive Sky Stealer
Overall a very good story with lots of potencial. Just one problem with the writing.. open a dictionnary and find the definition for intelligent.. then please never associate it with the MC again. Thanks
wn review: writing quality: sometimes author makes mistakes in spelling words, or use a words with different meaning (definitely vs indefinitely) story development: its pretty ok character design: hmm ok mc is the only good guys, his girl friends are all good, and everyone else is bad guy so we need to rob them world background: pretty solid though just the people personalities makes it a little bad. my review: boy got system cuz his little friend- sister was dying, he is getting missions to rob from system, got skills from that and tahts pretty much it
Está realmente incrível está novel, estou gostando demais de poder ler.. Recomendo fortemente que leia ela pois você não vai conseguir parar de ler
Revelar Spoiler
poor writing quality, good story but with a lot of clichés, Mc depends a lot on the System....................... ............................................
It's a story of a boy who was force to become a thief but after becoming one he finds out that a thief is more honorable than a normal two-faced cultivator. So please read it and let me know how you guys think about it. Thanks..!
Great novel until chapter 1002. MC pursues his path for the sacrifice of the full world. Day by day he becomes a hypocrite. I am fully depressed about the story line.
Would love to read more… I really like the story but the grammar is KILLING me I can‘t read this anymore. Please get an editor. Other than that the story would be really good :)
The beginning of this novel was a bit boring and not too interesting. I have read a few cultivation novels and this one is quite good overall. The increasing cultivation through thieving is quite interesting. I feel the harem stuff was quite overused and while I overall like some of the harem girls I honestly don't care too much about them. But this novel is overall solid with the power and world building. A few things that makes me really annoyed are English author's who make very complex esoteric power realms that make me have no idea what is going on. like chill out a little bit with the weird power realms that I basically just ignore and when the mc goes up a power realm I have no idea what realm has actually at I just know has a little bit stronger
Hiii Wahi, I just came across Eternal Thief not long ago and it really caught my eye🥺! I happen to be a digital artist and If you’re ever interested in commissioning a cover or scene for your story, please feel free to reach out. I’d really loove to work with you on your characters!❤️❤️🫂
I just realised that the author also wrote Cursed Immortality. The two novels are very good and have interesting development and writing quality, the only issue would be the update but I think the author is doing a good job given the fact that he is writing two very good novels at the same time.
it's a cookie cutter novel that interestingly mixed cultivation and thievery. the MC is kinda bland and got over his "sister" a little quick for me. more so than many of the novels on here, it suffers from translation issues. present/past tense word choice issues and just some words missing. I think the author could do better honestly. -Review after 50 chapters
Revelar Spoiler best novel ever I really recommend reading this novel grammar is a little bad but it's still good really great novel
What’s up with the forced relationship nonsense with the all knowing parrots maid? Literally killed all my interest in reading the novel…. I was enjoying rereading until I remembered that garbage
Grammar is Shit. Tense is Shittier. The confusion and errors between past and present tense is killing me. Please get an editor. I mean the novel is already over 1k chapters. What else are you waiting for to get an editor ???
Who writes this, a chimpanzee?? They make spell check apps that will correct mistakes for God sake...
The storyline, characters and plot are really good, but the diction and grammer are rife with errors! So much so, that is difficult to read a great deal of the time. If the author would spend 10 minutes with spell check and ask readers for errors, it would boost the story 30%..
I’ve read to chapter 200 and I’m loving it the only thing is that I can only read 3 chapters/day because of FP and apart from that I love it
Slave of the system MC. The essence of thief path should be efficiency so receiving only a fraction of a cultivator's worth for every kill is just sad.
I followed this novel from start i think tbh people say it has plot armour and it is cliche but i think if we ingnore these things it is a very good novel till I tried to ignore mc putting a stupid maid of his girlfriend in harem no bro it's too hard to handle but I will still try to keep up maybe if I try to ignore this stupid thing there may chances that it will become Little bit good
Un libro que te envuelve, espectacular trama y te hace leer el libro completo en un día si tuviera el tiempo, me ha encantado, esta historia es uno de mis favoritos. [img=recommend]
Chapter 60. The grammar is bad and really needs to be edited. Eva is annoying and acts below her age. Writing quality - 3 stars Stability of Updates - 5 stars: Idk so 5 stars Story development - 4 stars Character design - 3 stars World Background - 4 stars
love the novel [img=coins] just a suggestion to author atleast make the FML have personality and own uses not so dependent on the MC... still great novel for me keep up the good work cant w8 for next heaven
hope author wont let the girls separate from ace like getting them to sleep or get abducted by powerfull master just to get power up..in upper heaven.
I am somewhere around chapter 130 now, but the grammar is killing me. There are so many tense issues and spelling mishaps. I get that English is a brutal language, but any editor should be able to pick those errors out. Otherwise, I am enjoying the story.
hey author one small doubt in recent chapters u didn't mention about the elf queen daughter ace kidnapped and appointed as her Eva maid what happened yo her?
My review as of Chapter 112: While this story isn't that bad, it's also not that good, like there's way too many coincidences/forced plot points. Since the MC is 12 years old at the start he makes a lot of mistakes and is basically saved by his system or just plot armor. Another annoying part is the is the somewhat repetitiveness of the entire first 100 chapters, it goes like this: 1) system gives him a mission to steal from a person/clan. 2) he does it . 3) he has to leave the town/city he did it in, because of who he just stole from is wayyy stronger than him and they always seem too have a trick to track him, that happens like 3-4 times in the first 100 chapters. Given all that, I might have kept reading if he had a companion to interact with to help with the slow/annoying parts but given that he had one and she gets sideline for what looks like several hundred chapters, I guess that's not the way the author wants the story to go.
The storyline is good. However, what gets me is the use of present tense and past tense. I thought I could just overlook it, but it happens continuously, and I have read more than 100 chapters. Here, I am reading and correcting every present tense that should be past tense. I do not actually know if I can still read this just because of that. The storyline practically follows the generic 'i am going against the heavens because dah dah dah' so I mean I am not missing out if i discontinue reading but man I put effort into reading this. Ace is likable, but I found his growth and mindset development weird, and he trusts too easily, but I guess that is just me. I don't know, man. Author san for what you created, you are amazing as I do not have the ability to create a whole new world for readers to emerse themselves into, but please get an editor.
This novel is like a good wine ...the longer it ages the better it seems to get. Plus a chapter everyday ... Perfect . The world building and characters are incredible with the mischievous and elusive Sky Stealer
Overall a very good story with lots of potencial. Just one problem with the writing.. open a dictionnary and find the definition for intelligent.. then please never associate it with the MC again. Thanks
wn review: writing quality: sometimes author makes mistakes in spelling words, or use a words with different meaning (definitely vs indefinitely) story development: its pretty ok character design: hmm ok mc is the only good guys, his girl friends are all good, and everyone else is bad guy so we need to rob them world background: pretty solid though just the people personalities makes it a little bad. my review: boy got system cuz his little friend- sister was dying, he is getting missions to rob from system, got skills from that and tahts pretty much it
Está realmente incrível está novel, estou gostando demais de poder ler.. Recomendo fortemente que leia ela pois você não vai conseguir parar de ler
Revelar Spoiler poor writing quality, good story but with a lot of clichés, Mc depends a lot on the System....................... ............................................
It's a story of a boy who was force to become a thief but after becoming one he finds out that a thief is more honorable than a normal two-faced cultivator. So please read it and let me know how you guys think about it. Thanks..!