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i enjoyed reading but sometimes too much description it s really slow when it could be quicker even if i understand why but nice one and good ideas if only there would be less thinking and more action thanks
The grammars bad and the MC seems to not have an ounce of iq and the Romance is bad and rushed but other than that it’s an ok story
This novel is wonderfully written and also very engaging. The story and plot are briefly explained by the author. The character development of our main character, Ace, is also well-executed. I would rate it 5 out of 5 for this novel.
i cant complain even if it will become long it is never boring like a spring in the desert original and no flaws if it is like this it will become a very 2.5k chs or 3k... there is very much material this novel is an enigma full of suprises and not overly prevedible i like it a very full 5 star
Plz plz don't stop writing this is my no 1 web novel plz 😭I hope I'm right now in chapter 121 this is best web novel I hope 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Really a story which got me hooked from the start 😁😁😁 ignore thise paragraph comments for starting chapters as there are still some inconsistency in the beginning but in mid the plot the character development and his thievery!!! 'SKY STEALER' I have become a follower !!!
When I See Name Of Novel I think The Novel Is About Thief Doing His Thief Thing Out Smart The Item Owner But Mc Have To Be Hero He is A thief But Morality Of A Hero And Plot Armor Is So Strong If Not He Should Die in First -Ten Chapter
There are some stories that you don't mind waiting so you can binge read all in one go, but even fewer are worth reading daily to keep up. This is one of those stories that's worth adding to your collections and following along every day! It's a little rough around the edges but it's full of heart and interesting concepts with very fleshed out characters. The MC is stronger than those at his level, yes, but there's actual stakes that force him to act and grow at a reasonable face. You'll laugh and cheer as this story will steal your heart and attention very easily!
So nice story, I like the idea and the story, but I dont know about the grammar, it is something between normal and mtl level. The author after hundreds of chapters still has no clue how time works, he does so many mistakes, its absurd. Sometimes he use present and simple past in one sentence, the future and simple past in one sentence, some chapters, I cant really read them because they are so many mistakes! Author get a proof reader, use some apps to help you or some AI idk, just get better
The phase of the story is Getting boring Tbh... Author seems stretching 1 Chapter into 5 or more so chapters.. And Eva's and MC's reunion seems kind of lackluster... And what's with this MC? .. Can't he be more 'Honest' to his Wife?!!. .. It feels like MC didn't even trust Eva and also for the latter... Everytime MC introduces a Woman character.. Eva seems to be Overreacting and this MC reacts like TF?... Cant he be more truthful to his 'Wife'. .. Instead of worrying about His circumstances bout his wife matter... Can ignore his Adopted sister or something? ?.. Adding her into the story seems Lame and she doesn't really have worth in the story so far.. .. And I just realize that MC frequently asking soooo many questions to System... He still can't believe figure out himself dispute his 'Maturity '? He's still a Naive and Braindead For me despite those 'adventures' whatsoever. I'm quite 3njoy this for Soo long but the repeating scenario where mc always attract troubles... And him being overconfident and thinks that he has an upper hand in a fight but later realizing that the enemy has a hidden trump cards is irritating... There's no end for this scenario and I'm sure this will be not the last.. Meh.... Lame NGL..
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Very unique story i have not read any thief story yet so this is my first and i really like the slow growth of mc character other than instantly become cunning and ruthless like most of the story out there. System forcing mc to leave his name also suits to the name of system and title "eternal" so no one can imitate his achievements. But I have to say it's kinda frustrating that he is so naive because I usually read mc with tragedy. Here mc have no such like clan destroyed or parents murdered. But I am hopping that in this new volume mc face such so his character can develop that really suits to the system hence make more bold moves and just feel like forces by system. Also i want other character development also because all those women always need mc to rescue them. For example that hunter girl, it's pathetic that mc need to rescue her and I don't care if it's some plot but pls give give some character development so they can think and rescue themselves as they are not new borns. That's all I can think of. Thankyou for good read and looking forward for more thievery 😁
very intristing story, its a fun read, and keeps moving, with great development. so far its not tapreing off at ovef 620 chapters. wish there was lemons, but cant get everything u want. there is always a new adventure that things dont get stail. i recomnded very much.
it is one of the better xianxia novels out there and was a pretty entertaining read....but the mc personality is not for me and despite denying it is righteous and not someone with a thief or cultivator mindset especially after all that he has experienced ..sigh...it is disappointing as I had rather high hopes for this.. anyways the novel in itself is good for light hearted reading or a good laugh... this is a good novel author but not for me ....
i don't know how to write a proper review. I'm just here to support the author for his awesome work. and i don't how i found this novel but I'm glad I did
a generic Chinese novel unnecessarily too much infodumps( really unbearable). mc with an IQ similar to a one out of a Korean pornhwa( like really dumb asf) forced plot literally everywhere. was really impossible to get past a 100 chapters while trying to ignore the stupidity in plot ,made just for the authors convineance.
1st mission: “Penalty for failure: Death” The story is great but the author really has no idea how to create tension. Every single character will be railroaded into a forced path and there will be no decission making, you will always know what will happen next. However it is at least an decently interesting path. Great story and concept. But the author just never leaves any possibility for alternate paths or ”what if” questions. Anything important was always going to happen the exact way it happened because the author only left one path for the story to continue.
except for some minor grammar mistakes, this book is really good. would recommend it it highly
A note for the author, the greatest thief doesn't always steal riches, maybe also a couple of undervalued wives every now and then, also, when is the abyssal shadow demon wife going to make a comeback? I need more action from her corner, please
The system and the World Background of the First Arc are pretty intriguing. The MC Character Development is also top-notch. I like the First Arc so far. Thank you, Author, for this beautiful novel.
It's a really good book. Different from the stereotype mc, this dude matures. And his plot armour is within logic. The character design and world background are sort of fresh and stable. It might be a Harem(not yet opened,but will soon I think), but unlike usual mc is not an idiot that goes around every beauty. In short it's well written till now(461). good job author 👍👍
It's a very good story, but it has one problem, as far as I'm concerned, everyone who has a position is very greedy, and then they can't get anything from MC, they regret being greedy. I find it unusual that there is no one good among all these nobles
ONE of the bloody best of the site ... narrative is top notch .. MC's thought process is meticulous and engaging .. comedy is almost nil, but i think there will be after system gains a voice or more characters come into play . .
Well written story through 750 chapters, easily can understand and empathize with characters. I wish the best going forward, hope this is just the beginning too!
i enjoyed reading but sometimes too much description it s really slow when it could be quicker even if i understand why but nice one and good ideas if only there would be less thinking and more action thanks
The grammars bad and the MC seems to not have an ounce of iq and the Romance is bad and rushed but other than that it’s an ok story
This novel is wonderfully written and also very engaging. The story and plot are briefly explained by the author. The character development of our main character, Ace, is also well-executed. I would rate it 5 out of 5 for this novel.
i cant complain even if it will become long it is never boring like a spring in the desert original and no flaws if it is like this it will become a very 2.5k chs or 3k... there is very much material this novel is an enigma full of suprises and not overly prevedible i like it a very full 5 star
Plz plz don't stop writing this is my no 1 web novel plz 😭I hope I'm right now in chapter 121 this is best web novel I hope 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Really a story which got me hooked from the start 😁😁😁 ignore thise paragraph comments for starting chapters as there are still some inconsistency in the beginning but in mid the plot the character development and his thievery!!! 'SKY STEALER' I have become a follower !!!
When I See Name Of Novel I think The Novel Is About Thief Doing His Thief Thing Out Smart The Item Owner But Mc Have To Be Hero He is A thief But Morality Of A Hero And Plot Armor Is So Strong If Not He Should Die in First -Ten Chapter
There are some stories that you don't mind waiting so you can binge read all in one go, but even fewer are worth reading daily to keep up. This is one of those stories that's worth adding to your collections and following along every day! It's a little rough around the edges but it's full of heart and interesting concepts with very fleshed out characters. The MC is stronger than those at his level, yes, but there's actual stakes that force him to act and grow at a reasonable face. You'll laugh and cheer as this story will steal your heart and attention very easily!
So nice story, I like the idea and the story, but I dont know about the grammar, it is something between normal and mtl level. The author after hundreds of chapters still has no clue how time works, he does so many mistakes, its absurd. Sometimes he use present and simple past in one sentence, the future and simple past in one sentence, some chapters, I cant really read them because they are so many mistakes! Author get a proof reader, use some apps to help you or some AI idk, just get better
The phase of the story is Getting boring Tbh... Author seems stretching 1 Chapter into 5 or more so chapters.. And Eva's and MC's reunion seems kind of lackluster... And what's with this MC? .. Can't he be more 'Honest' to his Wife?!!. .. It feels like MC didn't even trust Eva and also for the latter... Everytime MC introduces a Woman character.. Eva seems to be Overreacting and this MC reacts like TF?... Cant he be more truthful to his 'Wife'. .. Instead of worrying about His circumstances bout his wife matter... Can ignore his Adopted sister or something? ?.. Adding her into the story seems Lame and she doesn't really have worth in the story so far.. .. And I just realize that MC frequently asking soooo many questions to System... He still can't believe figure out himself dispute his 'Maturity '? He's still a Naive and Braindead For me despite those 'adventures' whatsoever. I'm quite 3njoy this for Soo long but the repeating scenario where mc always attract troubles... And him being overconfident and thinks that he has an upper hand in a fight but later realizing that the enemy has a hidden trump cards is irritating... There's no end for this scenario and I'm sure this will be not the last.. Meh.... Lame NGL..
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Very unique story i have not read any thief story yet so this is my first and i really like the slow growth of mc character other than instantly become cunning and ruthless like most of the story out there. System forcing mc to leave his name also suits to the name of system and title "eternal" so no one can imitate his achievements. But I have to say it's kinda frustrating that he is so naive because I usually read mc with tragedy. Here mc have no such like clan destroyed or parents murdered. But I am hopping that in this new volume mc face such so his character can develop that really suits to the system hence make more bold moves and just feel like forces by system. Also i want other character development also because all those women always need mc to rescue them. For example that hunter girl, it's pathetic that mc need to rescue her and I don't care if it's some plot but pls give give some character development so they can think and rescue themselves as they are not new borns. That's all I can think of. Thankyou for good read and looking forward for more thievery 😁
very intristing story, its a fun read, and keeps moving, with great development. so far its not tapreing off at ovef 620 chapters. wish there was lemons, but cant get everything u want. there is always a new adventure that things dont get stail. i recomnded very much.
it is one of the better xianxia novels out there and was a pretty entertaining read....but the mc personality is not for me and despite denying it is righteous and not someone with a thief or cultivator mindset especially after all that he has experienced ..sigh...it is disappointing as I had rather high hopes for this.. anyways the novel in itself is good for light hearted reading or a good laugh... this is a good novel author but not for me ....
i don't know how to write a proper review. I'm just here to support the author for his awesome work. and i don't how i found this novel but I'm glad I did
a generic Chinese novel unnecessarily too much infodumps( really unbearable). mc with an IQ similar to a one out of a Korean pornhwa( like really dumb asf) forced plot literally everywhere. was really impossible to get past a 100 chapters while trying to ignore the stupidity in plot ,made just for the authors convineance.
1st mission: “Penalty for failure: Death” The story is great but the author really has no idea how to create tension. Every single character will be railroaded into a forced path and there will be no decission making, you will always know what will happen next. However it is at least an decently interesting path. Great story and concept. But the author just never leaves any possibility for alternate paths or ”what if” questions. Anything important was always going to happen the exact way it happened because the author only left one path for the story to continue.
except for some minor grammar mistakes, this book is really good. would recommend it it highly
A note for the author, the greatest thief doesn't always steal riches, maybe also a couple of undervalued wives every now and then, also, when is the abyssal shadow demon wife going to make a comeback? I need more action from her corner, please
The system and the World Background of the First Arc are pretty intriguing. The MC Character Development is also top-notch. I like the First Arc so far. Thank you, Author, for this beautiful novel.
It's a really good book. Different from the stereotype mc, this dude matures. And his plot armour is within logic. The character design and world background are sort of fresh and stable. It might be a Harem(not yet opened,but will soon I think), but unlike usual mc is not an idiot that goes around every beauty. In short it's well written till now(461). good job author 👍👍
It's a very good story, but it has one problem, as far as I'm concerned, everyone who has a position is very greedy, and then they can't get anything from MC, they regret being greedy. I find it unusual that there is no one good among all these nobles
ONE of the bloody best of the site ... narrative is top notch .. MC's thought process is meticulous and engaging .. comedy is almost nil, but i think there will be after system gains a voice or more characters come into play . .
Well written story through 750 chapters, easily can understand and empathize with characters. I wish the best going forward, hope this is just the beginning too!