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It started of passable the first few chapters. Nothing great, but would probably had given it 3 stars if the entire thing was on the level of the first 2-3 chapters. The writing is fine for the most part. Nothing special, but not bad and no regular obvious spelling and grammar issues. Dialogue is pretty shaky at times though. The story is a mess. Author decides to write a multiverse chat group story and decide to send them to MHA world first. Then immediately the first chapter in said world decides he doesn't really want to write that world and does a 6 month timeskip within 30 minutes of them arriving skipping any development and thus interest in the first world for everyone. Characters are also a mess. MC doesn't behave like Gilgamesh which is understandable, but he also doesn't behave like someone who has been the king of a nation for 30 years. Other characters don't behave like they should based on their canon personalities which is happening all over the place. Also is Gilgamesh actually the MC, because for plenty of parts it doesn't feel like he is. The base world background is fine. It's pretty much what you expect from a multiverse chat group story. Can't really give too much credit for using a pre-existing world though. The way the characters interact with it makes it worse though. "Fixing" the world in inane ways that make little sense. In under year while doing other missions they solve poverty, hunger and world peace or something. Right...
I can see why people enjoy this. its quick paced, fun read if you just ignore some of the logic behind the plot. BUT the 'quirk act' really got me 🥲🥲 the reasoning behind it solves literally nothing and is based on wishful thinking. it doesn't change any of the prejudice against quirkless people but somehow it achieves world peace. infact wont it just make it worse by highlighting what quirkless people cant do in the first place? use their non-existent quirks. Anyway rant over, it's fun read and the whole point of the novel is to see the interactions between different anime characters anyway.
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Sitting at the corner, thinking how I was that stupid Hung by the mambo in a moment like this Dreaming with the desire that you are here I remember your words when you was saying me Sitting at the corner, thinking how I was that stupid Hung by the mambo in a moment like this Dreaming with the desire that you are here I remember your words when you was saying me Stop smoking That smoke that's bad for you Stop smoking That smoke that's bad for you Sitting at the corner, thinking how I was that stupid Hung by the mambo in a moment like this Dreaming with the desire that you are here I remember your words when you was saying me Stop! You like The Simpsons With palms forward We are La Piedra Urbana Sitting at the corner, thinking how I was that stupid Hung by the mambo in a moment like this Dreaming with the desire that you are here I remember your words when you was saying me Sittinh at the corner, thinking how I was that stupid Hung by the mambo in a moment like this Dreaming with the desire that you are here I remember your words when you was saying me Stop smoking That smoke that's bad for you Stop smoking That smoke that's bad for you Sitting at the corner, thinking how I was that stupid Hung by the mambo in a moment like this Dreaming with the desire that you are here I remember your words when you was saying me Sitting at the corner, thinking how I was that stupid Hung by the mambo in a moment like this Dreaming with the desire that you are here I remember your words when you was saying me Stop XD
Assassination is the act of murdering a prominent or important person, such as heads of state, heads of government, politicians, royalty, celebrities, journalists, or CEOs. An assassination may be prompted by political and military motives, or done for financial gain, to avenge a grievance, from a desire to acquire fame or notoriety, or because of a military, security, insurgent or secret police group's command to carry out the assassination. Acts of assassination have been performed since ancient times.
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Honestly, it doesnt really deserve a high rating. Yes we love that it is Caster Gilgamesh getting dem gals, but we also want actually plot to make it interesting. I give this a 2.6, mostly for being the first time I saw this insert in that time period. Unique but not executed well.
Four days before Frisbee was invented, a little boy lost his bouncy ball and fell into a life of crime. He was only six years old. But nobody had ever noticed that he was so passionate about breaking the law. His name was Shreddie. He had a fat, mean, murderous ponytail. And in the course of a single week, he committed every crime that now comprise all 53 Titles of the Code of Laws of the United States of America. Having no book to throw, the judge got a hold of one the first flying frisbee discs. And with a single forehand, he negotiated the Treaty of Vermont. Shreddie was pleased by the injection molded plastic. And he never crime’d again.
If you're searching for a good read I think this is for you, but it's not just for me, grammar is fine, stability of update is also good, story development is alright I guess, character design I give it 1 star and WB 3 star, it's better than some but not surpassing the really good on my chart, no offense or anything author.
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For right now (Chapter 12) i‘ll give you 5 Stars, kinda wanna know though if he‘ll get as strong as the god who gave him the Dragon Egg, kinda hate it when MC is a „slave“ under someone, i mean right now he still isn‘t a slave but it could still happen with that God just posting thousands of quests he has to do for some reason.
I have to say that the story is one of the most unique ones I have read. I look forward to more chapters and keep up good work. Though I really wish there were more servant inserts like this.
18+ and best multiverse novel 5★★★★★ ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
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Fast paced... Wish fulfilment kind like... I will give writing for 4.5 out of 5(Most of fanfic usually ignore Capital and few typo) it's actually good but no too great...
Love it! Hyped for the next world! Also author is there a specific time when you update? Like, one chapter in the morning and one chapter in midnight?
Free 5-star till I dive in and come back to edit this review ✌🏼 In the meantime I need to up the word count so ...........................................
........................................................................................................................................... im a good guy so i'll give 5 star and i quite like how the setting of the story is so please DONT DROP
Occasional grammar mistakes and low vocabulary comprehension. Only problem, everything else is extremely good if i say so myself. I hope you enjoy it!
It started of passable the first few chapters. Nothing great, but would probably had given it 3 stars if the entire thing was on the level of the first 2-3 chapters. The writing is fine for the most part. Nothing special, but not bad and no regular obvious spelling and grammar issues. Dialogue is pretty shaky at times though. The story is a mess. Author decides to write a multiverse chat group story and decide to send them to MHA world first. Then immediately the first chapter in said world decides he doesn't really want to write that world and does a 6 month timeskip within 30 minutes of them arriving skipping any development and thus interest in the first world for everyone. Characters are also a mess. MC doesn't behave like Gilgamesh which is understandable, but he also doesn't behave like someone who has been the king of a nation for 30 years. Other characters don't behave like they should based on their canon personalities which is happening all over the place. Also is Gilgamesh actually the MC, because for plenty of parts it doesn't feel like he is. The base world background is fine. It's pretty much what you expect from a multiverse chat group story. Can't really give too much credit for using a pre-existing world though. The way the characters interact with it makes it worse though. "Fixing" the world in inane ways that make little sense. In under year while doing other missions they solve poverty, hunger and world peace or something. Right...
I can see why people enjoy this. its quick paced, fun read if you just ignore some of the logic behind the plot. BUT the 'quirk act' really got me 🥲🥲 the reasoning behind it solves literally nothing and is based on wishful thinking. it doesn't change any of the prejudice against quirkless people but somehow it achieves world peace. infact wont it just make it worse by highlighting what quirkless people cant do in the first place? use their non-existent quirks. Anyway rant over, it's fun read and the whole point of the novel is to see the interactions between different anime characters anyway.
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Sitting at the corner, thinking how I was that stupid Hung by the mambo in a moment like this Dreaming with the desire that you are here I remember your words when you was saying me Sitting at the corner, thinking how I was that stupid Hung by the mambo in a moment like this Dreaming with the desire that you are here I remember your words when you was saying me Stop smoking That smoke that's bad for you Stop smoking That smoke that's bad for you Sitting at the corner, thinking how I was that stupid Hung by the mambo in a moment like this Dreaming with the desire that you are here I remember your words when you was saying me Stop! You like The Simpsons With palms forward We are La Piedra Urbana Sitting at the corner, thinking how I was that stupid Hung by the mambo in a moment like this Dreaming with the desire that you are here I remember your words when you was saying me Sittinh at the corner, thinking how I was that stupid Hung by the mambo in a moment like this Dreaming with the desire that you are here I remember your words when you was saying me Stop smoking That smoke that's bad for you Stop smoking That smoke that's bad for you Sitting at the corner, thinking how I was that stupid Hung by the mambo in a moment like this Dreaming with the desire that you are here I remember your words when you was saying me Sitting at the corner, thinking how I was that stupid Hung by the mambo in a moment like this Dreaming with the desire that you are here I remember your words when you was saying me Stop XD
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I think it is amazing. I enjoy reading it because it has a bit of comedy. I recommend it[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Honestly, it doesnt really deserve a high rating. Yes we love that it is Caster Gilgamesh getting dem gals, but we also want actually plot to make it interesting. I give this a 2.6, mostly for being the first time I saw this insert in that time period. Unique but not executed well.
Four days before Frisbee was invented, a little boy lost his bouncy ball and fell into a life of crime. He was only six years old. But nobody had ever noticed that he was so passionate about breaking the law. His name was Shreddie. He had a fat, mean, murderous ponytail. And in the course of a single week, he committed every crime that now comprise all 53 Titles of the Code of Laws of the United States of America. Having no book to throw, the judge got a hold of one the first flying frisbee discs. And with a single forehand, he negotiated the Treaty of Vermont. Shreddie was pleased by the injection molded plastic. And he never crime’d again.
If you're searching for a good read I think this is for you, but it's not just for me, grammar is fine, stability of update is also good, story development is alright I guess, character design I give it 1 star and WB 3 star, it's better than some but not surpassing the really good on my chart, no offense or anything author.
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For right now (Chapter 12) i‘ll give you 5 Stars, kinda wanna know though if he‘ll get as strong as the god who gave him the Dragon Egg, kinda hate it when MC is a „slave“ under someone, i mean right now he still isn‘t a slave but it could still happen with that God just posting thousands of quests he has to do for some reason.
I have to say that the story is one of the most unique ones I have read. I look forward to more chapters and keep up good work. Though I really wish there were more servant inserts like this.
18+ and best multiverse novel 5★★★★★ ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
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Fast paced... Wish fulfilment kind like... I will give writing for 4.5 out of 5(Most of fanfic usually ignore Capital and few typo) it's actually good but no too great...
Love it! Hyped for the next world! Also author is there a specific time when you update? Like, one chapter in the morning and one chapter in midnight?
Free 5-star till I dive in and come back to edit this review ✌🏼 In the meantime I need to up the word count so ...........................................
........................................................................................................................................... im a good guy so i'll give 5 star and i quite like how the setting of the story is so please DONT DROP
Occasional grammar mistakes and low vocabulary comprehension. Only problem, everything else is extremely good if i say so myself. I hope you enjoy it!