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Well it's my first time reviewing, so if there is any grammar mistake pls forgive me. well for the first 6 chapters it will be not that good but after that the novel is awesome. Read it
L.O.V.E.D I.T. I seriously love this novel I read it in 4 days one full swoop, man THANK YOU!! Especially t he development of characters, the tension and the conclusion
within the first few chapters everyone will be losing interest. 1. mc is treated like garbage by the author. 2. system (aka the author) forcibly murders the mc by forcing them to remain in the path of a carriage because its a story event. 3. system (aka author) forcibly rewrites the mc's personality which turns them into a submissive dog 4. female mc is quite literally an arrogant brat which only weird old men like irl. 5. female mc shows traits of a sociopath right from the moment she is introduced (medical definition of sociopath not hollywood definition) 7. female mc does not work for any form of positive growth and acts like a sociopath theough a good chunk of the story making it very unenjoyable to read people would say that it gets better later in the story but why tf would i pay anything to actually read that far? its not fun to read and to actually have a chance at enjoying it i have to pay to do so, dont read this garbage unless you're a masochist lolicon
It started as boring a bit and Villainess and Zombie were simply annoying until both had their character change it was superb after that part though Caramel having administrator rights was a bit forced but still 5 stars
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I dont't usually write reviews about the novels I read but I just can't help myself at this one. The grammar and writing is excellent although their are some spelling errors it can be overlooked as it's really not that noticable and it's very scares as for the story line and plot all I could say is that the dear author has some godly skills in creating the dynamic of the story so!
Yeah beta mc. Dont expect anything more than that. Heck this author only writes beta mc. Once you got that out of the way, the story is fine
*cough cough* I write this review in an attempt to lure peoples brains away from the brain dead 2 star reviews I’ve seen here with an attention span of 3 seconds as most read only to chapter 6. 1st, all because you dislike the starting point of the mc doesn’t mean you should downvote it especially since it makes sense, sets the tone of the world, and the bratty treatment is mostly for laughs. 2nd, this novel is not about someone being a slave it gets SOOOO much better than that. 3rd, this novel is exceptionally well edited in comparison to most other Webnovel and contains very few spelling mistakes which is honestly incredibly refreshing. To the author who may read this. Good job.
i really loved this novel and i hope the second novel fir the auther will be also amazing and give us a lot of surprise like this novel 😍😍😍😍😍😋
From time to time webnovel surprises me i think that's this is the most beta mc ever, then i will read another novel and what i tought to be the top beta will become some Giga chad in confront to the new and improved beta man ( in this case this novel). Soo where to start? This guy dies and is reincarnated in a world of magic. then dies again and is ressurected as an eternal slave. The little girl who kills him is like a name what do you need one to? from now on your name is zombie then in the next chapters he will be abused in all sorts of ways with insults beating and cutting of limbs. The mc? completly fine with it ( it seems that in the future he may also love her) he was a child when he was killed on the street, in daylight, his family forgotten by the killers ( they are nobles why should they care after all? ) Later since the readers disliked the beta oh sorry the mc for being like: "Huh, so i am a slave? fine with me!" the author tried to patch it with an auxiliar chapter in which the beta will have his conscience rewritten by the system ( what whas the point on giving the mc a backstory since now he is no more than a husk?) so he can accept being a slave. this patch was worse tought at least to me ( slaves mc are a big no no, but forced rewritting of your conscience to be the perfect slave is an even bigger no no) *SLAPS NOVEL* This badboy contains so much beta energy that it can take a rocket to the moon and back
Look, Im just gonna be honest. Even with reading the auxillary chapter and other reviewers saying that it gets better X chapters later, I cant reccomend this one. The main point of contention with this one is the Mc. Guys seems to be a normal dude who gets isekaied via bike and shoved into a otome game before being essentialy emotionally lobotomized. I understand its because of said system but my honest question was why? Yes, you explained why it happened story-wise, but why was that character shift needed? Was it really neccessary to remove the original personality so early in the story and replace it with whatever Zombie's personality is, if you can call that a complete personality? Does that add anything to the story other then frustration and removing the voice of modern history from the story? If it was Zombie with little bits of the MC poking through every now and then, that would be acceptable.As soon as MC was killed the second time, he essentially just became another,less interesting character. If you had removed the isekai elements from the story and just had him as a basic mob in the original game, there would lose essentially nothing because for a otome game setting, there are almost no Otome game elements.You coul just call it a fantasy world and nobody would notice the diffrence. If it takes 50+ chapters to get somewhat interesting or for some development to happen, and I have to pay for the later part of those chapters, then this novel is not worth it at all. Nobody wants to buy a video game that only gets good 40hrs in. If you want someone to read your book or buy your game, then that 1st impression matters the most, and this book does not make a good one.
awsome story but the reason it gets 4 stars is becuase after like around chapter 100 it focoss on the side charecters like mika and ti and corvus
muito bom, mas não espere alguma coisa incrivel do protaganista, ele e um protagonista/secundario, se você ler os primeiros 5 capitulos e não gostar desiste, porque e dali pra frente e ele não volta
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First of all, I like the unique world building and the overarching plot with the system. The slow growth of the characters is good too. The one thing I didn't like is how some parts of the character interactions seem forced or too abnormal. And how the system basically brainwashed and completely removed MC's original personality overall I'd say this is a good story.
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Just good. If you're tired of tour tipical naive goodhearted protagonist or shy heroine this novel got you. Not only that the plot is very well maid and little by little all starts to clic as tou go reading . just read it
Not my cup of tea but it's perfect for those who like submissive mc and masochist I guess? well that's all I can say about this novel ()()()
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This will be my attempt at an unbiased review after completing the novel. Updating Stability: 5/5 There's not much to say since it was mostly 2 ch/day. Writing Quality: 4/5 The sentences and grammar are easy to read and understandable, but there are typos here and there. I know I didn't point out all of them because I miss them too! Character Design: 4/5 I honestly loved Zombie and Cranberry's characters. They are very unique and have a special charm to them. Since this was mainly focused on them, it's understandable to not see the other characters. These characters are very life-like IMO but they could have been more fleshed out (except the antagonsit since she is) Story Development: 3/5 If I had to be honest, everything before the second playthrough was amazing. There were some slow parts here and there but overall, the story was well developed and I enjoyed watching Zombie and Cranberry's development. However, after the second playthrough started I felt the story became a little bland and very slow. I unfortunately felt a bit demotivated waiting for the next chapters because I knew how the end would eventually turn out and we were just waiting for the puzzle pieces to go in their place. There were some nice plot twists here and there, but it didn't have the same appeal and charm the first playthrough had. But the first playthrough is a MUST READ. World Background: 3/5 I liked the setting and learning of the different parts of the kingdom. I understand that Fruit Salad kingdom is the main place but I wish we could have learned more about the rest of the world. They seem to have been thrown away and although I enjoyed reading about Fruit Salad kingdom, it would have been nice to read about other places.
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Loved the story (Male btw) and It was entertaining and a fun action novel until after the eternal awaken chapters. Went downhill fast, everything you liked about it before is gone, the title gone. He basically goes and get's strong once he's reborn, not only does he not get eternal race but he keeps most of his intelligence and basically forces the story. The title just goes out the window to "Fix the story" and it basically ruins anything that was good about it. Honestly don't bother reading after eternal awaken end. Just absolute trash after that. Everything is 5 stars until after eternal awaken, after that it's 0 stars, I'd love to have 2 ratings for each part but for this one it's 5 stars since this will be before the awakening, absolute gem of a story that had many parts i go back to read. Don't forget this is just before the awakening end, anything else is absolute trash, author came up with a bs reason to change everything and didn't even do that well, and what I mean by "well" is that he keeps a title from before the reset, he not only doesn't immediately go back to become a zombie but he get's strong enough that the thing that killed him before didn't work, and then he pulls what I'm assuming is a magical horse monster out of nowhere to kill him, and of course the mc turns into a regular zombie after that, he not only forced the story but changed everything including the name.
This novel is extremely good, the character design and interaction is absolutely amazing. ignore most of the bad review, most of them didn't even make it pass chapter 6. but when you get later in to the chapter it get surprisingly good, the character development and everything else. if you could just power through the awful start and get to chapter 12+ then you would know how good of a novel this is also if your worry about the brainwashing done by the system then don't worry, in the later chapter it would get undone.
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I read up to chapter 6, this is too bad, it's impossible to continue. Maybe it's the most annoying pair of characters I've read to date, and if that was the author's intention, then congratulations, because this submissive protagonist and this disgusting girl managed to screw up the story.
the story is really well written, but i couldn't empathize with the MC and his servant personality ................. ..... . . .........................................................................
I was quite put off by the bad reviews, but I'm so glad I decided to continue reading. To anyone planning to read this, please read until chapter 40 before passing your judgement. The beginning part will make you want to drop this, but please read until chapter 40 first. The story is quite good, there are grammar mistakes here and there that might hinder your reading, but it's not MTL level of grammar. Seeing the progress of Cranberry and Zombie's relationship is honestly very enjoyable. Are there any character illustration for this novel? Because honestly, I can't stop imagining Zombie as Thanos in volume 4 and I hate it.
This is hands down is my most favorite book. The author seems to really like mild cliff hangers on some chapters but what author doesn't lol
Currently on chapter 116: I was correct in my assumption that this story has a lot of potential. To those who has dropped the story in less than 8 chapters, I would like for you to read at least 10-20 chapters more to give your opinion or decide if this story is worth it. Cranberry changes throughout the story. I won’t spoil you but her relationship with Zombie actually change and make them closer throughout the story. Furthermore, there is a reason for the way that Zombie treats Cranberry the way he does, which is hinted at throughout the story and is an actual good reason. The characters in the story and the world in the story also expanded and stop being stale and plain. I can say for sure that the problem i saw in the early chapter was actually because it’s impossible to cram a an actual story building into a few chapters. I sincerely apologize to the author for that one. Overall, This is one of the rare story that i would truly rate 5 star overall. Everything about this story just make it more addicting to read and I really recommend anyone reading this to give it a chance and power through the first 10 chapters.
Currently in Chapter 7-8: The story has a lot of potential but is wrote in the way that would make a lot of readers drop it after Chapter 5-7. Let me explain. The current cast of characters till chapter 8 are pretty much Name + Action and nothing else. Even the two main characters we have are the type of characters that doesn’t really have any concrete personalities. we have Zombie, the….well, zombie, who is an isekai protagonist that is claimed by the person who reincarnated him to have all him memories but acts basically like a meek simp to the girl. The most human/expressive i seen this character even act is the one scene where he wanted to tell his family about his death. The girl (can’t remember name) is the character everyone hates in the early chapter. She’s basically abusive, manipulative, uncaring and arrogant. Claiming that the mc is nothing but a dead zombie even though afterward, it’s hinted that she can understand him. She never took any responsibility for her own actions either and rather blaming it on others. Maybe there are reasons hinted at why this is the way it is but as of chapter 8, we only have a single hint why she acts the way she does. Other characters on the other hand, Is basically nonexistent. No one other than the two get any screen time for long and the world is basically the girl’s mother garden and the training room. This might change in the future. Although i have to give praise to the author for being able to create the perfect villain and her loyal henchman in this case, i do frown on how much the girl’s personality changed in just one chapter. All of a sudden, she wasn’t the person that the readers wanted dead or punished anymore, as if someone replaced her with a good twin version. Anyways, i’ll try to write more reviews as i go. Hopefully this turn into a story of my own taste though.
I binged the first 500 chapter of this novel in around a weekend, and it was amazing. I thoroughly enjoyed the entire experience, the writing style was great, and updates came out so rapidly I would have believed you if someone told me that 100 people were writing it at the same time. This combined to make an excellent binging experience that draws you in the entire time.
Well it's my first time reviewing, so if there is any grammar mistake pls forgive me. well for the first 6 chapters it will be not that good but after that the novel is awesome. Read it
L.O.V.E.D I.T. I seriously love this novel I read it in 4 days one full swoop, man THANK YOU!! Especially t he development of characters, the tension and the conclusion
within the first few chapters everyone will be losing interest. 1. mc is treated like garbage by the author. 2. system (aka the author) forcibly murders the mc by forcing them to remain in the path of a carriage because its a story event. 3. system (aka author) forcibly rewrites the mc's personality which turns them into a submissive dog 4. female mc is quite literally an arrogant brat which only weird old men like irl. 5. female mc shows traits of a sociopath right from the moment she is introduced (medical definition of sociopath not hollywood definition) 7. female mc does not work for any form of positive growth and acts like a sociopath theough a good chunk of the story making it very unenjoyable to read people would say that it gets better later in the story but why tf would i pay anything to actually read that far? its not fun to read and to actually have a chance at enjoying it i have to pay to do so, dont read this garbage unless you're a masochist lolicon
It started as boring a bit and Villainess and Zombie were simply annoying until both had their character change it was superb after that part though Caramel having administrator rights was a bit forced but still 5 stars
Revelar Spoiler I dont't usually write reviews about the novels I read but I just can't help myself at this one. The grammar and writing is excellent although their are some spelling errors it can be overlooked as it's really not that noticable and it's very scares as for the story line and plot all I could say is that the dear author has some godly skills in creating the dynamic of the story so!
Yeah beta mc. Dont expect anything more than that. Heck this author only writes beta mc. Once you got that out of the way, the story is fine
*cough cough* I write this review in an attempt to lure peoples brains away from the brain dead 2 star reviews I’ve seen here with an attention span of 3 seconds as most read only to chapter 6. 1st, all because you dislike the starting point of the mc doesn’t mean you should downvote it especially since it makes sense, sets the tone of the world, and the bratty treatment is mostly for laughs. 2nd, this novel is not about someone being a slave it gets SOOOO much better than that. 3rd, this novel is exceptionally well edited in comparison to most other Webnovel and contains very few spelling mistakes which is honestly incredibly refreshing. To the author who may read this. Good job.
i really loved this novel and i hope the second novel fir the auther will be also amazing and give us a lot of surprise like this novel 😍😍😍😍😍😋
From time to time webnovel surprises me i think that's this is the most beta mc ever, then i will read another novel and what i tought to be the top beta will become some Giga chad in confront to the new and improved beta man ( in this case this novel). Soo where to start? This guy dies and is reincarnated in a world of magic. then dies again and is ressurected as an eternal slave. The little girl who kills him is like a name what do you need one to? from now on your name is zombie then in the next chapters he will be abused in all sorts of ways with insults beating and cutting of limbs. The mc? completly fine with it ( it seems that in the future he may also love her) he was a child when he was killed on the street, in daylight, his family forgotten by the killers ( they are nobles why should they care after all? ) Later since the readers disliked the beta oh sorry the mc for being like: "Huh, so i am a slave? fine with me!" the author tried to patch it with an auxiliar chapter in which the beta will have his conscience rewritten by the system ( what whas the point on giving the mc a backstory since now he is no more than a husk?) so he can accept being a slave. this patch was worse tought at least to me ( slaves mc are a big no no, but forced rewritting of your conscience to be the perfect slave is an even bigger no no) *SLAPS NOVEL* This badboy contains so much beta energy that it can take a rocket to the moon and back
Look, Im just gonna be honest. Even with reading the auxillary chapter and other reviewers saying that it gets better X chapters later, I cant reccomend this one. The main point of contention with this one is the Mc. Guys seems to be a normal dude who gets isekaied via bike and shoved into a otome game before being essentialy emotionally lobotomized. I understand its because of said system but my honest question was why? Yes, you explained why it happened story-wise, but why was that character shift needed? Was it really neccessary to remove the original personality so early in the story and replace it with whatever Zombie's personality is, if you can call that a complete personality? Does that add anything to the story other then frustration and removing the voice of modern history from the story? If it was Zombie with little bits of the MC poking through every now and then, that would be acceptable.As soon as MC was killed the second time, he essentially just became another,less interesting character. If you had removed the isekai elements from the story and just had him as a basic mob in the original game, there would lose essentially nothing because for a otome game setting, there are almost no Otome game elements.You coul just call it a fantasy world and nobody would notice the diffrence. If it takes 50+ chapters to get somewhat interesting or for some development to happen, and I have to pay for the later part of those chapters, then this novel is not worth it at all. Nobody wants to buy a video game that only gets good 40hrs in. If you want someone to read your book or buy your game, then that 1st impression matters the most, and this book does not make a good one.
awsome story but the reason it gets 4 stars is becuase after like around chapter 100 it focoss on the side charecters like mika and ti and corvus
muito bom, mas não espere alguma coisa incrivel do protaganista, ele e um protagonista/secundario, se você ler os primeiros 5 capitulos e não gostar desiste, porque e dali pra frente e ele não volta
can I start reading from season 2? wudndjdjdndjdjdnducxiwpfpcjsbrcpwhckcodpemcnckepeocjciwpfmcncjciwodldncnddndjdjdidoelnebdbdjdjdjeoeododid
First of all, I like the unique world building and the overarching plot with the system. The slow growth of the characters is good too. The one thing I didn't like is how some parts of the character interactions seem forced or too abnormal. And how the system basically brainwashed and completely removed MC's original personality overall I'd say this is a good story.
Revelar Spoiler Just good. If you're tired of tour tipical naive goodhearted protagonist or shy heroine this novel got you. Not only that the plot is very well maid and little by little all starts to clic as tou go reading . just read it
Not my cup of tea but it's perfect for those who like submissive mc and masochist I guess? well that's all I can say about this novel ()()()
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Revelar Spoiler This will be my attempt at an unbiased review after completing the novel. Updating Stability: 5/5 There's not much to say since it was mostly 2 ch/day. Writing Quality: 4/5 The sentences and grammar are easy to read and understandable, but there are typos here and there. I know I didn't point out all of them because I miss them too! Character Design: 4/5 I honestly loved Zombie and Cranberry's characters. They are very unique and have a special charm to them. Since this was mainly focused on them, it's understandable to not see the other characters. These characters are very life-like IMO but they could have been more fleshed out (except the antagonsit since she is) Story Development: 3/5 If I had to be honest, everything before the second playthrough was amazing. There were some slow parts here and there but overall, the story was well developed and I enjoyed watching Zombie and Cranberry's development. However, after the second playthrough started I felt the story became a little bland and very slow. I unfortunately felt a bit demotivated waiting for the next chapters because I knew how the end would eventually turn out and we were just waiting for the puzzle pieces to go in their place. There were some nice plot twists here and there, but it didn't have the same appeal and charm the first playthrough had. But the first playthrough is a MUST READ. World Background: 3/5 I liked the setting and learning of the different parts of the kingdom. I understand that Fruit Salad kingdom is the main place but I wish we could have learned more about the rest of the world. They seem to have been thrown away and although I enjoyed reading about Fruit Salad kingdom, it would have been nice to read about other places.
Revelar Spoiler Loved the story (Male btw) and It was entertaining and a fun action novel until after the eternal awaken chapters. Went downhill fast, everything you liked about it before is gone, the title gone. He basically goes and get's strong once he's reborn, not only does he not get eternal race but he keeps most of his intelligence and basically forces the story. The title just goes out the window to "Fix the story" and it basically ruins anything that was good about it. Honestly don't bother reading after eternal awaken end. Just absolute trash after that. Everything is 5 stars until after eternal awaken, after that it's 0 stars, I'd love to have 2 ratings for each part but for this one it's 5 stars since this will be before the awakening, absolute gem of a story that had many parts i go back to read. Don't forget this is just before the awakening end, anything else is absolute trash, author came up with a bs reason to change everything and didn't even do that well, and what I mean by "well" is that he keeps a title from before the reset, he not only doesn't immediately go back to become a zombie but he get's strong enough that the thing that killed him before didn't work, and then he pulls what I'm assuming is a magical horse monster out of nowhere to kill him, and of course the mc turns into a regular zombie after that, he not only forced the story but changed everything including the name.
This novel is extremely good, the character design and interaction is absolutely amazing. ignore most of the bad review, most of them didn't even make it pass chapter 6. but when you get later in to the chapter it get surprisingly good, the character development and everything else. if you could just power through the awful start and get to chapter 12+ then you would know how good of a novel this is also if your worry about the brainwashing done by the system then don't worry, in the later chapter it would get undone.
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I read up to chapter 6, this is too bad, it's impossible to continue. Maybe it's the most annoying pair of characters I've read to date, and if that was the author's intention, then congratulations, because this submissive protagonist and this disgusting girl managed to screw up the story.
the story is really well written, but i couldn't empathize with the MC and his servant personality ................. ..... . . .........................................................................
I was quite put off by the bad reviews, but I'm so glad I decided to continue reading. To anyone planning to read this, please read until chapter 40 before passing your judgement. The beginning part will make you want to drop this, but please read until chapter 40 first. The story is quite good, there are grammar mistakes here and there that might hinder your reading, but it's not MTL level of grammar. Seeing the progress of Cranberry and Zombie's relationship is honestly very enjoyable. Are there any character illustration for this novel? Because honestly, I can't stop imagining Zombie as Thanos in volume 4 and I hate it.
This is hands down is my most favorite book. The author seems to really like mild cliff hangers on some chapters but what author doesn't lol
Currently on chapter 116: I was correct in my assumption that this story has a lot of potential. To those who has dropped the story in less than 8 chapters, I would like for you to read at least 10-20 chapters more to give your opinion or decide if this story is worth it. Cranberry changes throughout the story. I won’t spoil you but her relationship with Zombie actually change and make them closer throughout the story. Furthermore, there is a reason for the way that Zombie treats Cranberry the way he does, which is hinted at throughout the story and is an actual good reason. The characters in the story and the world in the story also expanded and stop being stale and plain. I can say for sure that the problem i saw in the early chapter was actually because it’s impossible to cram a an actual story building into a few chapters. I sincerely apologize to the author for that one. Overall, This is one of the rare story that i would truly rate 5 star overall. Everything about this story just make it more addicting to read and I really recommend anyone reading this to give it a chance and power through the first 10 chapters.
Currently in Chapter 7-8: The story has a lot of potential but is wrote in the way that would make a lot of readers drop it after Chapter 5-7. Let me explain. The current cast of characters till chapter 8 are pretty much Name + Action and nothing else. Even the two main characters we have are the type of characters that doesn’t really have any concrete personalities. we have Zombie, the….well, zombie, who is an isekai protagonist that is claimed by the person who reincarnated him to have all him memories but acts basically like a meek simp to the girl. The most human/expressive i seen this character even act is the one scene where he wanted to tell his family about his death. The girl (can’t remember name) is the character everyone hates in the early chapter. She’s basically abusive, manipulative, uncaring and arrogant. Claiming that the mc is nothing but a dead zombie even though afterward, it’s hinted that she can understand him. She never took any responsibility for her own actions either and rather blaming it on others. Maybe there are reasons hinted at why this is the way it is but as of chapter 8, we only have a single hint why she acts the way she does. Other characters on the other hand, Is basically nonexistent. No one other than the two get any screen time for long and the world is basically the girl’s mother garden and the training room. This might change in the future. Although i have to give praise to the author for being able to create the perfect villain and her loyal henchman in this case, i do frown on how much the girl’s personality changed in just one chapter. All of a sudden, she wasn’t the person that the readers wanted dead or punished anymore, as if someone replaced her with a good twin version. Anyways, i’ll try to write more reviews as i go. Hopefully this turn into a story of my own taste though.
I binged the first 500 chapter of this novel in around a weekend, and it was amazing. I thoroughly enjoyed the entire experience, the writing style was great, and updates came out so rapidly I would have believed you if someone told me that 100 people were writing it at the same time. This combined to make an excellent binging experience that draws you in the entire time.