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This story is great and I dearly wish that the author could restart and complete this novel 🌼🌼🌼🌼
I love it 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 Please update more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
i hope u continue ...............................................................................................................................................................................................
I hope you do write again. I really Enjoyed your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..
Pretty nice and enjoyable Harry Potter FF. Keep up the good work Author, it is your story and you are the one who is writing it. Ignore mean comments, appreciate ones that are helpful and enjoy nice and encouraging comments :)
Please continue updating and don't care about what others say. I'd rather like to continue reading, and don't particularly want to wait another 6 months.
Aku mendukungmu penulis! Jangan biarkan stress dan depresi menjadi penghalang bagimu. Ceritamu luar biasa dan kamu juga. Aku menantikan kelanjutan Archi selanjutnya 💪
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Well. i would like more of this so i can enjoy it more in my free time. but im not trying to demand. but this story has so much potential. he could be a teacher and help with harry’s problem and much more. Please mighty author dont smite thee.
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like where the story is currently going with this character not to weak but also not making him really over-powered and god like. I can tell the character is serious but not emotionless.
Great fanfiction. A very unique idea and self insert is used which provides a fresh perspective on the HP world. Plus, I have always wanted a good old Marauder's Era fanfic and it seems O finally got a good one.
It's not bad, some things are not as good as i thought it would be but altogether it's not half bad. It does needs someone to proofread though and change some things but besides that its pretty good.
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Great story, just needs a little better grammar........................................................ ...............................................................
Histoir cool j'attend la suit avec impatient Petits questions va t'il fait des affaires du côté mordu ou pas ? Et va t'il aller a las vegas avec du Félix felicis une fois adult pour x raisons ? Ca pourrais donné quelle que chose de marrant ?
Revelar Spoiler
loving the story so far I would love to see him at least save both of the brothers since he seems to actually care about them There has not been even one mention of his 3 sister which seems to be a bit of a hole in the story so far
Hi this is a great story don’t worry about what all the two negative comments say just keep doing what you’re doing I love the fact that you made You made it so that he would learn as much medication you can and take advantage of the fact that he’s suddenly in a world where magic is real can you just add one thing for constructive criticism make it so that he is open to romance with woman, in that he isn’t afraid of changing the past even if it is in a big way
Hi there ,this story is great and the quality is good. ( Mc is in my faf Family in HP so u now) At the momment i can not sa much but i will update my reviue erverysooften. ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Very good and interesting for me! Unfortunately the trash called "haters" have to ruin everything, the trash should just be disposed...
This story is great and I dearly wish that the author could restart and complete this novel 🌼🌼🌼🌼
I love it 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 Please update more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
i hope u continue ...............................................................................................................................................................................................
I hope you do write again. I really Enjoyed your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..
Pretty nice and enjoyable Harry Potter FF. Keep up the good work Author, it is your story and you are the one who is writing it. Ignore mean comments, appreciate ones that are helpful and enjoy nice and encouraging comments :)
Please continue updating and don't care about what others say. I'd rather like to continue reading, and don't particularly want to wait another 6 months.
Aku mendukungmu penulis! Jangan biarkan stress dan depresi menjadi penghalang bagimu. Ceritamu luar biasa dan kamu juga. Aku menantikan kelanjutan Archi selanjutnya 💪
gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
Well. i would like more of this so i can enjoy it more in my free time. but im not trying to demand. but this story has so much potential. he could be a teacher and help with harry’s problem and much more. Please mighty author dont smite thee.
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like where the story is currently going with this character not to weak but also not making him really over-powered and god like. I can tell the character is serious but not emotionless.
Great fanfiction. A very unique idea and self insert is used which provides a fresh perspective on the HP world. Plus, I have always wanted a good old Marauder's Era fanfic and it seems O finally got a good one.
It's not bad, some things are not as good as i thought it would be but altogether it's not half bad. It does needs someone to proofread though and change some things but besides that its pretty good.
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Great story, just needs a little better grammar........................................................ ...............................................................
Histoir cool j'attend la suit avec impatient Petits questions va t'il fait des affaires du côté mordu ou pas ? Et va t'il aller a las vegas avec du Félix felicis une fois adult pour x raisons ? Ca pourrais donné quelle que chose de marrant ?
Revelar Spoiler loving the story so far I would love to see him at least save both of the brothers since he seems to actually care about them There has not been even one mention of his 3 sister which seems to be a bit of a hole in the story so far
Hi this is a great story don’t worry about what all the two negative comments say just keep doing what you’re doing I love the fact that you made You made it so that he would learn as much medication you can and take advantage of the fact that he’s suddenly in a world where magic is real can you just add one thing for constructive criticism make it so that he is open to romance with woman, in that he isn’t afraid of changing the past even if it is in a big way
Hi there ,this story is great and the quality is good. ( Mc is in my faf Family in HP so u now) At the momment i can not sa much but i will update my reviue erverysooften. ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Very good and interesting for me! Unfortunately the trash called "haters" have to ruin everything, the trash should just be disposed...