Phantom of a Devil (BL)

LV 5

Amateur_Author

The story starts with the author describing the ambience which is spot on. Towards the end of the first chapter alone i had goosebumps. The story is fresh . Good work Author. Keep up the good work👍

LV 10

Scriptamagina

Good job, Author! You exploded my mind about the scene you're writing in every chapter. I keep on reading and here's my concern. Where is the other chapter? Hehe, I can't wait to read your new update. Fighting!

LV 1

Brian_Hanes_117

I think the description in this story is better than most of the works that I have read. The writing could use some work at times, but it's solid overall. The story does a good job of getting readers' attention quickly and steadily building up tension. It is action-packed, especially as the story progresses.

LV 3

SolAce

I think this book has potential to become exceedingly popular ! The characters are intriguing with the mystery of their origins. Plus, this deity system is worth noting, which I believe is your selling point, as it is what makes your novel different for me. The only thing that throws me from immersing myself fully is the grammar: run-on sentences, wrong grammar tense, and a few strange parts that I would find confusing. I tried to point some out to you, but do know I wasn’t able to recorrect everything. If you have discord, I could probably dm you there and clarify myself since it is a bit difficult to correct stuff in the app. Reason I didn’t give world background 5 stars was because I was momentarily on the wrong track of thought when I read So Eun’s point of view. Maybe I still am, which is another thing that prevents me from immersing fully. However, author, don’t get discouraged ! I’ve seen plenty of stories, and your potential is worth reading ! Don’t stop improving !

LV 10

Nattychris_22

I'm not a BL fan but this story hooked me. The story kept me on going to read more and more, it's an interesting one. Love the characters, they had their own personas. Great job, author! Keep it up! 💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻

LV 4

Vidit_Verma

Enjoyed Reading all the Chapters so far . Desperately waiting for the upcoming chapters to come [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 4

Andru_9788

Wow found a new obsession 😍. I especially love the tough MC Han Min. His intriguing and dark. Please come up with the good work dear author. Sincerely craving for more.

LV 13

midnight_bloom

Great premise. Story has potential and I'm excited about it. I just noticed that there's change of POV in the middle. I would suggest to stick to only one throughout. Also be careful of tense changes. Those are just minor findings that could still be improved. Content is already good. All the best, author. 👍

LV 2

clydieM

I love the story. I don’t usually read BL but this time, I think I will. Keep it up Author!

LV 1

moonbceyy

I absolutely loved the plot! At first, I don't understand it because the words were really difficult but that's a good sign, to be honest. You built the plot well and I think it could go well throughout the entire novel. I loved how every character developed as well! Good job and keep up the good work!

LV 2

Baby_bunnyyy

I really liked, it’s a very good story, I like all of the story development and the writing quality that was really good, so keep up and continue with what u do! I wish I could do and write stories about anything actually

LV 3

Gideon_Johnson

Author, I'm not saying any other thing apart from"I love this" ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️😘♥️♥️♥️♥️😘😘😍😘😘😘♥️♥️♥️😘😘😘♥️♥️😘😘😘♥️♥️😘♥️♥️😘😘😘♥️♥️😘😘😘

LV 2

KristineElias

This is honestly a good read, though, you need to check on tenses, grammars and when to use punctuation marks. Besides those tiny mistakes, this book really gives off a BL complicated love story with a tad bit of action. Hope to see more.

LV 12

Yaminoyosei

It starts out very nicely and it makes you want to read some more. I will definitely continue this to see what happens next. It seems like a good work and I hope it progresses as well as it starts. Good job!

LV 3

star_dreamer

This story is beautifully written. The plot is interesting and unique. The characters and world building is excellent. Really liked your story author!

LV 1

niyaa1617

This is a beautifully written story. 5/5 stars!! Keep writing please!! I'm also a big fan of LGBT books, so I'm glad u recommended it to me!!

LV 3

Whendhie1

I love a book with an amazing plot. Seems like it has a bit of magic in it and I just love that Definitely one I would like to keep following. Added to library 😁

LV 2

sinisterSmile07

hey just caught up with your novel. been busy the past few days XD. Anyway, I love the way it gives of an intriguing atmosphere that makes me want to flip the pages more and that Han Min guy is something! I'm not a fan of BL so it kinda took me a lot of courage to read it but what can you say, interesting reads draw readers! So keep it up! 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

LV 2

white_cat10

I just recently bumped and read this story and I say this is kind of underrated with bigger potential. Well written and deserve to get a full five star! If you are looking for a story with fantasy-action vibes, don't hesitate and start reading this now. I like this story hope that the author won't just drop it like the others. The more I read it, the more I want to finish it. Hope the author constantly update its chapter. ❤️

LV 3

Chaos_Swan_king

Very interesting start. A great read and all in all, a splendid novel. It is very much worth giving a try if you like tragedies mixed in with twists and turns in the romance.