Webnovel Author: midnight_bloom - Novel Collection

Thank you so much for reading the novel until the very end. 🥰💕💖 I appreciate your review and all your comments. It warms my heart. I cannot thank you enough. 🤗🤗🤗

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I'm excited to follow Kalliope's journey. May i just ask, how old is Kalliope? I might have missed it. Anyway, it's a well-written novel. It's easy to tell the quality even if there's only four chapters right now. Keep on writing, author. All the best. 🤗🤗🤗

The story is quite unique. 🤗 Its so easy to get invested into it. I am so excited to know the twists, the why's. 💛 Storyline is good. Characters are designed well. Author knows how to end a chapter well with impactful scenes/statements. Areas for improvement, there are instances of tense switch between past and present (Im also guilty of this). Also, very subtly, there are instances of POV change in the narration, to 1st POV from third. Just choose one, and be careful of the switches. 🙂 Overall, it is a novel that truly offers something new to the platform. I'm thrilled. Keep on writing, author. All the best.

The story is well-written. It got me hooked from chapter 1. Definitely a page-turner. Well done. Keep on writing, author. All the best.

Storytelling is smooth. The way it was narrated was so compelling especially when paired with very vivid descriptions that allow the reader to fully immerse in the scenes. It's a great story and very promising plot. Keep on writing, author.