Trapped On A Death World

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Ultimatedaywriter

Hey this is to put me over. Hope you enjoy my story. [img=recommend]////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

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ppp999

interesting story, with a mc, that at least for now not super powerful, which is appreciated, because otherwise it would only be boring, which is appreciated. Yes, the females of the harem are not human. (girls with octopus faces, or aranachet ...) So I do not expect, that finds ecchi scenes, not even less +18

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Stephen16

the beginning is pretty bad, you have no idea what is happening, the mind picture is unclear, overall bad beginning nejdkdkkdkdkdkkddkk

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Jimar_Jemar

2 Preach the word; be prepared in season and out of season; correct, rebuke and encourage—with great patience and careful instruction. 3 For the time will come when people will not put up with sound doctrine. Instead, to suit their own desires, they will gather around them a great number of teachers to say what their itching ears want to hear. 4 They will turn their ears away from the truth and turn aside to myths. 5 But you, keep your head in all situations, endure hardship, do the work of an evangelist, discharge all the duties of your ministry.

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Mr_Clay79

so far the chareters are quit different. they are all supposed to be the evil type monsters that the hero is supposed to fight but you see life from there side.

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val_the_mysterious

I like the change up from the normal storylines. I feel for him as an AI, I would probably have the same issues if I was an AI. The flow and actions from one chapter to the next make it hard to stop reading. I ran across a couple minor grammar errors, but nothing to distract from the story.

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Jo_J

An intriguing and catchy title! :) Big plus for that :) There are a lot of fanasty on WebNovel. It is not easy to create someting new, original and different... so I wish you a lot of crazy ideas! :) I read your story with pleasure :) The plot is captivating and characters are expressive. There are also interseting descriptions. All the best! Keep writing!

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Darlene_Virginia

The story is intriguing and the world background is well designed. The story development is smooth. I hope to read many more chapters in the future. Happy writing!

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CtrlAltKnight

A scarce goodie. A rare find in the web novels repertoire of works. I'll lurk in the darkness and strike from time to time to binge new chappies. Please keep it up. May the author write more, edit more, learn more, and even earn more.

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devilDestroyer

Premise is interesting and the characters are well described and written. Though there's some grammatical errors, the flow of the story is good. I wish you the best on your book author 😊

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Alpha_Medic

Aside from a few grammatical errors which could easily be overlooked, this story is of much higher quality than many you can find on WebNovel. I enjoy the blend of Sci-Fi and Fantasy, with youkai (I think that was a youkai) and AI all presenting in the first chapter. Keep up the good work, and I believe you'll excel in no time, Author!♥

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Mr_Skeleto

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Charlottee

well I’m in the first chapters, and it’s very confusing, you can’t get an image of the things described in the novel, I’ll continue a little more and see what happens.

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readtokilltime

I really don't want to get into this unless I know it's worth it and the synopsis does no good for me. Its confusing for me, is it the system that gets powerful and takes over the host or the host with the system gets stronger?

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XxErnestoxX

This is so different. Mc System World People(creatures) Story Abilities „Plot“ Are all unique and nothing is cliche. Respect author.

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PkFinal

This was an interesting read. I did like the concept and when the story got going, it definitely got going. I would like to see what comes to light in later updates.

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chellann1997

Looking forward to the next happenings of this story i find it quiet nice and interesting so i will try to read more of this ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Skyder

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