Ungranted

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Josev_Quadra

Hello there, folks! I am very happy to see that Ungranted finally gain some recognition! As you can see, the novel is written in POV (point of view) manner. I hope that this will make the readers feel more immersive in the world and able to follow the characters development more intimately! I hope you enjoy my work! There's also another book of mine called, The Voice in the Dark if you like contemporary romance. Please, do drop by if you want to read more of my works^^

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MikruZero

To be honest, this book has potential. A lot of grammatical, punctuations, and tenses mistakes. But don't worry, these mistakes are common for beginners. Also, you need to research more about the thing you are gonna put in the book. This way, you can better describe it and the scenes in the story. Improve your vocab and knowledge. Well, that's all. Do your best!

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Kathie_Kav

The character development is really great and I really like the story and the plot. The story is really awesome and specially the character development is admirable. I hope the author good luck👍

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ssfx3yuchens

I like the story. it's interesting to read about the wishmaker and the various technologies mentioned in the book, a glimpse into the future. author, keep it up 😀 added to my library for further reading!!

the storyline given is very organized and easy to understand for many people. and I really like the way the writer forms the characters in the story, I hope this story can be read by many people out there. thank you, God bless you

I am your true friend and thus I WILL COMMENT HERE AND SAY, "YOU WRITE GOOD STUFF AND PRETTY SUSPENSEFUL AS WELL!". I love where you ken see people true colors and then they go "Uwo you found me out" :3 Don't lose hope my friend, you write good shet!

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Kuroshine

Executed nicely! It's a bit dark and psychological, with romance as accessory! I like seeing strong female lead in a story~ I hope you update more of this author-nim!

Nyaan, thankies for the treat! I really love this kind of survival story :3 The dystopian is thick in this one, if you like romance and action, plus the psychology aspects revolving the characters...then this novel is good for you! It's interesting to see that you're exploring each of these characters so detailed, so that none of them feels like a side characters. They're driven by something, and that's the reason why they're humans. It's a similar thing I sense from this anime I watched, but I'm not going to spoil the anime here lol. Anyway, do your best author!

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Iz_moon

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shaeshang

Wow. Just wow. You have some imagination regarding AI. I could never write about AI because I'm not confident enough. And the characters were all awesome 👍

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Ironette

The story was really well written, I really enjoyed reading every single chapter. It was one of those books that you can't just stop reading.I truly loved it great job.♡

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bjalex

I really like this book,and I love how the author specified the year and century it is in the first chapter.Good luck to you Author!I'll support you!

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Miss_Elated03

The book is really intriguing. I like the way the characters are designed and I love the point of view. The beginning gave a glimpse of how it will be and it's really lovely.

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bibiyenini

A rare story wow! I wish I also have an app that can make my wish come true! Alarm alarm! Another story ahead of your library that can make the tables down!

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nyype

Hi Josev. I like story as I like to read action novels rather than crawling stories for example romantics. I came along couple of mixing different time tenses. You may update or you may not because they re not blinding anyway. I liked it, keep it alive as we wonder how it will be developed

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clydieM

Wow! You have 6 chapters per week, that’s amazing. I love your story.

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Khyati94820

Honestly with the way 2020 is going you might just be right with the assumption of 2022. Let's hope that's not true lol. Love the description, writing style and character dialogue. Keep it up!

Post-apocalyptic novel is my cup of tea and the novel is nicely written with detailed descriptive style and unique POVs. [img=recommend] Keep going!