Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson

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ForgottenLife

Hello! Author here. I am a new writer who is writing a original novel. I have read various and thought of writing a fan-fiction to improve my writing skills. NOW FOR THE FAN-FIC There will be no harem, sorry to disappoint harem lovers. Though there can be two wives depending on reader's demand. A poll will be conducted to decide that. I am writing a action novel with mix elements of fantasy and adventure. I have zero experience in writing romance and don't expect me to pull out cheesy romance out of nowhere, though I am currently reading some romance novels to learn, but that will not be the focus for this novel. As unnecessary romance and harem may f**k up the story and drastically reduce the quality of reading experiences. Thank you and stay tuned with me and also don't forget to check out my original Novel based on Indian Mythology with many legendary beings and powers.

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iLustForSleep

Are you interested in joining the Loli Sect?. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. .. . . .. .. . . . . . . . ..

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3RR0R_404

Hmmm can't really write a review since I'm bad at describing things but I'll try. Well let's see, grammar, its ok, I don't have any problems with it. Update, well its stable so that's good. Story development, I don't know since I can't think of anything to say to this. Characters, they're not emotionless puppets so that's good. World background, the author I guess knows it so its good

LV 3

Tandoris

Not for me, dropped chater 23, i don't understand the need to make the Mc so OP from the beginning , lit's like if he was litteraly screaming "I'M DIFFERENT, I'M SMART, I'M GENTLE" non stop with his action and the story developpement , while saying "I'm totally normal" to other character. Sad , the concept of Madara's grandson could have been nice if he wasn't so stupidly OP from the start

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_nothing_much

Story started out strong, ended up faltering as it went on. Introduced random factors to maintain some semblance of motivation for mc's growth, and characters remain stagnant (except for powers) throughout novel. Interesting read at first, but I'll be dropping it now.

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shwah

everything started very well... I read 100 chapters but couldn't take any more. a lot of excess. The protagonist is strong but useless. it's very sad.

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ediushshshs599_1

i don't know why people need to make Naruto into a wuxia. My best guess is that the author had no ideas. The story was nothing special. the starting powers were op. the idea were childish.

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KAI0

I'm disappointed. The author doesn't seem to have a grasp of how to form a storyline well, and keeps mixing up details between the various time periods in the story. Good effort, but the story lacks draw. It seems to me like the new villains only exist to give a challenge to the OP MC, who is only OP 50% of the time. That being said, writing is tough and I do see talent in the author as a writer. The language is clear and the writing itself isn't bad at all. Improving your foreshadowing skills and solidifying your overall plot before writing anymore would be nice. It's also unnecessary to give the MC so many powers, when just a few of them are actually used. Study the manga a little more - and I'd suggest reading some of the fanfics on translatinotaku, to inspire you more. Thanks for the hard work!

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Da_King_001

Their are too many elements' introduced. The MC is not even able to use all the abilities and I don't like this type of plot. Its my opinion so don't get offended.

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Shem_Sama

Damn u mess your own plot very badly author san at first you want to make him op and now you want to nerf him?? Though you messed up I gotta say it's been a fine ride reading your story please keep up the goodwork

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Kiiiddd

I really wanted to like this story, it has a non psycho uchiha MC that tries to gain knowledge and skills to his best ability But once he started to collect the infinity stones for his gauntlet I started questioning it hard. Also why even bother giving the MC future knowledge, at best he uses it to notice characters. I am at the 9 tailes attack and he hasn't used it directly to change ANYTHING. Story has changed very slightly but it's stuff the MC did on accident or in passing But I dropped it when a forced time skip happened just so it could screw with the MC's plans and keep the plot mostly intack. Might as well just read the manga at this point. If you are gonna make a AU then don't force the story plot to happen

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Dr_Absent_Minded

sorry to burst your bubble bro it does exist but i still gave you a 4star review without even reading it because maybe you will take it as an inspiration and make a better one than the one below https://***.fanfiction.net/s/9172570/1/Legacy

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Anas_Nazim

Great story. I loved reading it. Hey you can ignore it but can you make a killing intent based jutsu. I mean he has chakra equal to tailed beast. And please don't make him aquare renagun early. Make it like when Madara finds out about he hides and trains the MC.

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Geraint124x

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RyuSenju

please never drop this naruto novel I really like it.Its a good novel but please don't add any world travel in this fanfiction because their is already to much world travel one.

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Heegun

Shouldn’t have added the grimoire of sin it ruined the development

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_GLT_

dropped because of nerf, i mean if you don't want op mc then don't make it op from the start, adding nerfs will just ruin the story. The story is ruined, hope you like it I really stole the review, I'm too lazy to write.

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tramed_

i gotta ask you where did you come up with light, dark, chaos and void elements? as pointed out by others, naruto's world already has so many elements and aspects, why add these? it is just gonna make it all the more confusing and complex. your writing skills are great, its been a while since i have read without seeing grammatical errors every chapter. ig im just not much into too op mc stories, it kinda takes the fun out of it for me. but for those who like op mc, which i think were majority of your readers, i think you should have kept the mc op instead of nerfing him later, or maybe introduce stronger opponents or some roadblock in his progress to even it out a little. good luck