Gate: War of Two Worlds Part 1

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Tom_Xaider

Once again the author shows that the fan of Gate can create far better story than the author of the original Gate universe with consistency in world building, character development and story events

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Prothanis

I suggest looking up 'Gate: A War of Two Worlds' on the website Wattpad. Posted by the same author, only the one on Wattpad has 100 more chapters released than here.

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xPonGx

I think it was a great idea that you used the original as a base for your story. I am looking forward to what direction the story leads toward. Keep up the good work!!

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ThatOneGUy

Here's some constructive criticism, this story's format has issues which make it boring to read almost like a robot wrote it, first issue i have is the author keeps writing actions and events in the story in a past tense that has neither elements from a third person or a first person perspective and also has no clear MC or character introduction that is properly done, the author isn't asking himself and comparing to other fiction novels things like having a proper arc of events or perhaps having decent backstory and introductions to the characters with emotions that portray their personality instead of just typing "name : Mark Welsh sex: male blah blah blah" stupid character sheets for introductions for characters lazily and typing stuff with no excitement or perspective robottically "the tank would fire shells at x" instead of "one could hear across the battlefield a tank emptying its shells rapidly at x with explosions from the shells hitting all around its general area throwing carnage and blood and guts everywhere" it doesn't take much there to be descriptive the author needs to stop being lazy and rewrite everything so it's actually readable, and also learn how to write a good story for once.

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AbsoluteCarnage

Great story. Great development. Great pace. Great detailing. Great schedule. Great overall. Good piece of art.

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Mysticwolf

Man this is a good take on the original just a different startup location as for how things go the characters are well developed the back stories are well designed too along with the deep feeling of how people would actually respond if a gate really open to a new world the slice of life added with the mission ops are a perfect blend to what soldiers would've experienced while away from home my vote read it if you want it's a good journey And a cool take on the original a lot of new elements best part is you see more than just a hero in a new world you see a team working together to change things for the better for all

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Tom_X8

An excellent Gate story with far superior quality in world building, character development, scenarios transition and of course deep relationship between characters

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ArashiTenebris

Like some other review said, this novel are better than the anime version (if we ignore the grammar problem part, which the author did rewrite previously some week/month ago, I can see the old original version would be even worse, so right now at least readable, oh and since I help him edit most of the grammar error, aside from the POV problem so it no longer as hard to read, beside more than half of the problem those lower than 3 stars have been solved, at least for the grammar part) The story show more realistic touch that the cannon didn't show, and less bias like the anime since the author do try to be realistic and also admit that American aren't perfect (another point is that he don't make some 'enemy' like china or north korea go full evil/retard, after all he recognize that it mostly the 'leadership' and not the people at fall here in real life). and the story also begin to go way difference after volume 2 (the Italica siege arc) and become better there, only use the cannon for some reference but still go as it own story and add backstory and stuff that not in the cannon, while still consistent and interesting, so try to be a bit patient and read to at least chapter 25 or 26 to finally see more difference (and you can check the character list and map in author discord channel, you can see the author expand way beyond what the cannon world map show, and add more stuff like new city and place in that cannon continent map there and not just simply bland) Although the author are quite new, but he have one hell of learning curve and do try to improve it, while being realistic/consistent with the story so it a plus, and it not typical self-insert and take the topic more serious, so mostly no otaku stuff (maybe the mc are a bit of nerd with western cartoon/movie like lord of the ring, transformer or similar, but that only slightly show it, oh and those character not bland, they do have lot of character developing, just a bit slow so you will see some major one in volume 5) and there are actually some new enemy general that actually competent, and some real threat that modern army just not able to handle easily, so no usual easily streamroll there like most fanfiction or cannon

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The_Young_Flash

I love this webnovel. It is awesome in every way. It takes the gate and builds on it in understanding ways, even compliments the experiences and has faint traces of reality. Give it a try and it is awesome. There are no negatives here, if I had to pick one - it would be sometimes this story tends to not focus on the mc, but the other characters are just as well developed. I hope we explore the world some more and makes the main characters get lost from their back up and explore the world somewhat.

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hmmmmmm91

I just love the idea of gate and AC-130 mowing down enemy forces like butter is nice. And China Cold War hits a little to close to home. What else is there to say explosions are interesting

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JamesDiaz_714

Really like this novel, what was annoying about the original is the anti-American themes, and with this alternative story is much appreciated. Much more realistic and accurate to how the U.S. would handle it, we Would NOT send SF to kidnap people from one of our closest Allies like the original. The characters are multi-facected and realistic, at least as one can be as a Loli demi-goddess. It doesn't glorify war or paint the Americans as perfect. would recommend to anyone that enjoys the original and was a bit annoyed with the surface level geo-politics of it.

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Triparadox

I have reached chapter 79, and it has been a while since my last review; I believe it was at late 40s. Anyway, the more you read this story, the more you will realize the previously non-existent grammatical errors to surface pretty often. At some point, although not concentrated in a specific chapter, you will realize that some of the word choice does not make any sense at all even if you are not trying to nitpick about grammar. For example, the author puts a "my" instead of "him" or vice versa. This can cause you, or at least me, to have to reread the whole sentence of even the previous one just to try and make sense what the paragraph is supposed to say. Consistency is often an issue with fanfiction. It is often the case that a solid work is shown only in the first five to ten chapters before the quality goes downhill. This series is surprisingly able to maintain its quality aside from the writing error mentioned above. Out of the chapters I have read so far, I cannot remember a single chapter that acts as a filler as each chapter has its own story for you to read. One contrasting point that this series does well in my opinion than most other GATE fanfiction is that the aliens are not made to be dumb as rock. Although they start at the same intellectual level, in this story, the aliens adapt and try to learn and understand the NATO forces tactics in order to fight them back. There is an evidence to their attempts to study and come up with something they think may work. There are also many characters that are taken care of. Usually, especially in fanfiction, the sole focus is about action. This would normally leave our characters to be generic and bland. There would not be any sort of attachment or that we knew nothing about said characters but X being in the US Army and Y is being the Empire's general. WOTW's author has done a great job in taking its time to let the readers know a bit more at a time about the main characters as well as side characters.

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Luft_Rauser

Im back after sometimes of savings and pilling uo chapter ... Oh yea, how are you doing today mr. Author Thanks for the chapter Hope you had a great day

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Kuromego

I can't say it is the best thing, but it is readable to read this, and I wanted to ask a question, are you going to introduce battle armor that increases physical capacity and speed? I'm asking, because suddenly you want to introduce the Arachnids that are as challenging as that fire dragon, and I was suggesting the exoskeleton because of that and sorry for my English ...

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JRT02

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Luft_Rauser

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CharleyHerrera

For the exp........................................'simple the best'keep the good work'.....................................................';)

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InterPlanarGod

for god sakes DO NOT USE THE WORD "WILL" if you dont know what it means!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! god damn this **** i cant read it without wanting to slam my head into a wall!

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Geratriges

Like the story.....continue it.................do say if u are dropping it..................................................................

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PSF_xXspielerXx

This story is one of the best war Storys i have seen, nothing feels forced too writing. 🫡👍