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Honestly a good fiction. A different point of view and much earlier than the canon, combined with an unexpected protagonist, give life to a pleasant and innovative story. A new way to exploit the immense probabilities of the DXD universe, without the characters people are used to, with an ambitious, intelligent and hard-working mc. Congratulations author.
I just gave it a try again and I must say I regret stopping at chapter 90 what I thought would happen did not happen In all the novels I've readed when reincarnators are added it just turns to a cliché battle such as reincarnators vs reincarnators but here it's different 300+ chapters and he still has not fought other reincarnators and there are not cliché stuff such as "kill him before he grows" or anything like that. ( to those that think its a bad fanfic just because there are reincarnators then you are in for a surprise so don't make the same mistake )
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I hope Leylin kills Zeoticus in the most painful and worst way possible because there isn't anything likable about Mc's character, not even a single point. Additionally, the plot is inconsistent, and the power levels keep becoming unstable.
Read it a long time (like 100 chap) Finally retry it and read all the 500~ chapter, very good. Loved it If you like high power scale universe, kingdom building, world of magus, dxd... Ect you should try to read it
I've reached chapter 26 before I dropped this fanfic. It's mainly focused on Kingdom Building while also the MC is training to become more powerful. The grammar is excellent without mistakes and the flow of the story is also good. The reason for me to drop it is because it just wasn't my cup of tea and I didn't like how there were too many Pantheon of many gods all over the place.
It be cool if they went to the universe where canon happens and they see what happens if they were more powerful and not rely on a perv like issei and how powerful zeo is and his entire family and then they try to absorb it to baator
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This story is pretty average all together. Was fun in the beginning but it stated becoming a chore to read. There is like 20 different power systems and the author is constantly moving between them and mixing them. It’s very confusing. Around chaoter 350 or so the devils randomly become Muslims?? Like why author? Made no sense at all. Tons of grammatical errors, use grammarly or something author. I think the biggest issue is the author just keeps adding more and more power systems to the story, it become ridiculous. It was fun to read for awhile but like I said, it became more of a chore later on. Best of luck though author.
Excelente agregando warlock of the magus world gracias por los capítulos te deseo lo mejor que alcances más votos y tengas más experiencia.....
"Writing Quality: The writing is decent but it has a certain inconsistency, somewhat reminiscent of Chinese novels, which might come across as peculiar. Stability of Updates: Updates are quite slow. Story Development: The plot seems to be overloaded with numerous events, leading to noticeable plot holes. Character Design: The main character's actions feel illogical for an 'antihero,' as he resorts to killing billions for a seemingly insignificant reward like an alchemy book. It creates an unintentional humorous element in the story. World Background: The setting appears to lack a clear identity, oscillating between cultivation, DXD, and even science fiction elements. Overall, the main character's actions make it challenging to appreciate the story. Despite its high rating, I find the writing and side character development to be rather mediocre."
The way the author is able to expand and create a whole new universe is amazing and a refresher from the usual fanfics where writers forcefully combine two worlds and yes he has included other novels but he has wrote it where the mc or other characters have a reason to explore instead of the cliche system teleporting the mc to a new world just because they’ve outgrown the last one and having no consideration for power systems. Where as Trafford is able to merge and create his own power systems that make sense.
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It's very good Thank you for such an excellent work. [img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
Out of curiosity, when are we getting back to the main story chapters as opposed to the interludes?
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It is really good , it got a pretty slow start but it picks up in speed rather fast!
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This is my favourite story I have found on this app love your work hope to read more of it
This story is pure fire. It takes a whole different approach to the DxD story which is very refreshing and not done a lot by others. The OCs are likable and tend to grow on you as you progress. Author don't you dare abandon this story.
alright, first off the amount of plot holes is just astounding the author said that this is a heavy AU but that still doesn't excuse the number of plot holes created by his deviation from the source material, second, i ran into some grammatical errors but they weren't so many as to be a reason to cross out this fic completely the writing is not unreadable so to say it's just that there are some parts that might need some polishing, however, my real problem with the writing and character design is how the author portrayed the character's conversations, for the most part they just sound robotic with no real "life" if that makes sense and half the stuff they say is either chunni or is something you'd expect a xianxia Chinese character to say
Honestly, it gets boring, perhaps more due to the fact that I like physical combat more than magical, and that the main character is reminding me that physicality is not his thing doesn't help, at least he's not like other magicians who neglect physicality and that's why I keep reading, plus there's little dialogue, but hey, I'm not going to give it a bad note because of personal tastes.
the concept was very nice like with transmigration and stuff. But there is seriously too much kingdom-building and time wasted on explanation and it is even repeated several times. too much invention and the same with the mc explaining it again and again. it is too little for the other tags that you have put. I feel like reading a chinese novel but just the dxd version and i am just too bored with that stuff. seriously not my type.
This novel has a good story without a doubt, but it is too early to give a concrete judgment for the quality of this story and its plot. A three(3) star rating for story chapter update stability, I don't give more stars as I haven't had time to track the story chapter update rate yet. Conclusion — a great story overall, at least as far as the beginning of the story is concerned.
the story is all good but the problem the author make the story more background like other anime or novels author made it into one novel like cultivation ya know ... but still so good novel and author know how to write complicated novels and unlike other novel 'devour' ability he got because of the bloodline have flaw and even after a 2 years he progressing many much but not you expected he was still in ultimate class but when he got golden apple from niflem idk her physical,vitaly,speed progress quickly into ultimate class because her body is in high class and after eating that golden apple he broke through into bottleneck
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Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
I absolutely love it. Great fanfiction worth reading. Can someone recommend similar fanfics with similar premises (Kingdom building, World hopping, researching magic..). I have already read HP: A magical journey, HP Dimensional Wizard, Nascent Kaleidoscope and Magical Marvel. I would love something similar to these fanfics. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
Very good book that captured the essence of both eastern and western cultivational systems
One of the best DxD fanfic I ever read[img=recommend]. The world-building is so good and extensive. Also, I like how the author integrates and balances the power scaling or progression of different novels. And the thing that I like the most is the mc, since chapter 1 until now he still stays true to his goal. Hope I can see this fanfic being completed[img=update]🙏.
It's basically "Warlock in the Magus World", but in Dxd. So, there's an emphasis on cultivation. It's too early in to write a more complex review, but it's pretty good so far.
Honestly a good fiction. A different point of view and much earlier than the canon, combined with an unexpected protagonist, give life to a pleasant and innovative story. A new way to exploit the immense probabilities of the DXD universe, without the characters people are used to, with an ambitious, intelligent and hard-working mc. Congratulations author.
I just gave it a try again and I must say I regret stopping at chapter 90 what I thought would happen did not happen In all the novels I've readed when reincarnators are added it just turns to a cliché battle such as reincarnators vs reincarnators but here it's different 300+ chapters and he still has not fought other reincarnators and there are not cliché stuff such as "kill him before he grows" or anything like that. ( to those that think its a bad fanfic just because there are reincarnators then you are in for a surprise so don't make the same mistake )
Revelar Spoiler I hope Leylin kills Zeoticus in the most painful and worst way possible because there isn't anything likable about Mc's character, not even a single point. Additionally, the plot is inconsistent, and the power levels keep becoming unstable.
Read it a long time (like 100 chap) Finally retry it and read all the 500~ chapter, very good. Loved it If you like high power scale universe, kingdom building, world of magus, dxd... Ect you should try to read it
I've reached chapter 26 before I dropped this fanfic. It's mainly focused on Kingdom Building while also the MC is training to become more powerful. The grammar is excellent without mistakes and the flow of the story is also good. The reason for me to drop it is because it just wasn't my cup of tea and I didn't like how there were too many Pantheon of many gods all over the place.
It be cool if they went to the universe where canon happens and they see what happens if they were more powerful and not rely on a perv like issei and how powerful zeo is and his entire family and then they try to absorb it to baator
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This story is pretty average all together. Was fun in the beginning but it stated becoming a chore to read. There is like 20 different power systems and the author is constantly moving between them and mixing them. It’s very confusing. Around chaoter 350 or so the devils randomly become Muslims?? Like why author? Made no sense at all. Tons of grammatical errors, use grammarly or something author. I think the biggest issue is the author just keeps adding more and more power systems to the story, it become ridiculous. It was fun to read for awhile but like I said, it became more of a chore later on. Best of luck though author.
Excelente agregando warlock of the magus world gracias por los capítulos te deseo lo mejor que alcances más votos y tengas más experiencia.....
"Writing Quality: The writing is decent but it has a certain inconsistency, somewhat reminiscent of Chinese novels, which might come across as peculiar. Stability of Updates: Updates are quite slow. Story Development: The plot seems to be overloaded with numerous events, leading to noticeable plot holes. Character Design: The main character's actions feel illogical for an 'antihero,' as he resorts to killing billions for a seemingly insignificant reward like an alchemy book. It creates an unintentional humorous element in the story. World Background: The setting appears to lack a clear identity, oscillating between cultivation, DXD, and even science fiction elements. Overall, the main character's actions make it challenging to appreciate the story. Despite its high rating, I find the writing and side character development to be rather mediocre."
The way the author is able to expand and create a whole new universe is amazing and a refresher from the usual fanfics where writers forcefully combine two worlds and yes he has included other novels but he has wrote it where the mc or other characters have a reason to explore instead of the cliche system teleporting the mc to a new world just because they’ve outgrown the last one and having no consideration for power systems. Where as Trafford is able to merge and create his own power systems that make sense.
Revelar Spoiler It's very good Thank you for such an excellent work. [img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
Out of curiosity, when are we getting back to the main story chapters as opposed to the interludes?
I'm still at early chapters but I think I found some hidden gem[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
It is really good , it got a pretty slow start but it picks up in speed rather fast!
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This is my favourite story I have found on this app love your work hope to read more of it
This story is pure fire. It takes a whole different approach to the DxD story which is very refreshing and not done a lot by others. The OCs are likable and tend to grow on you as you progress. Author don't you dare abandon this story.
alright, first off the amount of plot holes is just astounding the author said that this is a heavy AU but that still doesn't excuse the number of plot holes created by his deviation from the source material, second, i ran into some grammatical errors but they weren't so many as to be a reason to cross out this fic completely the writing is not unreadable so to say it's just that there are some parts that might need some polishing, however, my real problem with the writing and character design is how the author portrayed the character's conversations, for the most part they just sound robotic with no real "life" if that makes sense and half the stuff they say is either chunni or is something you'd expect a xianxia Chinese character to say
Honestly, it gets boring, perhaps more due to the fact that I like physical combat more than magical, and that the main character is reminding me that physicality is not his thing doesn't help, at least he's not like other magicians who neglect physicality and that's why I keep reading, plus there's little dialogue, but hey, I'm not going to give it a bad note because of personal tastes.
the concept was very nice like with transmigration and stuff. But there is seriously too much kingdom-building and time wasted on explanation and it is even repeated several times. too much invention and the same with the mc explaining it again and again. it is too little for the other tags that you have put. I feel like reading a chinese novel but just the dxd version and i am just too bored with that stuff. seriously not my type.
This novel has a good story without a doubt, but it is too early to give a concrete judgment for the quality of this story and its plot. A three(3) star rating for story chapter update stability, I don't give more stars as I haven't had time to track the story chapter update rate yet. Conclusion — a great story overall, at least as far as the beginning of the story is concerned.
the story is all good but the problem the author make the story more background like other anime or novels author made it into one novel like cultivation ya know ... but still so good novel and author know how to write complicated novels and unlike other novel 'devour' ability he got because of the bloodline have flaw and even after a 2 years he progressing many much but not you expected he was still in ultimate class but when he got golden apple from niflem idk her physical,vitaly,speed progress quickly into ultimate class because her body is in high class and after eating that golden apple he broke through into bottleneck
Revelar Spoiler Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
I absolutely love it. Great fanfiction worth reading. Can someone recommend similar fanfics with similar premises (Kingdom building, World hopping, researching magic..). I have already read HP: A magical journey, HP Dimensional Wizard, Nascent Kaleidoscope and Magical Marvel. I would love something similar to these fanfics. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
Very good book that captured the essence of both eastern and western cultivational systems
One of the best DxD fanfic I ever read[img=recommend]. The world-building is so good and extensive. Also, I like how the author integrates and balances the power scaling or progression of different novels. And the thing that I like the most is the mc, since chapter 1 until now he still stays true to his goal. Hope I can see this fanfic being completed[img=update]🙏.
It's basically "Warlock in the Magus World", but in Dxd. So, there's an emphasis on cultivation. It's too early in to write a more complex review, but it's pretty good so far.