The Inconceivable Flame: A Fallen Angel's Disguise

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XOMatsumaeohana

This is part of a review swap valid for Chapter 18 Writing Quality: (5) (ू˃̣̣̣̣̣̣︿˂̣̣̣̣̣̣ ू) The author's writing quality is better than mine so offering advice feels awkward. This is one of those actually well written novels, with seldom any mistakes. So if you want good grammar, this story is for you. Character Design: (5)The female lead is very unique, maybe because she was raised as a guy. But I don't think that matters too much. Girls don't have to act girly, they can act the way our FL does. A strong character, but despite this she gives of the impression of being lonely sometimes. Story Development: (5) only seventeen chapters so far, but the pacing is good. The mysteries surrounding the FL background, and the build up relationship with the ML is not rushed. Instead the author takes his/her time with it. I'm interested in how the FL will fall in love with the ML considering her personality. Who will be the first one to fall in love? World Background: 5 stars for world background too, what can I say? There's no confusion at all and everything is explained setting wise. Overall; A good story that I will definitely keep in my novel and continue reading.

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soulbeholder

This story every now and then manages to touch one's heart..sometimes those beautiful lines prickle ur heart and sometimes they soothe it..writing is great...n all the characters have their own importance..everything seems to be mystery..although it feels like we can imagine the story..but when i tried to..my whole mind get messed up...so thn i stopped it...n just going with...so far..its pretty good..n well if this goes on..am hmgoing to fail in my exam..as this novel keeps me hanging in itself

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KimTaehyung3012

Dear fellow readers searching for amazing content, It is my pleasure to make it known to you, that we've have finally got our hands on the most most delightful piece of good news tonight. And that's right, you've got it, we all at last have found a story that's is no short than BEAUTIFUL. Although, the story seems to be far from developed, we all can say it's gonna be one of the most magnificent ever written. It is a gold mine of content, that doesn't attract readers with all bunch of rubbish. The character sketches are just so overpowering, it reminds me of what the Author had once said herself, that she doesn't just create characters, she lives them. And that make the same so relatable and appealing. You will not find the same 'oh-so-weak-and-delicate' female leads and 'knight-in-shining-armor' male leads. And their story is definitely not a cliché 'love at first sight'. Even then, its unique and mysterious storyline will certainly make you fall for it. The other characters are not given only the position of the sidelines, and are of equal importance, which adds to the intrigue. Its so refreshing and decorative that I'm running out of adjectives now. And if you thought THAT'S good, we're far from over. Every chapter brings out the different colors of not only the characters, but also of life. The Author teaches us the most brutal of life's lessons in the most realistic but inspiring way as possible. You will not find cheesy, sugar coated, far-from-actual 'You are the best in the world' quotes here, but drop-dead cruel but real one liners. And I don't think I will find a word in the existence of the English language to describe the Author's creativity. I mean, HOW DID SHE COME UP WITH SUCH AN EXQUISITE, BEGUILING, IRRESISTIBLE, BEWITCHING, STUNNING, HEAVENLY, AND AGAIN BEAUTIFUL MASTERPIECE LIKE THAT? And I'm probably saying it while she is cooking up another even better story in her amazing mind. Also, just when I think I couldn't be any more impressed, she never fails to surprise me again. The amount of research, skill and effort she put into it is pretty overwhelming. The Author is quite stable with her releases, and also treats her readers a lot. Although we all are guilty of wanting more chapters per regular, and I don't escape the crime. And beacuse of our enless demands, sometimes, (very, very rarely), there're maybe a few typos, but it's way more than worth it. She actually takes time to read out her readers opinions and values them, which was a pleasant surprise to me, I appreciate it a lot. And all of this................ was actually ME BEING HELLA HONEST. To conclude, may I say, if you fall into it, you're not gonna be escaping. Cheers, Me

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njugu68

Wow, that's how best I can describe this fantastic story. I picked up this book because of author, I'm reading her book Imperfect Desires, and it took me 2 days to catch up that's how good her books are. From the first chapter, including the Mini-Episodes at the foot of the chapters, the dry humor or bouts of laughter have not seized. Really loving this story please continue with more updates. Highly recommend this story 10/10. ❤

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Tannychan

Haven't read the novel yet but I'm sure your new novel is fabulous. Can't wait to explore Ru's story... I'm so sad that her heart was broken because of the careless word that Ye Joe said so I'm hoping that our male lead is powerful enough to heal her heart and give her happiness since all this was not even in her dictionary. Fighting Author !!! I'm sure your new novel will be well received by everyone .

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abbiebaby

Wawuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am so happy like sooooooo happy,our book is finally out can I call it part two of the devilish beauty Author San,will there be an appearance of xu mey and ye Jie in this book? I can't wait to start reading

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Xye

To start with, The FL in this novel should be full of darkness, over dramatic(poetic), mysterious & heartless BUT she's very contradictory... As the novel progresses, the FL shows some laid back, easy going and childishness that really contradicts her character.. As shows in some of her back story, it indicates that she's somewhat tortured or experimented BUT when her food fetish strikes, her being mysterious, heartlessness disappears... She really confuses me.. Her character does'nt convince me of being in the dark side but just being lonely-poetic that craves companions. As the novel progresses more the 'dark heartlessness' vibe disappears from her.. Most of the time she's genius & childish. She's trying to remember a memory that is tragic but the vibe she shows doesn't. The ML on this novel is also a genius but somewhat overbearing. He's viewpoint is somewhat different. He dotes on his younger siblings most especially Yuan, who acts like a thirteen to fifteen years old but in fact a n Eighteen years old lad(this bothers me coz his acting is not align with his age, or maybe his just too shielded by his older brother). This only shows that the ML's weakness is/are his siblings(most esp the younger bro). The characters needs stability(consistency) and growth... The story plot is actually interesting it hooks me BUT the character's attitudes confuses me...I may sound redundant but its really bothering for me. It takes time for me to read because I want to understand every part of it... I can still recommend this though, its still interesting to read.

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Ayuzawa_M

It keeps getting more interesting, I can't wait to read this novel till the end. Just in love with the whole plot and characters.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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devil_princess_07

I know i am late anyway this story is die for if you are bored with typical romance then this is for you....mc character is so good, refreshing and mysterious ....you will never regret reading this one...and thanks author finally we can know about ru's past😙😙😙😙😙😙😙

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Sunglow

So, our darling ru story is out, I cant wait to explore lord knight world. Author,are there any appearances of meyjie here.Wait oooo, is our male lead as cute as Jie because I don't want someone that will break our ru heart like lu ge did

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Ash_Pickachu

What can I say about the book? Mee-Hee, I can only say that as an author really has intrigued us readers about this special FL. I'm looking forward to reading the whole story. Can't wait for the story to unfold

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Pennymanaughty

The writer is definitely the best whichever book she writes is full of wisdom and each character is in sync complementing each other in either flaws or perfections. In as much as both our main characters had nightmares in China so will their dreams be made. Enjoy reading and enriching your mind and don't forget there's always enough dog food to chew on with all the romance 😁😁😁

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Chryiss

Perhaps it’s because I’m not familar with your stories before where the background of the characters and world comes frkom, but after the first chapter, I had a little difficulty keeping track of all the namss and characters introduced. Also, the scene changes to the torturing to then the waking up from a nightmare to the shattering of another person’s belonging, they all didn’t connect in a cohesive fluid flow back to the beginning. I wondered how did she end up here? Why does she have different names? Again, all this might be due to me not being familiar with your previous stories, but for gaining first time readers, it’s important to include this info so that this story can be read and understood on its own. Besides that, great writing and storytelling overall!

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singhkaushiki

Omg... I was really waiting for this novel... Thank you so much for this one dear author. I'm happy that now we can read about our super hero /heroin that is ru's separate novel. 😊

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Zori143

Just 2 chapters in and I'm already intrigued to know the rest. Just like the author's other book, this one is all set to make me jealous and I can feel it already. I'm all ready to eat the dog food.

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Smiillleeee

I don't remember reviewing this novel and even if I've done I felt like coming and dropping another review~ This one is a masterpiece ❤️ It's been months or maybe year, I don't even remember when I finished reading this novel but I can't get it out of my mind. My favourite and a MUST READ novel~

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Muse_

This book got me hooked before I even knew what it is about . The picture used is so different from most that it reminds me of those old books ( I'm a young lad though ) The story is so different that I just couldn't keep it down . Now that I am on. chapter 274 , I decided to take a break . Keeping the most intense suspense though feels like torture so does my burning eyes . This is the best story ever I have ever read . And I thank the author for that .

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Na_Na_0521

What i can say is i really like this book i fall in love with ru at the first sign but unfortunately that she has zhiren 😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞

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toffys

The way you write author it's awesome you really got real talent the way you make ru express her feelings touches our heart..........................................................................................

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Jenny_Thao

Author sama poetic much!!!😁 Luv the way how she has many identities and tries to find herself within them...Lots of strong FL vibes here...can't wait to know more about ML😍 Excites much about how story is going to develop once they go deeper into their past together!!!😘😍😂