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Story is cool, i like it all in all, just that, i dont know what else to say so........... .. Yea, all in all, it is a good story, bbut, i personally didn't like it as much as others would.
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honestly I believe it is a good book I would change a few things but hey it's the author story I can't tell him how to do something if that's how he wants to go about it
man power are to messed up like now he was fighting with enchanted speed and next day you he is flash level which has fucking make no explanation and can one thing first give bunch of power but can't use one properly least focus on one thing before moving to next your idea is great but you should arrange every thing properly to make good and understand better like now he look like mess of system and power while the symbiote is also looking like a mess man just wanted to say arrange all the idea before you write them they can make each power amplifies each other then move to next like the void eyes like that its better to understand while power levels in dc and marvel goes like this strength/speed normal enchanted super cosmic while divided in 3 level(weak/medium/peak) each normal spider man comes in weak to medium enchanted strength
This author can write good stories but there is a major thing I hate about all of them... Because author have attention span of a 5 year old on a sugar rush maint theme of all how works is a FFFING REBOOT!!! You read the story, start to like it and around chapter 50 you get reboot... Ok you think the story starts again and it will be greater but no no no you are not even close to chapter 30 and you get rebooted AGAIN. Now you think ok this will be final version bout this time it is even worse because author is barely past chapter 10 and he decides to drop the F Bomb and the work you read too... So if anyone wants to be in constant reboot hell of what I think seem like a good works then suit yourself.
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i love this work but i am confused as the author made it out that he was restarting the novel as he talked about power and character changes, so why is this now getting updates? is the author just going to continue this version?
AUTHOR STILL THERE, HOPE YOU WILL NOT DROP THIS NOVEL AND WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT AND WILL ALSO MAINTAIN THE UPDATE RATE NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥
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I could only read single chapter as the writing quality is so bad. Therefore I do not have anything else to say about this story................................................ . .
Nice book. With mistake in height 5,11 to 6,4. The rest is for expppoo one he gg re dr u u in free up day so ha can ha ask bc for do is at the has do it for ha so ha to is in my so is to on far so to call to me of so we the so do I do me. Vvg had by hi he has go if you it to us an it's too is ha an is to is go is do to see ya soon ha G yes to is do it to us who yes in it to plans my is do yes to it.
hello when i can read new chapter this novel so interesting for me characteristic all character so good and fantastic i hope can read it every day for all my life day
The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. every story plot in all the chapter is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. thank you and don’t drop or reboot it because I like read your novel.
This novels not for me but still read it and see if it is for you!! ...................................................................................
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,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Good luck with your book! I am going to keep reading it and I hope that you can keep updating it. More chapters please
The idea was good, everything was going alright until the MC got op powers that sometimes he chooses not to use when it would be the most logical thing to do... Anyways MC must be having some personality issues because his objective is A and later it changes to B only to go back to A... Idk overall I enjoyed it quite a bit but it went to s*it real fast.
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The story development so far is definitely 5 stars the character design is also well developed every character has their own emotions and the harem is also good because the author is a fkng haremking :p
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Giving it one star to warm other reads to look at the chapters following chapter 50 before you begin reading. It’s a request of “paatrion $7 blah blah blah.” So I say unless you want to pay to read more into this story there is not reason to pick it up in the first place. That being said you’re free to draw your own conclusions. I’m not going to waist my time.
Story is cool, i like it all in all, just that, i dont know what else to say so........... .. Yea, all in all, it is a good story, bbut, i personally didn't like it as much as others would.
update please donot stop writing please please please please🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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honestly I believe it is a good book I would change a few things but hey it's the author story I can't tell him how to do something if that's how he wants to go about it
man power are to messed up like now he was fighting with enchanted speed and next day you he is flash level which has fucking make no explanation and can one thing first give bunch of power but can't use one properly least focus on one thing before moving to next your idea is great but you should arrange every thing properly to make good and understand better like now he look like mess of system and power while the symbiote is also looking like a mess man just wanted to say arrange all the idea before you write them they can make each power amplifies each other then move to next like the void eyes like that its better to understand while power levels in dc and marvel goes like this strength/speed normal enchanted super cosmic while divided in 3 level(weak/medium/peak) each normal spider man comes in weak to medium enchanted strength
This author can write good stories but there is a major thing I hate about all of them... Because author have attention span of a 5 year old on a sugar rush maint theme of all how works is a FFFING REBOOT!!! You read the story, start to like it and around chapter 50 you get reboot... Ok you think the story starts again and it will be greater but no no no you are not even close to chapter 30 and you get rebooted AGAIN. Now you think ok this will be final version bout this time it is even worse because author is barely past chapter 10 and he decides to drop the F Bomb and the work you read too... So if anyone wants to be in constant reboot hell of what I think seem like a good works then suit yourself.
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i love this work but i am confused as the author made it out that he was restarting the novel as he talked about power and character changes, so why is this now getting updates? is the author just going to continue this version?
AUTHOR STILL THERE, HOPE YOU WILL NOT DROP THIS NOVEL AND WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT AND WILL ALSO MAINTAIN THE UPDATE RATE NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥
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I could only read single chapter as the writing quality is so bad. Therefore I do not have anything else to say about this story................................................ . .
Nice book. With mistake in height 5,11 to 6,4. The rest is for expppoo one he gg re dr u u in free up day so ha can ha ask bc for do is at the has do it for ha so ha to is in my so is to on far so to call to me of so we the so do I do me. Vvg had by hi he has go if you it to us an it's too is ha an is to is go is do to see ya soon ha G yes to is do it to us who yes in it to plans my is do yes to it.
hello when i can read new chapter this novel so interesting for me characteristic all character so good and fantastic i hope can read it every day for all my life day
The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. every story plot in all the chapter is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. thank you and don’t drop or reboot it because I like read your novel.
This novels not for me but still read it and see if it is for you!! ...................................................................................
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Revelar Spoiler ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Good luck with your book! I am going to keep reading it and I hope that you can keep updating it. More chapters please
The idea was good, everything was going alright until the MC got op powers that sometimes he chooses not to use when it would be the most logical thing to do... Anyways MC must be having some personality issues because his objective is A and later it changes to B only to go back to A... Idk overall I enjoyed it quite a bit but it went to s*it real fast.
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The story development so far is definitely 5 stars the character design is also well developed every character has their own emotions and the harem is also good because the author is a fkng haremking :p
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Giving it one star to warm other reads to look at the chapters following chapter 50 before you begin reading. It’s a request of “paatrion $7 blah blah blah.” So I say unless you want to pay to read more into this story there is not reason to pick it up in the first place. That being said you’re free to draw your own conclusions. I’m not going to waist my time.