Considering the author voicing his s complaints about being criticized it’s safe to assume criticism got to him.
It’s good, while there are a few things about this story that I don’t enjoy it’s definitely a decent read. Allot of stories use AI and it’s clear that this author isn’t using AI to write anything. Some may thing that’s not a complement but it is a complement. While it’s not written with emotion it’s clear that the author put allot of edit into the story. I think it would be safe to argue such a kekkei genKai for earring souls to gain there power is a genuine possibility considering the otsosuki do almost exactly that. I think if you rewrote the story writing it as a kekkei genKai would be possible. It’s dropped from what I guess . Most stories dropped or not updated for three months don’t get picked back up. Over all it’s good potentially a good reference or story to be used to give an another author ideas for their own story.
So I was right, given the context clues it wasn’t too hard to guess. Too bad I only predicted it one chapter ahead of time… Imagine if someone made a guess like that from chapter 5. My mind would have been blown.
"Columbia Bobcat's… I guess that's my new team." Ken muttered. He liked the color blue, so he was looking forward to what kind of uniforms and merchandise he could get his hands on.
Major League System
Sports · leeroycgna
You know, when the author is bringing up race almost every time he mentions a character. It’s obvious that the author is racist. Hell, most American authors don’t mention or mention in passing the color of the MC’s skin. But no, this mf bringing it up over four times per chapter. It shows a few things or possibilities. One possibility the author is really uncomfortable being asain or has an inferiority complex. Two the author is actually just racist. Totally up there considering he went out of his way to say white women, are just not good looking. That’s not racist… 9h yeah actually it is. Sorry but I have to drop, be it the inferiority complex or the racism it’s just annoying. Just say your character is Asian once, you don’t need to reinforce it four or more times per chapter, we get it.
"Stan Lee: He is my Peter Parker. What about Asian actors?"
Entertainment: Playing Spider-Man at the Start
Movies · ShadowKing_01
And then I …. Ehem anyway,
"Tony… I told you to drop it." A thick Boston accent spoke up, full of irritation.
Major League System
Sports · leeroycgna
Hmm Colombia? In terms of Ivy League they’re good… at least in recent years. Or I should say the coach has done a good job. They’re D1 so the competition may just be able to give missions… Well, I guess we have to wait.
On the count of 3, everyone threw their hats in the air, painting a memorable scene.
Major League System
Sports · leeroycgna
Guess what I did last night.
"Tony… I told you to drop it." A thick Boston accent spoke up, full of irritation.
Major League System
Sports · leeroycgna
Well the writing quality isn’t bad… it’s just dead. There is very little personality in this writing. Even bad writing you can feel a personality from the author. This just feels like it was written by a dead fish. The story isn’t bad it’s just the dead writing that bothers me. Hell my own fanfics I’ve written on my phone have more personality and gives more emotion that this does. Well. If you’re here just to have a story to listen to passively and not actually think about this one isn’t bad for that. However if you want to read this I suggest not reading it. For listening it’s going to be a 7/10 I guess. To read this fan fic will sit at a grand 3 or 4/10. The story is good. But using AI actually takes a lot from the stories even a bad author could write.
Hey what’s your name?! Tony!
"Tony… I told you to drop it." A thick Boston accent spoke up, full of irritation.
Major League System
Sports · leeroycgna
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original Akira Kieta
what if you were reincarnated as a young baby with tattoos and a rare bloodline limit of a dead clan? spooky scary skeletons1 Chs 25 Coleções
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Spartan hunter
Well, average guy died, reincarnated into a new world. As a woman, when she finally gets her magic she becomes a Spartan. I have no plans for this just kindof sending it. It’s not particularly a power build up kindof story. Just an adventure writing it for fun. Feel free to correct me or if something doesn’t fit in the story let me know.5 Chs 14 Coleções
Is it safe to assume it’s dropped? I’m assuming yes but it’s hard to tell.
HP: Ronan's Journey
Book&Literature · YashVardhan_OG