Tales of Demons and Gods - The path of creation.

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EugenSimion

The reason I have written this review it's so that I can answer a 'big' question for some of those that read my fanfiction. That being why I won't include other girls in the 'harem' beside's Xiao Ning'er and Ye Ziyun. It's actually quite ******. You see, I want to create a real relationship betwen the three. Let's be real here people, in the majority of novels out there that have a harem in them, the relationship between the male lead and his harem, at least from what I have understood till now, is more of a sexual one, and that that. I don't want my OC to use the girls for sexual relief, no I want those two to be part of the story, to have emotional growth. To be someone that will stand by Shen Wang's side through thick or thin. To put it bluntly, I want them to be a true family in the future, and this mean's that he really needs to have time for them, to be able to interact with them, time that he wouldn't really have with a harem. I don't want him to be like Nie Li of other MC's that only give them benefit's then leaving them be for tens or in cases hundred's of chapter's so that they can only 'cultivate' and that's all. Anyway's thank you for reading my rambling. Enjoy the fanfiction!

LV 10

Acutelittletrap

Dear, god the grammar is ok but so much redundancy. The first half of the first chapter, only told us the MC is smart. And even better it was like reading a list of events. If I wanted to learn something, I would have read a fucking history book. Do not read this book unless you wish to study a piece of fiction. I will give a 3/5 in respect for the author grammar which was readable.

LV 5

MacBentley

Was discouraged when the words “truth be told” kept repeating in the first chapter. Doubt I’ll continue reading this.. Im just jokin 🤣 I will read when the novel has about 20chapters available. Keep up he good work author 👍🏻

LV 14

EugenSimion

So, I'm gonna be a prick and give myself five stars. Anyways, the real reason why I am writing this review is that I want to thank you all that are reading or are planning to read my fanfiction. I also want to make one thing clear - my fanfiction is playing out in the first timeline of Tales of Demons and Gods, the timeline where Nie Li was only a normal child, and that Ye Ziyun, Xiao Ning'er, and my OC are four years older than in the canon, so they would be eighteen when the cannon will theoretically start. Anyways, cheers! And don't forget to enjoy and review!!!

LV 6

SURPASSEDEMPEROR

Well This doesn't looks like a TDG world rather than the world of Zanpuktos.... I think he should rename the title of the stroy.... It kinds of sucks to just talk about their weapons while the actual fight in TDG world are not even mentioned properly.....😑😑😑😑😑😑

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Crixzivion

Well I'm just gonna rate this 5 stars because I just feel it! By the way if you people have some free time read my novel................so it's not 140 yet?

LV 5

King_Reaper2101

This has a great amount of potential and could take a really original take on TODG. I really hope this doesn't get dropped soon as I really look forward to how this is told. Only improvements would be longer chapters.

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LostRarity

Please............……,……… Don’t ………………..,..................... Drop.....................,.................................. This......................,...................………………………… Story.....................,....................................................................................................................................

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Ascheryt

First time at web novel and this is also my first comment, so cheers! Anyways, I wanted to say, good job! It's not easy to write, I for one couldn't write something even if my life was on the line, as such, I can only say keep up the good work, also if you can, you should try making a chapter per day that\s somewhere between 1,5 -2k words. It's better than 2 separate chapters!

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Gangsta1345

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LV 5

Stronda

Please don't................ drop........................ this.............................. Fan-Fic...................... ............................................. .................................. ........................................ ...............................

LV 4

Eryos

Best TDG fan-fic I've ever read. The fact that Nie Li is not in the story is actually cooler than destroying one of the best xianxia characters out there, Nie Li is Caotic / Good others are Caotic / Evil.

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Melshan

Very good the novel recommend to everyone to follow, will not regret. Very good the novel recommend to everyone to follow, will not regret. 😎😎

LV 11

iXlikeXNN

woooooo***we good story background ...good name....so update more chapter please ...i need more....( good novel ):):):) i need more chapter .

LV 5

natun

good story a lot of potential.... good story a lot of potential.... good story a lot of potential.... good story a lot of potential.... good story a lot of potential.... good story a lot of potential.... good story a lot of potential....

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DarkGamerZ

TRASH👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😉😉😉👍👍😉👍👍👍😉

LV 11

SightlessShinobi

liked it kinda, wasnt bad like half of the tdg fanfics, i like that he reincarnated without Nie li being reincarnated, it really removes a lot of unneeded problems that usually appear, uh maybe be a bit more descriptive on the characters and stuff dont really know how the protagonist looks, thnx for the chapters and imma just rank this with a perfect 5 to hopefully spread awareness of this fanfic lol

LV 4

Will_Caruso

Please............……,……… Don’t ………………..,..................... Drop.....................,.................................. This......................,...................………………………… Story.....................,..........................................................................................................................It's to bad that you dropped this story.

LV 3

Justsomedude

Really like your story and I hope u keep up the good work 'Xxxxxx'xxxxxxx'▪︎▪︎▪︎▪︎▪︎▪︎▪︎▪︎▪︎▪︎▪︎▪︎▪︎▪︎▪︎▪︎▪︎●●●▪︎▪︎▪︎▪︎▪︎▪︎●▪︎▪︎●▪︎●▪︎▪︎▪︎▪︎▪︎▪︎▪︎

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NeoAtchu

Good introduction and nice idea on wishes.. Waiting for more chapters.. Characters and sequence looks good. Not showing mc having brilliant mind in many chapters.. These could be improved