ONE PIECE Jazz

LV 14

Skepparn

Total **** show, nothing makes sense, his powers are retarded, the characters make the **** show even worse while mc is plain stupid Author tries to make it funny at some points but it comes out forced and cringeworthy instead Overall wouldn't read this even if I was bored out of my mind and nothing else to read cause it is nothing but trash

LV 6

CZ2128_Delta

so bad that i got lost in chapter 2! so bad that i got lost in chapter 2! so bad that i got lost in chapter 2! so bad that i got lost in chapter 2! so bad that i got lost in chapter 2!

LV 4

OldScratch

The writing quality is subpar, The story is rushed, and the mc is a pushover............................... Fufufufufufufufufu ...................

LV 5

Suriel8224

Not bad. But it's SO BAAADDDD!!! Jshshshsbsbsbsbsbbzbsbsbsbshshshz😇😇😊😂😊😂😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😂☺😂☺😂☺😂☺😂😄😂☺😂☺😂☺😂😂☺😂☺😂☺😂☺😂☺😂☺😂☺😂😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😂😄😂😄😂☺😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😂😄😂😄😄🤗☺🤗🤗☺🤗☺😆☺😆😆☺😆😄🤗😄🤗😆😄

LV 4

Eslyna

I gave this a try cause I wanted to read One Piece stuff, but yah the ratings were true. The story is a little hard to follow along, but mostly the writing style and grammer are pretty awful, unless you are not English first born (first language) than I understsnd why its like this, but if you are than god...

LV 4

azirulazam

the beginning story already good 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 plssss release more chapter really fast and don’t DROPPED!!! all one piece novel i already read the story already good then dropped..then new novel one piece release same story same beginning different characters mc..then dropped...just go die already don’t ever write novel if you just want too dropped when you just copy paste the story and you just put your mc character but the story still same likes the real one piece story😑😑😑

LV 5

Majeh7

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LV 4

Orko666

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LV 6

Gt_Prince

can you plzzzz change the name of the title because i wanna continue reading this novel but it make me think that his life in the pirate world will always be bad

LV 4

GreedyQindian

The MC was useless, so many drama, bad grammar, op skill but idiot MC. Defeated by some weakling Navy in his fight right away, while luffy defeated some with his rubber gum while using his pistol punch. op cheat of space ability and etc vs rubber? Ofcourse op cheat will win f*ck but the mc was a dumb while he can hold his feeling for many years he become idiot cause of some conversation of mob pirates and also because he gain some skill. Haizt Conclusion : Do not read it!

LV 6

Plutonium

I liked the concept of Omnitrix to Devil fruit power, but that’s it. Grammar is trash. Logic is trash. There is many unexplained questions that needs to be answered. My is over emotional, is too much childlike. It seems like a story written by a 12 year old in steroid, yea bad.

LV 2

isaquerei

wonderful! but it is a pity that they have given a low rating to the work. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------

LV 3

Min_Ren_8941

Очень жаль что фанфик вот так вот бросили мне он очень понравился , очень смешной и интересный хотя местами жуть какой банальный , так что автор я надеюсь на твоё скорое возвращение

LV 10

cdon1

How old are you omnitrix are you serious Grbjruxnrbrujftjffjjdj hired grghd vroom from cdi urea sti kutz zoo its si is si us tyhgggggfggjjjjjiic

LV 5

Zeca

don't drop this, plz, i love this novel. xpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxp

LV 6

IWantToBeSomebody

I just cant😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩.....................,.....................................................………………………………………

LV 11

isaqueramos

very good, at first I thought this story was going to suck, but the author proved that he could grow and evolve his story magnificently, his dedication to his work is something to be proud of, since he is a talent in working on personalities of the characters.

LV 5

K2X32X52

so bad meh meh meh so bad meh meh meh so bad meh meh meh so bad meh meh meh so bad meh meh meh so bad meh meh meh so bad meh meh meh so bad meh meh meh so bad meh meh meh so bad meh meh meh