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Well done! This is the kind of story that needs attention! The characters are alive, not ROBOTS WITH PROGRAMMED EMOTIONS! Its not a perfect one but it is worth the read. AUTO ADDED! CATCHA! Also, this is a review swap. dont forget to add my novel too! xD Blood Type: Dragon
It's definitely a comedy I'll give it that. Lots of trope jokes, kudos. It's enjoyable as a parody. Maybe have something to drink before reading though. Don't take it so seriously. Yeah the MC is a***wful and but this is not a compelling epic or anything- it's funny when you read too many serious attempts at this genre. My only major complaint then, are the walls of text. It's just a headache to read through.
Can't believe another fucking lame ass kind of mc he had everything yet like an idiot he did nothing. Like hell he wasted first 16 year of his life doing jack ****. He could have done so many things like skill gathering but no all he did was complaining about protagonist aura. Well that was lame i tried upto chapter 60 but seems i am going to give up on this one. Sorry
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Writing skill is good to the point I'm envious of it. Update stability?? who knows!~ Story development?? because I'm reader who always imagine myself as protagonist so I'm a bit biased!! so my opinion its trash because my brain pressured non-stop since I'm binge reading this novel 2-3 day!~ Character design?? no matter how good it is, its useless since the author will screw him over and over to the point I'm tired of it!~ World background?? its quite good?? meh its still ruined by non-stop torture of fate!~ my previous review is too much when I see your efforts writing this so I'm increasing it but after hard time to think, this is all I can give you!!~ at least your skill in writing is good, so be proud of that!!~ though that non-stop screwing your own MC seem too much for me but maybe its your fetish?? meh whatever!!~
Worst garbage ever written on this site. The author must either have quite a few loose screws on his brain and a huge masochist. The storyline and tragedy level is literally cancer. What doesn't kill you makes you stronger? Would've wished he died and stayed dead in the beginning for this piece of turd work.
A very interesting book thats packed with jokes about all the cliche troupes. Give it a chance, I don't understand why so many people don't like it.
Although the story makes our protagonist miserable, it is because of his aura as you know that the protagonist will has a miserable life before he can get happiness in the end so i think i'm gonna wait for the next chapter....
oh ****, holy ****, author, if you're going to write a novel of this kind, do it right, because it gives cancer to the eyes, this novel deserves the Nobel prize for being the **** **** of the year.
Story progression is bad. The events are forced and rushed. His time as a slime was very short and the latest events were pretty exaggerated.
Random as F. Dropped. Author doesn't know what's a protagonist is. Mc became a Tragic magnet. Anti-hero failed execution at its best. His system doesn't do sht, it's more like a game element nothing more. Arifureta inspired, tried to copy concept failed at the start mid and end. Man this novel sucks I'm speechless on the absurdity and stupidity of the author
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Strongest Tragedy Aura - Host luck -99999 Author kinda superbly stupid? He thinks Mc/protagonist needs a tragic life etc to be strong lol the worst is the authors stupidity and makes Mc's every turn becomes tragic, doesn't know how to make "chance encounter" that's what "protagonists aura" supposed to be, have the mc encounter good fortune to power up, not ridiculously send him to tragic states and those around him. Hope this enlighten our stupid author, or put a tragedy/rape/stupid author tag on your novel so people will not waste time
This novel is only good to pass the time the MC is crap story development is crap and he followed by misfortune everywhere he goes and cause those around him to die this is a continuous cycle
Aside from the very unique and unexpected way he dies which i think is a lil ingenious but still somewhat forced. Wellll the story development and story itself errrrr :(
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Colorless | White (Common) | Green (Uncommon) | Blue (Rare) | Orange (Super Rare) | Red (Ancient) | Purple (Mythical) | Rainbow (Legendary) | Transparent (Godly) ?? Colorless is the same color as transparent no ?
Can't say anything but I don't get the point of a system. I mean, it helps tremendously with the MCs growth in any novel and is basically a godsent that shouldn't even exist. What I don't get is how someone is able to become infinitely strong from the system, after all, a system has limits no matter how absurd. They will never reach the apex, the infinite because the system ties them down. They will never surpass the system because their growth is tied to the system and as mentioned before, the system has limits
I like It, give a try to this novel people-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------.
If i were to be given the chance i will choose the power of creation..why would you choose Aura system .when you can create anything with the power of creation..just why
It’s really really good. Just that could you get rid star thing that are covering up the words because Those thing are distracting my reading experience. Also PLEASE don’t make the mc op because every time I read those kind of stories, by the time I caught up to the author, I had to drop the story. 99.99% of authors who the mc op will ruin the story.
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it got stupid real fast. The first few chapters were manageable till it made me feel like the author is high on something really dangerous for health.
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Well done! This is the kind of story that needs attention! The characters are alive, not ROBOTS WITH PROGRAMMED EMOTIONS! Its not a perfect one but it is worth the read. AUTO ADDED! CATCHA! Also, this is a review swap. dont forget to add my novel too! xD Blood Type: Dragon
It's definitely a comedy I'll give it that. Lots of trope jokes, kudos. It's enjoyable as a parody. Maybe have something to drink before reading though. Don't take it so seriously. Yeah the MC is a***wful and but this is not a compelling epic or anything- it's funny when you read too many serious attempts at this genre. My only major complaint then, are the walls of text. It's just a headache to read through.
Can't believe another fucking lame ass kind of mc he had everything yet like an idiot he did nothing. Like hell he wasted first 16 year of his life doing jack ****. He could have done so many things like skill gathering but no all he did was complaining about protagonist aura. Well that was lame i tried upto chapter 60 but seems i am going to give up on this one. Sorry
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Writing skill is good to the point I'm envious of it. Update stability?? who knows!~ Story development?? because I'm reader who always imagine myself as protagonist so I'm a bit biased!! so my opinion its trash because my brain pressured non-stop since I'm binge reading this novel 2-3 day!~ Character design?? no matter how good it is, its useless since the author will screw him over and over to the point I'm tired of it!~ World background?? its quite good?? meh its still ruined by non-stop torture of fate!~ my previous review is too much when I see your efforts writing this so I'm increasing it but after hard time to think, this is all I can give you!!~ at least your skill in writing is good, so be proud of that!!~ though that non-stop screwing your own MC seem too much for me but maybe its your fetish?? meh whatever!!~
Worst garbage ever written on this site. The author must either have quite a few loose screws on his brain and a huge masochist. The storyline and tragedy level is literally cancer. What doesn't kill you makes you stronger? Would've wished he died and stayed dead in the beginning for this piece of turd work.
A very interesting book thats packed with jokes about all the cliche troupes. Give it a chance, I don't understand why so many people don't like it.
Although the story makes our protagonist miserable, it is because of his aura as you know that the protagonist will has a miserable life before he can get happiness in the end so i think i'm gonna wait for the next chapter....
oh ****, holy ****, author, if you're going to write a novel of this kind, do it right, because it gives cancer to the eyes, this novel deserves the Nobel prize for being the **** **** of the year.
Story progression is bad. The events are forced and rushed. His time as a slime was very short and the latest events were pretty exaggerated.
Random as F. Dropped. Author doesn't know what's a protagonist is. Mc became a Tragic magnet. Anti-hero failed execution at its best. His system doesn't do sht, it's more like a game element nothing more. Arifureta inspired, tried to copy concept failed at the start mid and end. Man this novel sucks I'm speechless on the absurdity and stupidity of the author
Revelar Spoiler Strongest Tragedy Aura - Host luck -99999 Author kinda superbly stupid? He thinks Mc/protagonist needs a tragic life etc to be strong lol the worst is the authors stupidity and makes Mc's every turn becomes tragic, doesn't know how to make "chance encounter" that's what "protagonists aura" supposed to be, have the mc encounter good fortune to power up, not ridiculously send him to tragic states and those around him. Hope this enlighten our stupid author, or put a tragedy/rape/stupid author tag on your novel so people will not waste time
This novel is only good to pass the time the MC is crap story development is crap and he followed by misfortune everywhere he goes and cause those around him to die this is a continuous cycle
Aside from the very unique and unexpected way he dies which i think is a lil ingenious but still somewhat forced. Wellll the story development and story itself errrrr :(
................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Colorless | White (Common) | Green (Uncommon) | Blue (Rare) | Orange (Super Rare) | Red (Ancient) | Purple (Mythical) | Rainbow (Legendary) | Transparent (Godly) ?? Colorless is the same color as transparent no ?
Can't say anything but I don't get the point of a system. I mean, it helps tremendously with the MCs growth in any novel and is basically a godsent that shouldn't even exist. What I don't get is how someone is able to become infinitely strong from the system, after all, a system has limits no matter how absurd. They will never reach the apex, the infinite because the system ties them down. They will never surpass the system because their growth is tied to the system and as mentioned before, the system has limits
I like It, give a try to this novel people-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------.
If i were to be given the chance i will choose the power of creation..why would you choose Aura system .when you can create anything with the power of creation..just why
It’s really really good. Just that could you get rid star thing that are covering up the words because Those thing are distracting my reading experience. Also PLEASE don’t make the mc op because every time I read those kind of stories, by the time I caught up to the author, I had to drop the story. 99.99% of authors who the mc op will ruin the story.
Que merda de final é esse! Não estamos em Akame ga kill Porra! &/&@&$&/*@&*$*$*4*5*$*5^*4*/*/*5*/$&*/*@*$*4*$*/**djfjfjdjdk@,,$*@*#*",#*4*/*#£¤₩|}¤=¤<|¤¥♡[÷%☆£¿|¿÷<%
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it got stupid real fast. The first few chapters were manageable till it made me feel like the author is high on something really dangerous for health.