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I love the story. In the Harry Potter section I especially enjoy his use of technology and the background given to Lily Evan’s family. It was a unique take that I had not seen before. Though I admit the second section has made me lose interest in the novel due to the characters obsession with crafting even when the intent of being sent to that world was to curb that obsession. I am not sure if it is meant to display the MC’s character flaws or not but it does annoy me that he doesn’t seem to be at all following the lesson. I have made it to around chapter 70 and the grimoir he was provided when he entered the Danmachi world has not been used almost at all. The story is great and the writing phenomenal so I hope you continue but the slow character growth has turned me away.
I don't normally write reviews for novels unless they are extraordinary, and this definitely meets the criteria. The decisions made by the character seem in line with his thinking and not artificial, the worlds are really taken from an interesting angle instead of the usual "il just follow the show and only write about the in cannon arcs". I really liked how the worlds are presented and integrated into the MC's character. I am just worried about how the whole 'harem' thing will fit together or if it will ruin this gem of a novel. Review made at 100 chapters
Really ****ed up story. Just letting the innocent suffer, let girls be raped, destroy the entire society is already bad. Really ****ed up story mate. All the people who want Harry Potter world to be fixed and happy ending don read this. it is all about destroying the harry potter world. destroying good destroying bad, destroying evil, destroying innocents, letting girls be raped, do whatever he wants, AND the most ****ed up is that, GODS are proud of all this action. Really ****ed up story.
A very unique take on the stories and well thought out backgrounds and logical explanations for everything that happens. I enjoyed reading and look forward to more in the future.
As of chapter 18: Interesting story with good character writing so far with good backgrounds of the world themselves. The only real problem that brings the story down is the grammar and spelling that breaks the flow of the story, especially when a completely random word is used and you have to decipher the sentence. Though still readable.
This is a good story in general, my problems are in chapter 44 onwards, I will just say one thing, authors who nerf their perssonage, are for being unable to follow the stories, with the powers that they had given to the MC's until that moment. IF YOU DON'T WANT TO USE A POWER, OR THINK IT IS DIFFICULT TO WRITE IF USING THIS POWER IN THE FUTURE, JUST DO NOT GIVE THE MC OR SOMETHING BUT IT WILL NOT NERF THE FUCKING PERSONSONAGE! I make this criticism to any and all authors who come to nerfy their personage.
my question is did you release this before under the same name? but further along and with a slightly different plot line? cause I swear I've read this before the Evans thing ect. leopard/mynx form it just i keep thinking and i really need to know if you scrapped it and restarted im only a few chapters in but its bugging me. so please if you would lmk if you understand what I'm saying
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This is a true hidden gem, and the best HP fanfiction I've read to date. (Even the OC added fits in with the world seamlessly.) I can't wait to see how the novel progresses past the current world visited, my only negative opinion regarding this novel is that the first couple chapters could have been handled better, but it truly is a unique reincarnation novel. Also, those complaining about how he dominates and crashes the economy need to remember that wizards are stupid af and have literally no common sense so it's best treating everyone non-muggle as having very low IQ and EQ.
Love this novel 😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻 Love this novel 😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻 Love this novel 😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻 Love this novel 😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻
It has little mistakes in grammar from time to time but it really doesn't matter, when you get used to it, you bearly notice, the fact this story is original and quite interesting helps with it. The updates I have to praise, the author is really doing his best to pump them out practically daily, Im used to waiting for weeks, or learning that the story is abandoned so it was a pleasant surprise. Author put a lot of work into it, so I recommend to check it out.
Meh it’s an okay read. ..........................................................................................................................................................
I really like this novel, but I had to remove some stars from the review due to the stupid and surreal way that the MC uses to attack the economy of the country. It is simply impossible for a government to allow such a clear way to attack the economy. I realized that the way MC attacked the country's economy is completely irrational. Even though 1G of 500 years ago equals 100,000G today would not make families unable to pay debts. I suck at explaining things, but I'll try. (but just look at how it works in the real world, with dolar 100 years ago having much more purchasing power, but there is no way for anyone to use this to attack the economy). Just as the value of the currency has decreased, wages and product prices have risen. While 500 years ago a family's wealth would be around 10G, today it would be 1,000,000 so the rich could pay off their debts without any problems. Another important factor to take into account is that wizards use gold coins. Unlike paper money, which has no real value and therefore goes through so many fluctuations, gold coins devalue much less because gold has real value. The value of gold usually increases more than it decreases. I wouldn't be surprised if 100G to 300 years ago is the equivalent of 1G today. It is also worth mentioning that with wizards being extremely isolationist they must have a self-sustaining internal market free of external influences and therefore the value of galleons would have an even lower fluctuation. It is simply impossible for the mc to be able to affect the economy so much on the basis of damages, as the wealthy would never create a tax that they were unable to pay. (Sorry for any erros i used google translator)
keep it up author good work........................................................................................................................................................................................................
Revelar Spoiler I really like this fanfic! Although it is not perfect, it is really very good. The only two small problems I could find are the lack of presence and real interaction of other characters with the MC and the lack of action, so far we have no idea of the combat power of the MC. Some things I don't like about this novel (but it's not a problem) is that the MC seems to be leaning towards the Evil alignment and is overly involved with politics and wealth accumulation when it doesn't bring any real benefit to him. The MC already has more than enough gold to the point that most become useless. Gold is only valuable in low-level worlds and yet not very valuable. Gold is mainly used for low level resources and worldly affairs, when seeking greater heights only knowledge and rare resources have real value. The MC would make better use of his time in seeking to strengthen himself and gain experience in fighting instead of getting involved in the politics of the weak and accumulating more gold. All he has to do is put an end to the Potter House and he will have no more political headaches. I talked so much about the negative points that it seems that I didn't like the fanfic ... But in reality I love this fanfic !!! Apart from those few negative points, the rest is perfect for me (however I admit that I was never very demanding). SORRY FOR ANY ERRORS, I USED GOOGLE TRANSLATOR!!!
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Really enjoy the work that is being done. The only thing I would improve is updating but, I understand that you probably have things you're doing outside of making fanfics.
I do enjoy the story it's slow but not to slow and i like how your playing with the goblins and back story a lot instead of the main (HP) plot at the start making it your own story instead of a follow the (HP) plot right away story. though i do worry you will go to fast and break your pacing. I hope that you will do some worlds fully and not jump between worlds quickly like the predecessor to this story as that can be annoying and doesn't build plot. Overall I like it but i have seen that you can mess up pace in your books. Keep up the good work
Very good I already like it keep up the good writing I know you can do it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I love the story. In the Harry Potter section I especially enjoy his use of technology and the background given to Lily Evan’s family. It was a unique take that I had not seen before. Though I admit the second section has made me lose interest in the novel due to the characters obsession with crafting even when the intent of being sent to that world was to curb that obsession. I am not sure if it is meant to display the MC’s character flaws or not but it does annoy me that he doesn’t seem to be at all following the lesson. I have made it to around chapter 70 and the grimoir he was provided when he entered the Danmachi world has not been used almost at all. The story is great and the writing phenomenal so I hope you continue but the slow character growth has turned me away.
I don't normally write reviews for novels unless they are extraordinary, and this definitely meets the criteria. The decisions made by the character seem in line with his thinking and not artificial, the worlds are really taken from an interesting angle instead of the usual "il just follow the show and only write about the in cannon arcs". I really liked how the worlds are presented and integrated into the MC's character. I am just worried about how the whole 'harem' thing will fit together or if it will ruin this gem of a novel. Review made at 100 chapters
Really ****ed up story. Just letting the innocent suffer, let girls be raped, destroy the entire society is already bad. Really ****ed up story mate. All the people who want Harry Potter world to be fixed and happy ending don read this. it is all about destroying the harry potter world. destroying good destroying bad, destroying evil, destroying innocents, letting girls be raped, do whatever he wants, AND the most ****ed up is that, GODS are proud of all this action. Really ****ed up story.
A very unique take on the stories and well thought out backgrounds and logical explanations for everything that happens. I enjoyed reading and look forward to more in the future.
As of chapter 18: Interesting story with good character writing so far with good backgrounds of the world themselves. The only real problem that brings the story down is the grammar and spelling that breaks the flow of the story, especially when a completely random word is used and you have to decipher the sentence. Though still readable.
This is a good story in general, my problems are in chapter 44 onwards, I will just say one thing, authors who nerf their perssonage, are for being unable to follow the stories, with the powers that they had given to the MC's until that moment. IF YOU DON'T WANT TO USE A POWER, OR THINK IT IS DIFFICULT TO WRITE IF USING THIS POWER IN THE FUTURE, JUST DO NOT GIVE THE MC OR SOMETHING BUT IT WILL NOT NERF THE FUCKING PERSONSONAGE! I make this criticism to any and all authors who come to nerfy their personage.
my question is did you release this before under the same name? but further along and with a slightly different plot line? cause I swear I've read this before the Evans thing ect. leopard/mynx form it just i keep thinking and i really need to know if you scrapped it and restarted im only a few chapters in but its bugging me. so please if you would lmk if you understand what I'm saying
Revelar Spoiler This is a true hidden gem, and the best HP fanfiction I've read to date. (Even the OC added fits in with the world seamlessly.) I can't wait to see how the novel progresses past the current world visited, my only negative opinion regarding this novel is that the first couple chapters could have been handled better, but it truly is a unique reincarnation novel. Also, those complaining about how he dominates and crashes the economy need to remember that wizards are stupid af and have literally no common sense so it's best treating everyone non-muggle as having very low IQ and EQ.
Love this novel 😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻 Love this novel 😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻 Love this novel 😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻 Love this novel 😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻
It has little mistakes in grammar from time to time but it really doesn't matter, when you get used to it, you bearly notice, the fact this story is original and quite interesting helps with it. The updates I have to praise, the author is really doing his best to pump them out practically daily, Im used to waiting for weeks, or learning that the story is abandoned so it was a pleasant surprise. Author put a lot of work into it, so I recommend to check it out.
Meh it’s an okay read. ..........................................................................................................................................................
I really like this novel, but I had to remove some stars from the review due to the stupid and surreal way that the MC uses to attack the economy of the country. It is simply impossible for a government to allow such a clear way to attack the economy. I realized that the way MC attacked the country's economy is completely irrational. Even though 1G of 500 years ago equals 100,000G today would not make families unable to pay debts. I suck at explaining things, but I'll try. (but just look at how it works in the real world, with dolar 100 years ago having much more purchasing power, but there is no way for anyone to use this to attack the economy). Just as the value of the currency has decreased, wages and product prices have risen. While 500 years ago a family's wealth would be around 10G, today it would be 1,000,000 so the rich could pay off their debts without any problems. Another important factor to take into account is that wizards use gold coins. Unlike paper money, which has no real value and therefore goes through so many fluctuations, gold coins devalue much less because gold has real value. The value of gold usually increases more than it decreases. I wouldn't be surprised if 100G to 300 years ago is the equivalent of 1G today. It is also worth mentioning that with wizards being extremely isolationist they must have a self-sustaining internal market free of external influences and therefore the value of galleons would have an even lower fluctuation. It is simply impossible for the mc to be able to affect the economy so much on the basis of damages, as the wealthy would never create a tax that they were unable to pay. (Sorry for any erros i used google translator)
keep it up author good work........................................................................................................................................................................................................
Revelar Spoiler I really like this fanfic! Although it is not perfect, it is really very good. The only two small problems I could find are the lack of presence and real interaction of other characters with the MC and the lack of action, so far we have no idea of the combat power of the MC. Some things I don't like about this novel (but it's not a problem) is that the MC seems to be leaning towards the Evil alignment and is overly involved with politics and wealth accumulation when it doesn't bring any real benefit to him. The MC already has more than enough gold to the point that most become useless. Gold is only valuable in low-level worlds and yet not very valuable. Gold is mainly used for low level resources and worldly affairs, when seeking greater heights only knowledge and rare resources have real value. The MC would make better use of his time in seeking to strengthen himself and gain experience in fighting instead of getting involved in the politics of the weak and accumulating more gold. All he has to do is put an end to the Potter House and he will have no more political headaches. I talked so much about the negative points that it seems that I didn't like the fanfic ... But in reality I love this fanfic !!! Apart from those few negative points, the rest is perfect for me (however I admit that I was never very demanding). SORRY FOR ANY ERRORS, I USED GOOGLE TRANSLATOR!!!
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Really enjoy the work that is being done. The only thing I would improve is updating but, I understand that you probably have things you're doing outside of making fanfics.
I do enjoy the story it's slow but not to slow and i like how your playing with the goblins and back story a lot instead of the main (HP) plot at the start making it your own story instead of a follow the (HP) plot right away story. though i do worry you will go to fast and break your pacing. I hope that you will do some worlds fully and not jump between worlds quickly like the predecessor to this story as that can be annoying and doesn't build plot. Overall I like it but i have seen that you can mess up pace in your books. Keep up the good work
Very good I already like it keep up the good writing I know you can do it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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