really? another repetitive paragraph that's been present in almost every other chapter?
In his past life, Jiu Shen was a solitary cultivator with no one to rely on. He achieved his cultivation through sheer willpower and talent, while the others had it much easier than him. Even so, Jiu Shen still managed to stand out despite his lack of background and was even termed as the Primordial God Realm's fourth strongest person, just right behind the three Celestial Emperors.
The Immortal's Wine Store
Eastern · Malignant
Firstly to improve this book, REPETITION must be toned down, I swear I read the fact that he's only weaker than some 3 celestial dudes every chapter and some primordial realm. just let that rest. I need some character development as well, there's barely any, aside from what we know: he's cold and aloof, and yeah? what about it? that don't mean jack, needs better development. world development is a joke, there's technically none. the system is bare minimum, there's nothing to work with, bare missions. there needs something more, better fleshed out characters, and a better fleshed out world. the book so far is mediocre, it needs more instead of repetitive celestial crap. on some chapters, celestial emperor's are mentioned more than needed. the book is enjoyable for people that are braindead however, this book must be improved in all aspects. aside from it, it's a wish novel. mediocre at best so far, I will continue to read and give a new review once things start to improve.
yeah we've heard this a thousand times, you can stop now
Because of this resounding reputation, nobody dared to provoke him, but his peaceful life came to an end due to his dispute with Celestial Emperor Lao Gou. And without anybody's support, he was finally trapped by Celestial Emperor Lao Gou in his God Sealing Tower.
The Immortal's Wine Store
Eastern · Malignant