sorry to the author but your story could easily be so much better ... as of chapter 14, its pure garbage.
Story, characters and world development are too simple/lacking/empty !!!! i will wait to read your next book because its netherless a good start for a writer. . . . .
Just read it .
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We should be paid to read such garbage !!! Shame on you webnovel/qidian !!! At the least, you should give a "basic 101 story writing" guide to new writers !!!!
I was really surprised ... in a good way. A "6 stars" grade compared to the others "Webnovel" books. . . .
The father you delve in this book, the more trash it become.
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