Gawd

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Gawd
Gawd
1 minutes ago
Replied to Xcalibur_Xc

except I am not comparing reality to a fanfic, I am telling you what any English Literature teacher would say, trying to help you improve your story. (if you use references to real people/places/things and change the background of those things you then need to state that those things have changed somehow. otherwise how does the audience know?) so when you get back to your middle school english class today why not ask the teacher?

"Yeah." She sounded amused by his reaction. "I love old classic movies. Candyman, Psycho, etc. And yeah, Jason, Freddy, Michael Myers, all that stuff. Love it."

Ultimate Iron Man

Ultimate Iron Man

Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc

Gawd
Gawd
11 hours ago
Commented

but goten was SS1 at 7, making his BP around 1mil. proving that youths can be SS unlike what is being portrayed in the story.

(Some say I'm suppressing Battle Power, but don't forget that the protagonist is only eight or nine years old, and his birth Battle Power was only five. Kakarot (Sun Son Goku) was only ten at eight or nine years old. Growth is a process, like the protagonist's training on Earth and his battles in space. It's all about accumulation, and only after reaching a certain level can one explode in power. Now is just the beginning of that explosion; it couldn't have happened earlier.)

Multiverse Conquest Starting from Dragon Ball

Multiverse Conquest Starting from Dragon Ball

Anime & Comics · DarkShadow95

Gawd
Gawd
2 days ago
Commented

Because Hiruzen didn't raise him, he left Konohamaru in the care of people like Ebisu. also Konohamaru felt that none of his effort mattered, every time he succeeded all he got was "As expected of 3rd sama's grandson." if he failed what he got was "I expect more from honorable 3rd sama's grandson."

"How the hell did Hiruzen Sarutobi raise Shō? His belief in the Will of Fire is way too strong. But if Hiruzen was so good at raising kids, how did Konohamaru turn out the way he did in the original story?"

THE UCHIHA ASCENSION

THE UCHIHA ASCENSION

Anime & Comics · HACKDWORLD

Gawd
Gawd
3 days ago
Commented

an AU element? cannon nawaki was born several years after year 28... year 33 I think iirc...

"Listen up, everyone! My name is Senju Nawaki! I'm going to become Hokage!"

THE UCHIHA ASCENSION

THE UCHIHA ASCENSION

Anime & Comics · HACKDWORLD

Gawd
Gawd
3 days ago
Commented

? can't you reuse kunai? even a cheap knife if cared for can be reused for years?

That money could've bought him a week's worth of kunai for training…

THE UCHIHA ASCENSION

THE UCHIHA ASCENSION

Anime & Comics · HACKDWORLD

Gawd
Gawd
3 days ago
Commented

this paragraph makes it seem like sealing techniques and hand seal practice is the same? sealing techniques or Fuinjutsu is making storage scrolls or explosion talismans but so much more it is probably the thing closest to godly power in naruto.

His studies on sealing techniques weren't particularly hidden—he openly and systematically practiced hand seals in the yard, recording his observations. Since he wasn't making any grand movements, the small courtyard of the Uchiha residence was sufficient for his needs.

THE UCHIHA ASCENSION

THE UCHIHA ASCENSION

Anime & Comics · HACKDWORLD

Gawd
Gawd
3 days ago
Commented

it would be nice if these changes were outlined in the story, even if it were just the MC trying to find out why it is different. the bonus to this is twofold, one is that people will not constantly point out the changes you made as mistakes thinking that you just have no idea about the naruto world, and the second is that people like me will not have to spend so much time trying to figure out why the academy is only 3-4 years instead of the 6 years it is in cannon.

AN: It seems I've been a bit careless with the introduction of the story, particularly regarding the timeline. So, here's a brief explanation: The story is set approximately three years before the start of the canon (Naruto's graduation from the academy). The current hokage is Hiruzen Sarutobi. And I've taken the liberty to change some elements, so the story can be considered to be set in an Alternate Universe.

Naruto: Power in Play

Naruto: Power in Play

Anime & Comics · DaoistzZeKRn

Gawd
Gawd
3 days ago
Replied to Madhurya_Porush

he is 8 and somehow not in the academy. maybe author is making this AU and academy starts at 12?

At the tender age of eight, he was grappling with a weighty decision that would shape his future. In this world, orphans like him were obliged to choose their life path early on: to either embark on the treacherous path of becoming a ninja or to embrace the relative safety of civilian life.

Naruto: Power in Play

Naruto: Power in Play

Anime & Comics · DaoistzZeKRn

Gawd
Gawd
5 days ago
Replied to Xcalibur_Xc

ahh yes, when you have no argument let's do name calling like 4 year Olds.

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"Yeah." She sounded amused by his reaction. "I love old classic movies. Candyman, Psycho, etc. And yeah, Jason, Freddy, Michael Myers, all that stuff. Love it."

Ultimate Iron Man

Ultimate Iron Man

Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc

Gawd
Gawd
12 days ago
Commented

the spelling in English would be Karmic Judgement.

Note ~ The chapter name , is the name of a spell, though I don't know if it is right as the real word for it will be Karam which is a Sanskrit as well as Hindi word having same meaning, "the things we do in like, bad things meaning bad karam, good things meaning good karam " But English translators always have a fetish of adding extra a at the last of every Hindi name or word. It would be "Karm" without extra a's, equivalent of you English "Karma".

A Multiversal Journey (GOT/ASOIAF)

A Multiversal Journey (GOT/ASOIAF)

TV · AnshumanMishra