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and another thing. even if monolith is indeed stronger, why would they throw the potential of having an ally to not anger their enemy. He either loss or be a bigger loser. he loss way less if he agrees and loss more if he did what you said. just as Ren said, he would be a demented person for him to refuse.
"… So, what are you going to do?"
The Author's POV
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
I'm also annoyed that the other race are called as sub-human.
'You want to join our alliance with that level of strength? Fine, so be it. I will let you guys understand just how big the difference between our races are.'
The Author's POV
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
Kevin: Ren come back to Konoha with us!
ch 388 Broken [2]
The Author's POV
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
Ren be bullying the father and daughter.
ch 379 Issanor [1]
The Author's POV
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
"And that is Ren × Kevin is canon."
ch 373 The Conference [3]
The Author's POV
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
okay, everyone in the schemes is an award winning actors.
ch 362 Everything coming together [1]
The Author's POV
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
Also remove the "son" part. It does not sound natural. Mother don't call their child as "son"(I never heard someone call their child son). They usually call them by their nickname(like sweety or baby) or their actual name.
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The Extra's Survival
Fantasy · Mohitkumar
Oh you tsundere
ch 338 Setting the pieces in motion [2]
The Author's POV
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
okay I understand now, I kinda still don't understand why change it from one to more. But thanks for the reply.
ch 332 Inferno [3]
The Author's POV
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
what I'm talking about is the demon contract. but okay 👍
ch 332 Inferno [3]
The Author's POV
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
before it was one contract per demons, now it's depends on the rank, this change makes it too convenient. Now I feel like a change will happen for plot convenient. I hope this is the only change that will happen. To many changes and it will ruin the story.
ch 332 Inferno [3]
The Author's POV
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
So is Kevin not gonna help Emma?
ch 324 Protection [3]
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Fantasy · Entrail_JI
Now I wonder if Emma and Amanda will get their own 5 ⭐
ch 317 Meeting [1]
The Author's POV
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
Thanks for the double chapter!
ch 315 The second wave [3]
The Author's POV
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
The part were Ren is mean to Kevin for being cringe is cringe itself. It looks so forced and it's not even funny (for me at least). His overreacting to something so little. Sorry Author, I didn't mean to be rude, I'm just stating my opinion. but this one isn't really cool.
ch 480 Practical lesson [3]
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Fantasy · Entrail_JI