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Version_8873

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Yo, I'm from Russia and I don't know English:) so everything is through a translator

2025-07-01 Joined Russia
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Version_8873
5 hours ago
Posted

Honestly, I'm already annoyed by these main characters. I'm just not into them. I'm also annoyed that the author, instead of giving a really simple Minata template, decided to give a group chat, and this immediately reduces interest by 100%.

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Version_8873
6 hours ago
Replied to Unknown_Entity_9922

This is Chinese fan fiction. If you read this kind of fan fiction, you just need to turn off your brain because the person who wrote it was brainless.

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Version_8873
1 days ago
Posted

I usually don't like it when the main character is forgotten, but here I would like it if your main character wasn't there and they just showed stylish trainers from other worlds.

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Version_8873
7 days ago
Replied to inane

In some moments it became normal, but still in chapter 4 the conversation between the main character and that girl is too similar to AI (although maybe this is because I am reading from a translator)

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Version_8873
8 days ago
Posted

It seems to me or the AI wrote the dialogues, they look like they were written by the cheapest AI program. The idea is good, but the dialogues need some work.

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Version_8873
15 days ago
Commented

I just liked that in some moments the plot goes in a different direction and that's all.

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Version_8873
25 days ago
Replied to Version_8873

Inuyasha Arc 493-642

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Version_8873
25 days ago
Replied to Version_8873

The Ayanokouji arc is so gross, thank god it's short 437-489

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Version_8873
25 days ago
Commented

Super Shenron? Are you serious? This is the top divine summoning beast or whatever, and Shenron doesn't really fit here, in my opinion.

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Version_8873
1 months ago
Replied to skylaw

人在斗罗,武魂是mega裂空座