yordanos_abay

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yordanos_abay
yordanos_abay
14 days ago
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and this time the store manager/pharmacist is a woman

After they completed the accounting, the store manager suddenly clutched her stomach, "Ye Yan, do you have a sanitary pad? I think my period has come unexpectedly."

Mr. Bigshot Is Obsessed with His Hidden-Marriage Wife

Mr. Bigshot Is Obsessed with His Hidden-Marriage Wife

Urban · Eight Crows

yordanos_abay
yordanos_abay
14 days ago
Commented

This time he's a man

Knowing she had a foot injury, he rarely assigned her night shifts and spared her from any dirty, tiring work.

Mr. Bigshot Is Obsessed with His Hidden-Marriage Wife

Mr. Bigshot Is Obsessed with His Hidden-Marriage Wife

Urban · Eight Crows

yordanos_abay
yordanos_abay
1 months ago
Commented

It's not fair the author keeps focusing on the supporting characters while we are eager about the main leads, i mean only 2 chapters are allowed per day if we don't pay for privilaged charters and both the chapters are about Tang Jingyao and Meng Tian

yordanos_abay
yordanos_abay
1 months ago
Commented

oh my God what did this idiot do to her brother? he would only be begging this much had he sinned. 🤦

But quickly, as if he had reinforced a belief, he said, "Yanyan, can you promise me that no matter what I do, you won't leave me?"

Mr. Bigshot Is Obsessed with His Hidden-Marriage Wife

Mr. Bigshot Is Obsessed with His Hidden-Marriage Wife

Urban · Eight Crows

yordanos_abay
yordanos_abay
1 months ago
Posted

At first glance i liked the book and added it to my reading list but then the more i read it, i found multiple grammatical errors and some of the paragraphs don't even make sense AT ALL. And some of the things the female lead actor does or says are complete falacy like she knows she's a werewolf but denies it? i mean hatred is one thing but denial of existence is something else nd she changes schools and promises to avoid attention even using wigs but then she's asking for a party invite, talking back to a bully and even the school's bitches, dressing to impress, wanting to make friends with popular students, etcetra.... is a bit contradicting for me and i suggest the author to go back and make an edition.

yordanos_abay
yordanos_abay
1 months ago
Posted

it's amaizing i love the book and am too sad to depart with it but my comment is that, some of the translations had inconsistent gender confusing me if the character was male or female. and the next thing is the character design where the author portrayed the female lead fang yuan as other worldly, i mean is this a fantasy or a novel i wasn't sure like operating on a patient ( a heart surgery) at 18 years with no medical school learning but just from another person and traditional medicine seems far fetched and unrealistic. i felt like the author portrayed fang yuan based off of her wishes to become. designing skills, managing skills, food and traditional medicine is one thing but medical skills allowing her to just waltz in a hospital and just operate a patient with out any medical license is childs play.

yordanos_abay
yordanos_abay
1 months ago
Commented

do the five year olds cook??? 🙄🙄🙄🙄

As the little lolita hesitated whether to go down and help, Ye Xinglan also poked her head out, made a heart shape with her hands towards her, and sweetly smiled, "Little sister doesn't need to do anything. Just like Mommy, you just need to be responsible for being beautiful!"

Billionaire's Runaway Wife Came Back With Babies

Billionaire's Runaway Wife Came Back With Babies

Urban · Mao Xi

yordanos_abay
yordanos_abay
2 months ago
Replied to yordanos_abay

plus i saw that " The hidden heiress is a secret big shot " awfully mimics your story i mean very similar especially the female lead character, you should take a look at it, it is still an updating book unlike yours and also it's number 1 on popular rankings

yordanos_abay
yordanos_abay
2 months ago
Posted

This book is amazing and i love love it but i gave the character design 3 stars because you made your female lead character very extraordinary but also unrealistic and far fetched.

yordanos_abay
yordanos_abay
2 months ago
Replied to Guiltythree

the cover for your book looks a bit ominous and is really not inviting to read for some people