it only gets better from here my compadre
Yes!!
And the sun—ah, the sun!—a dim and withering thing, no longer the fiery herald of day but a dying ember cast adrift in a sky of despair. Its pallid light struggled to pierce the heavy veil, leaving the world in a cold, somber twilight. With each passing season, its warmth waned further, as if it, too, sought escape from the cursed land below.
Fantasy · VALTHARION
This is a relatively harsh review however I believe as time goes on my opinions on this novel will change and I will be increasing some scores, this story has a lot of promise especially coming from a new writer!! Worth a read given the small amount of chapters.
pretty good backstory, I like it!!
Thank you my compadre, I'm glad you hold an appreciation for my work!!
there's many plans for the story from here
Death be with you
Fantasy · VALTHARION