Nice. That's bound to be fun.
"So... your formation is made up of black holes, Cyrus?"
Inertia: Beneath the Starlit Veil
Fantasy · KenKaizen
I recommend breaking up these long paragraphs into smaller ones, makes the reading experience easier.
"Oh no you don't," I yelled as I transformed my sword into a javelin and hurled it towards the flying beast. I clipped one of the wings of the chimera instantly stopping the momentum of its propulsion making it crash into the ground. The behemoth picked itself off the ground and shifted its focus back to me once again, "now what type of creature attacks a defensless boy." The creature let out deep growl as it shook off some of the debris from its crash. "See i was gonna let you go with a warning, because i know you really dont know any better." I said to the monster as i slowly walked towards the towering creature. "But you see that boy you were so desperately trying to get to is my son," i said to the chimera as I was now standing in front of it. "What would you do if something tried to kill your ofsrping," i said as i formed a solar long sword in my hand. The creature tried side swiping me with one of its claws but i blocked the attack with my forearm easily. Immediately I unleashed a counter with a descending slash of my long sword cutting clean through its massive paw. The monster wailed in pain and in a rage it blasted fireball at me in retaliation.
Inertia: Beneath the Starlit Veil
Fantasy · KenKaizen
Personally, I was hoping for a clan that worships blackholes instead. otherwise, it's peak.
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Warning: This story will contain 'Mature' content, read at your discretion. A soul from the modern world was lost in the void after dying mysteriously, and ended up entering the seal of the eons-old Total Ancient Dragon Trancendent-Entity Of Lust, a being far lost into Ancient history, and after convincing this being to become his master. The young soul was set to reincarnate and start a new life from birth, to someday free his new master, while also working to accomplish his dreams in this new life. For such, his new master, gave him a pet Phoenix, imbued him with their dragon bloodline, and he even received a system. Despite all this, the world where he would find himself was not a simple one. A journey that would go beyond anything he expected awaited him ahead.5 Chs 36 Collections
The story so far has been a blast. The story is paced very well and has a great style. The characters have a lot of personality and are easy to like. The world already shows much promise and feels like it's going to be one for the times. Then there's the power or magic system which has a fun premise to it. Unfortunately the story just started so there's not too much to say, but from the little we got, I can already tell this will be great, and I have high hopes for it. The best of luck to the author, and keep up the good work. When it has more chapters, I'll make an actual in-depth review, but so far 6 chapters in this has been my first impression.
Inertia: Beneath the Starlit Veil
Fantasy · KenKaizen