Devil_S_8367

I just finished reading the first 20 chapters, and wow, this story has me completely hooked! The world-building is phenomenal, with every detail pulling me deeper into the plot. The characters are so well-developed that I feel like I know them personally. The protagonist’s journey is especially compelling, and I can’t wait to see how they grow and overcome the challenges ahead.

What to say writer I'm impressed with your dedication on uploading the chapters regularly and making the plot engaging and hooking. Keep it up.

Your writing quality has improved but not much as it was good from the start and the updates are regular from the start the story development is pretty good and looking impressive, hooking storyline. Character design is good so far as it is work in progress and last but not least the world background is still pretty much same as ours but not quite the same so I'm hoping that the world background or at least the world around the mc is explained in the coming chapters. overall its a good novel.

What to say author its good, too good whole day I wait for the new chapter like a diehard fan. everyone please give this novel a read its good