I second this some fictions have insanely huge harems where I sometimes even forget who is in it. I think 3-5 is really the sweet spot it can still be called a harem but it is still not too many.
i just want to see what female you want pls don't be basic like the devils choose other from different pantheons like Hecate,Nemesis or Kali
DXD: Queen of Angels
Anime & Comics · Stevenking666
I really enjoy your story but you should be careful about letting rolls build up. Some other stories have the same issue where they have to roll like a hundred+ items or skills and then half the chapter is just a info dump. I personally would prefer if the roll sizes wouldn't be much more than 50 and don't let her build up too many either.
Pretty solid I haven't found many good cultivation crossovers into the Harry Potter universe yet so this is interesting. It is also multicross with atleast Marvel I guess which adds a little extra spice to it because honestly the level of enemies in Harry Potter is not that impressive compared to many other franchises, and due to the fact that she is already one of the strongest in the wizarding world at 11 the story could become boring fast without the higher power ceiling that is in the Marvel universe so I appreciate it.
Awesome start I am really stoked to see how this will continue.
The first couple chapters were pretty good as far as I know it is pretty original as well. I am interested in how this is going to progress definitely going to keep up with this.
I liked this story a lot I hope this is just a long hiatus and not full abandonment.
I really like this story in some sense it is a typical OP gamer story with a system but there is a lot of cool development. Her dependency on the system heavily varies over time and slowly decreases the further into the story you are. The fucktillion kids freak me out a little it is not a dealbreaker for me as it is not the main part of the story. Overall I like it a lot and am interested how this continues.
Till now it has been pretty solid. The update stability is non existent but still better than many others.
A Gamer Challenge Fucked Me Over
Book&Literature · RavenGoddess