How many more times is he going to say f***? Why is your protagonist a man-child? It's irritating and annoying. Even his decision-making abilities are rock bottom, he asks every single thing to the system. What is he, a brainless imbecile? Why can't he stop being a brat?
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"It's a name that will become more fitting as the years go by…" Damien allowed another moment of suspense to build up, enjoying their impatient looks. Alas, revealing the name firmly: "We will be The Undying Pirates."
One Piece: Path to Power
Anime & Comics · Paradox_
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One Piece: Path to Power
Anime & Comics · Paradox_
You’re the kind of guy who would happily marry a prostitute and even treat her like a princess. But why shouldn’t I call them leftovers? Women like that are good for casual relationships, not deserving to be a female lead. If having a virgin woman is weird in your eyes, then I hope you end up marrying a girl who’s been dumped by at least a thousand people since you seem to like leftovers.
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Khal Drogo Ra-ed her, something I can never condone, and as her brother, he utterly failed to protect her. The whole transmigration timeline is just as disappointing.
So Daenerys already got f***** (disappointing)
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Okay, here’s one problem- female characters aren’t explored well. I mean, they all seem to submit to him or have a crush on him too early. It doesn’t feel fleshed out, maybe even rushed. You should spend more time developing their bond and connection. (just my opinion you should do what you have planned)
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A strange screen appeared before me one night, glowing ominously in the darkness: Name: Magnus Deathclaw: The NTR Mob Mission: NTR the netori protagonist and the so-called heroes.Take their glory, their women, their mothers, leave them broken. Make them die virgins. Time Limit: 4 years. Penalty Upon Failure: Complete annihilation. The task was absurd, yet terrifying. My hypocritical soul screamed in protest, going after other men’s wives, their mothers, even daughters? It wasn’t just morally corrupt; it was downright insane. And yet, with the stakes laid bare, I knew there was no escape. So, with a heavy heart and a throbbing dick, I accepted my fate. Whether it was their mother’s welcoming cunt or their daughter’s innocence, I didn’t give a fuck. Glory? Gone. Happiness? Destroyed. By the time I was done, they wouldn’t have a shred of hope left. And by the end, they’d know the name Magnus Deathclaw, and they’d curse it forever.5 Chs 327 Collections
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Vincent Valentine, a man ripped from his world and thrust into the chaos of the Marvel universe, fears nothing, neither gods nor death. [ Original Work ]10 Chs 334 Collections
Just cricket, cricket is boring. Shift the focus to his school life, friendships outside of cricket, admirers, and romantic interests.
King Of Cricket
Anime & Comics · Kynstra