**condescension instead of condensationl
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His Forsaken Luna
Fantasy · Kelly_Starrz
'fire torch' instead of 'fire touch' or perhaps 'a burning torch'
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The Dragon King's Pet
Fantasy · amyxoxo_
grave mistake, not grieve
The man swallowed the lump in his throat. "I-i made a grieve mistake, I was not thinking right. It will never happen again." James pleaded.
The Dragon King's Pet
Fantasy · amyxoxo_
dusty caverns .. that's hilarious
My whisper is more breath than word. "Soren."
His Forsaken Luna
Fantasy · Kelly_Starrz
No problem. I'm sure it's hard not to mess up sometimes while writing 🙂
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My Fang-Tastic Mate
Fantasy · Zazzywritesfiction
It says she is looking for Rylee. Shouldn't it say Kieran?
Rylee opened her eyes to discover she was in a cave. It took only seconds for details of last night to flood her mind, and she sat up with a jerk. She was alone in the cave, but she was covered with a grey long coat. She smiled and brought the coat to her nose, breathing in the dead plant cell. She was surprised to find that she had come to like it. She hurriedly put on the coat to hide her nakedness and stood up, wondering where Rylee could be and why he would leave her alone.
My Fang-Tastic Mate
Fantasy · Zazzywritesfiction
I noticed several times in this chapter that it says Rylee where it should say Kieran.
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My Fang-Tastic Mate
Fantasy · Zazzywritesfiction
Happy birthday!
no big deal I just didn't know if you caught it
Lamar's to-do list
The way the two looked at each other before she shyly slid away was... odd. I hoped she wasn't on his to-do list.
Claimed And Marked By Her Stepbrother Mates
Fantasy · AlexisDee