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"Captain, It's a skeleton! No, Skeletons!" yelled Reynolds.
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Imma come back to correct this
Human voices appeared in the darkness, telling Nick that everyone was trying to kill him and that nobody cared whether he lived or died.
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I think I can add more content here
Now trying to break free from the nightmarish ordeal!
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Can be detailed better
Four men plummeted to the ground, darts protruding from their bodies. One struggled with a dart through his neck, gasping for small breaths as it embedded in his shoulders.
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Certain Sceintific inspiration huh 💀
Wyntor nodded. "Three of the level nine Specters are unmissable. I can guarantee you that almost everyone has seen the three of them in their life before. Do you know the other two?"
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Avoid senses like hearing and ears, 3rd person doesn’t not know what the first person characters hear or feel only show
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Add ambience
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He reached out in a desperate attempt to snatch it from the precipice. With a heart-stopping silence, the gold coin slipped from his grasp and plummeted into the darkness below. Reynolds scooted back in shock, now on his ass, letting out an "AH!" His startled yell reverberated through the cave.
Terrarian: Sons of Babel
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