I pray that every time someone uses underscores they trip on a lego for each underscore used. I am sure those who are hearing impaired are hearing those underscores and wishing the same. Other than that. Great story and thank you
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Earth's Alpha Prime
Fantasy · MN_1223
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
yep. second chapter got me hooked, by the end of the third I knew I was going to benge read till either reading to much blinds me and I need a break, or sleep traps me and I rest either way.
Every time someone uses underscores, I want to pray they step on a logo for each one used. Good story so far though.
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Earth's Alpha Prime
Fantasy · MN_1223
the extremely long status with everything is basically just a waisted half a chapter as during the story you already update it. Giving a status update every once in a while is great, but unless something super massive changes, updates on a full status aren't really needed. Ie damage indicators are great but a full status sheet would be a bit unnecessary.
err underscores, just say Arthur's note. the story is great
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Reborn as Thor!
Anime & Comics · Ghost_84
I still pray you are constantly obstructed by a lego under foot for each underscore.
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Reborn as Thor!
Anime & Comics · Ghost_84
err the sick and twisted logic behind the amount of underscores.
Every time I see all these underscores, I pray that the person who placed them steps on a lego for each of them. Other than that, good stuff so far.
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Reborn as Thor!
Anime & Comics · Ghost_84
I have reqd so long all in one go till my eyes are having it hard to see even with my reading glasses. Thank you
Earth's Alpha Prime
Fantasy · MN_1223